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jeremyd999 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/26/2012. jeremyd999 made 8 other changes.
jeremyd999 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/26/2012 [view]
FADE IN into a wooden dresser in a bedroom. On the dresser is a lamp, a water bottle, scattered magazines, and a bulky black alarm clock. The main focus of this scene is the alarm clock. The alarm clock features big bright red letters. The time reads 5:57. The opening credits begin to appear in big white letters on the screen as the time on the clock changes. The time goes to 5:58 to 5:59 and finally to 6:00. When the clock flashes 6:00 an loud and ear piercing beeping noise begins is heard. A large hand comes and gently presses the snooze button on the alarm clock.
jeremyd999 added a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 08/26/2012 [view]
INT. int. randy's bedroom-day
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jeremyd999 deleted an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/26/2012 [view]
The laug
jeremyd999 deleted an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/26/2012 [view]
CLOSE Up on a young girl named MARGARET lays in an old fashioned cast iron bed. She is ten years old and is a little chubby, but not overwhelmingly so. The camera changes to a HIGH ANGLE of the room. The room is adorned with wooden furniture, and other decorations. We can immediately tell she's a spoiled. A few seconds after we shift to HIGH ANGLE a caption appears on the screen in white letters.
jeremyd999 deleted a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 08/26/2012 [view]
INT. int. margaret's bedroom-night
jeremyd999 deleted an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/26/2012 [view]
The laug
jeremyd999 deleted an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/26/2012 [view]
CLOSE Up on a young girl named MARGARET lays in an old fashioned cast iron bed. She is ten years old and is a little chubby, but not overwhelmingly so. The camera changes to a HIGH ANGLE of the room. The room is adorned with wooden furniture, and other decorations. We can immediately tell she's a spoiled. A few seconds after we shift to HIGH ANGLE a caption appears on the screen in white letters.
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