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INT. -end scene 1-
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Ashfaq hugs her and leave the house.
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saira
it's ok uncle.
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Ashfaq
i'm really sorry saira, i never thought i would be doing such a thing with my beloved friend Javed's daughter
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Ashfaq is really choked by stillness of Saira's eyes and starts weeping.
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saira
i know uncle, i'll pay you the entire amount within stipulated time.
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Saira knows that Shama regularly fights with Ashfaq and thus she interrupted him in between his statement.
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Ashfaq
i'm helpless saira, business is not going well and abdul is getting younger so i've got my chores to handle and you know how shama is... .
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Ashfaq
salaam valekum.
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saira
valekum salaam.
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Ashfaq
salaam valekum
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Ashfaq
i'm helpless saira, business is not going well and abdul is getting younger so i've got my chores to handle and you know how shama is...
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saira
but how can i? u know my condition.
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Ashfaq (CONT'D)
um i need you the pay me whole amount within fifteen days or you'll have to leave this house.
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saira
what decision? uncle.
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Ashfaq
um i need you the pay me whole amount within fifteen days or you'll have to leave this uncle.
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Ashfaq
as you are well aware that today is the last day of this month and i haven't received any rent from you for past six months, i've taken an important decision.
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saira
yes uncle, tell me.
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Saira knew this was coming so she settle herself for the thing that's about to come.
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Ashfaq
no no, it's not required; i'm here to talk something important.
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saira
i'll get ourselves some tea.
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Ashfaq
everything is great by grace of allah miya.
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Ashfaq
how you doing saira?
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saira
i'm good and how are you?
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Ashfaq
how you doin saira?
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saira
i'm gud and how are you?
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Ashfaq
hopw u doin saira?
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Ashfaq
salaam beta-jaan.
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saira
salaam, salaam ashfaq miya.
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Ashfaq
salaam betajaan.
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Saira kisses Salim on his lips and he smlied at her.Suddenly a knock at the door and Saira is shaken from her dream and she proceed towards the door and opens it. A man in his fifties is seen in the picture, he's having a thick beard on his face and he's wearing a maroon kurta-pyjama with a black half-jacket over it; he's chewing tobacco but he looks elegant in his attire. Saira is unhappy to see him.
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Suddenly she realised that Salim is no longer with her, her face is filled with agony and displeasure as she moved out of the kitchen then suddenly turn back and glance at the tap to make sure it's closed; this whole tap dripping scenario reminded her of incident from her past life. A young guy in his late twenties is seen in the picture, he's also dressed in typical muslim style with black kurta-pyjama and gurgabi in his feet.
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Saira kisses Salim on his lips and he smlied at her.Suddenly a knock at the door and Saira is shaken from her dream and she proceed towards the door and opens it. A man in his fifties is seen in the picture, he's having a long beard and he's wearing a maroon kurta-pyjama
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Saira came rushing into the kitchen as Saira watches her go-by.
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saira
no no, trust me;come tomorrow and this will be history.let's have dinner.
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Saira kisses Salim on his lips and he smlied at her.
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saira
no no, trust me;come tomorrow and this will be history.
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salim
you've been saying this for the past one month.
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saira
oh i'm extremely sorry salim, i'll get it fixed by tomorrow.
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salim
saira, saira; how many times do i've to tell you to get this tap repaired? it's unauspicious so please get it fixed begum.
intensewriter edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/28/2009 [view]
Suddenly she realised that Salim is no longer with her, her face is filled with agony and displeasure as she moved out of the kitchen then suddenly turn back and glance at the tap to make sure it's closed; this whole tap dripping scenario reminded her of incident from her past life
intensewriter added an action in "This is your first scene." on 12/28/2009 [view]
Suddenly she realised that Salim is no longer with her, her face is filled with agony and displeasure as she moved out of the kitchen then suddenly tuen back and glance at the tap to make sure it's closed
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saira
look, i've closed the tap salim; now you can't blame me...
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Sound of water dripping from a tap is heard as camera is focussed on the tap which is then followed by footsteps approaching the kitchen. A lady in early thirties is seen in the picture, she is dressed in typical muslim style with white salwar-kameez and chunni wrapped around her head, she quickly closes the tap.
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Sound of water dripping from a tap is heard as camera is focussed on the tap which is then followed by footsteps approaching the kitchen. A lady in early thirties is seen in the picture, she quickly closes the tap...
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INT. int. kitchen
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INT. tagline:"a journey full of ordeals"
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INT. written by: Rahul Ghai
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INT. Life of saira
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