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This is about a lil boy named Asey thats father leaves so he lives with his mom. The mom is aging and getting sick so asey is sent to live with his father.

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mcsherry439 added a comment to lil boy on 01/21/2013. more
I like the moral but the story needs to be fully developed. Sounds like a fairytale, Cinderella. Want more character development and authentic change. Feels a bit strained. 80
mcsherry439 added a comment to lil boy on 01/21/2013. more
I like the moral but the story needs to be fully developed. Sounds like a fairytale, Cinderella. Want more character development and authentic change. Feels a bit strained. 80
mcsherry439 joined the project! on 01/15/2013. more
Noof edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 01/15/2013. Noof made 47 other changes. more
ASEY LIVED WITH HIS MOTHER SINCE HE WAS BORN. HIS FATHER LEFT WHEN HE WAS 2 YEARS OLD. ASEY NEVER LISTENED TO HIS MOM. HE ALWAYS DISRESPECTED HER. HE IS NOW 13 YEARS OLD AND HAS TO GO LIVE WITH HIS FATHER BECAUSE HIS MOTHER IS SICK. MOTHER CALLS ASEY BECAUSE SHE WANTS TO TALK TO HIM.
Noof added an action in "This is your first scene." on 01/14/2013. Noof made 26 other changes. more
SO THE MOTHER LEAVES AND ASEY GETS INTRODUCED TO HIS STEP BROTHERS AND SISTERS AND MOHTER. THEY ALL SEEM NICE ASEY SAID TO HIMSELF. THE NEXT DAY ASEYS FATHER GOES TO WORK SO HE IS LEFT ALONE WITH THE STEPS.
 

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