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"The birth of a suicide bomber" Last edited by deejay, on 09/05/2007. 2 comments. More scene info.

EXT. GUIJINKI-DESPARTA REFUGEE CAMP — JABALYA, GAZA - DAY

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Rain falls like icy bullets. Fog rolls in from the bay, as if blanketing the camp in despair. From a broken-down shack near the rear of the camp, O.S. CRYING can be heard.

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INT. REFUGEE SHACK

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A little girl, ABIR SAKIR, is lonely, confused, and scared for her life.

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DISSOLVE TO:

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EXT. EXT. JABALYA, GAZA — DAY

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A panoramic view of the city, that ultimately centers on a two-storey Pueblo-esque home.

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INT. TWO-STOREY HOME — DAY

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Abir sits in the corner of the kitchen, brushing her doll's rugged hair. Her MOTHER simmers a chicken on the stove.

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INT. STUDY — DAY

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MOHAMMED punches buttons on a desktop calculator, then sighs in despair at the figures he sees.

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INT. UPSTAIRS BEDROOM — DAY

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A boy, AMIR, and a girl, KEIRA, play together. The boy is rambunctious, but the girl is quiet and reserved.

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Almost suddenly Abir's mother, Lydia, bursts in with a brown package. Smiling, she holds it before Abir.

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ABIR SAKIR

What are you holding, mother?

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LYDIA SAKIR

Why don't you open it and see!

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Perplexed, she grabs the package, ripping and tearing away at the wrapping. To her surprise, it was a new doll! It was the greatest doll Abir has ever seen!

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Lydia was such a loving mother to her children, though her money was scarce. She wasn't allowed to have a job. She always tried to get her kids what they want without father knowing about it. He's very strict and doesn't believe that children should have fun.

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"Fast forward to Abir's present" Last edited by deejay, on 09/06/2007. 3 comments. More scene info.

"Fast forward to Abir's present"

Abir is now a very attractive scientist living in Maine. Hidden deep within her exterior lie painful memories of her childhood - losing both parents to a botched military operation to catch Palestinian Suicide bombers. The Israeli armed forces merely deemed the massacre of her parents as a case of mistaken identity, sent her packing to a shelter, from where she run away, living in a refugee camp for many years. Officially, the Israeli government denies any memory of the Sakir family massacre episode. There is no case, no file and no record that proves the Sakir family ever existed.

However, for Abir, revenge is already underway to make the government and its allies pay dearly.

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"Abir under surveillance by ATAT" Last edited by deejay, on 09/06/2007. 1 comment. More scene info.

"Abir under surveillance by ATAT"

Abir is now under 24/7 surveillance by Jason and his men who hope to catch her off guard receiving any information, or any explosive material. However, they have no clue that the bomb they are searching for is a biochemical agent already delivered to her on a mall shelf hidden inside a can of CokeĀ®.

To avoid being detected, Jason goes undercover in the guise of a nuclear scientist who is infatuated with Abir and tries to befriend her. His pretense gradually turns to reality as he finds himself increasingly attracted to Abir, her lonely sad eyes; her luscious lips; her trauma was like his trauma; he never knew his father and his mother blamed him for him leaving; he was beaten and then grew up with his nan who is now deceased.

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