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Banter added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago. Banter made 64 other changes.
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Tom nods and whacks Karen in the head with the leg and she gets knocked out.
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Dad
You know what to do.
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Tom
Shit.
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Karen
Ahh! Give me my leg back!
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They can all hear a crawl and they find Karen crawling slowly towards them.
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Dad
Where the hell did you get that leg from?
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Tom
This was all your fault!
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Timmy
I thought you lost your leg!
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Tom
What the?
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Next scene shows Tom and Timmy running to where their dad is. Only to find that their dad never lost his leg.
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Tom
I'm sorry dad to what's happened to you. I know I should've done better.
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Next scene shows Tom and Timmy running to their dad.
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Next scene shows Tom and Timmy running.
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Scene fades
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Karen
It was Tom and Timmy!
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Teacher
What happened?!
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Tom and Timmy escape the scene. Karen screams for help, teacher arrives.
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Tom and Timmy escape the scene
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Tom
Right let's run!
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Timmy
Who cares!
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Tom
What The hell?
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Tom
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They manage to cut Karen's leg off whilst she's struggling. They get surprised that the leg is white.
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Tom
Timmy! get the scissors!
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Timmy
Hi Karen
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Karen
What do you want?
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Tom
Hello Karen.
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Karen walks into an empty classroom and she gets confronted by Tom and Timmy.
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Scene fades.
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Timmy
Who cares? Let's wait till she's alone
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Tom
You sure? She's got a ghetto crew from the hood, you know.
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Tom
You sure about this.
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Tom
You sure about this.
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Timmy
I know! Let's take Karen's leg.
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Tom
Ok
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Timmy
I don't know. Try and think of a person that won't bring back-up.
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Timmy
I don't know. Let's try and find one.
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Tom
Right so who's leg was it again that you were going to steal?
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INT. Int. Classroom
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Scene fades
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Tom
I don't know.
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Timmy
Come on, it is our only option.
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Tom
We'll never be able to do that
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Timmy
How is it? It's our only option
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Tom
That is ridiculous.
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Timmy
Erm... What if we force someone to give their leg to him?
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Dad
It's alright, son. Just make it through life properly and don't waste your life like I did
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Timmy
Erm... What if we force someone to give their leg to him.
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Tom
Who do you think is going to give up their leg just to save a wasteman like him?
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Timmy
What if we get someone to transplant their leg to him?
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