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jeremyd999 deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/30/2012. jeremyd999 made 16 other changes.
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Hunter
(v.o.)
I can't figure it out.
jeremyd999 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/30/2012 [view]
Robert
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hunter
(v.o.)
How people do it, how they just live their medial lives with no complaints. Like they fucking enjoy it.
jeremyd999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/30/2012 [view]
hunter
(v.o.)
How people do it, how they just live their medial lives with no complaints. Like they fucking enjoy it.
jeremyd999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/30/2012 [view]
Robert
(v.o.)
...What?
jeremyd999 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/30/2012 [view]
Hunter
When I look at the world, and the people I just don't understand it.
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INT. black screen
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INT. ext. randy and michelle's driveway-day
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In Randy and Michelle's driveway Randy loads up some suitcases into the back of blue SUV. When the scene starts he is loading up the last pice of luggage. He closes the hatchback.
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INT. int. randy and michelle's kitchen-day
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CUT TO Randy's kitchen. Randy takes the coffee pot out of the coffee maker and pours it into a mug. He takes a big sip.
jeremyd999 deleted a transition in "This is your first scene." on 08/30/2012 [view]
jeremyd999 deleted a transition in "This is your first scene." on 08/30/2012 [view]
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INT. int. randy and michelle's bedroom-day
jeremyd999 deleted an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/30/2012 [view]
FADE IN into a wooden dresser in a bedroom. On the dresser is a lamp, a water bottle, scattered magazines, and a bulky black alarm clock. The main focus of this scene is the alarm clock. The alarm clock features big bright red letters. The time reads 5:57. The opening credits begin to appear in big white letters on the screen as the time on the clock changes. The time goes to 5:58 to 5:59 and finally to 6:00. When the clock flashes 6:00 an loud and ear piercing beeping noise begins to be heard. A hand comes and gently presses the snooze button on the alarm clock. The noise comes to a sudden stop. The camera zooms to reveal a man sitting up on the bed. He looks exhausted. His eyes have big bags underneath them. This is RANDY WILLIAMS. He has a grey T-shirt and plaid boxers on. Laying on the other side of the bed is MICHELLE WILLIAMS. We only see her back from this angle, but we can still tell she is beautiful. Randy rubs his eyes, and yawns. He gets up out of the bed and walks to the other side of the room where a closet is. He goes to the closet, opens the door, and pulls out a pair of blue jeans. He puts them on and then puts on a button down shirt. He walks to the bedroom door, opens it, and leaves. We catch a brief glimpse of Michelle who is still sleeping.
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