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ChrisDavis added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 03/09/2009. ChrisDavis made 38 other changes.
ChrisDavis added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 03/09/2009 [view]
Cals mom
Ok you to get in the house and get cleaned up for supper.
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They drive for about ten minutes and finally get to their house.
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cals mom
ok hunny. lets get you guys home and ready for dinner.
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Cal
hey mom this is kevin he is gunna spend the night and go play with us tomorrow. He needs to get away from his parents for a few days they are treating him like crap.
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Kevin and cal run as fast as they can to the car. they open the door and get in.
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Cal
you ready... get set... GO!!!!
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John looks around outside but does not see a thing. So he looks walks up to the glass doors and looks inside to see if they were in the mall still
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Kevin and cal make their way out the front doors and head to their cal's mom's car. when they see John. They jump into the bushes and watch them, waiting for a moment when they are not looking so that they can make a run for his moms car.
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Kevin
Hmmmmmm. that sounds like a load of fun. And i need some time away. So hell with them im going.
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Cal
Well then just sneak to my house tonight and stay the night? It would be loads of fun. we could play video games and stay up till our eyes can not handle it any more. And if your parents get mad you can just stay there till you would like to leave. My mom wont care shes cool.
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Kevin
My parents wont let me go. I barly get enough time to do anything.
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cal
Oh im sorry. My mom takes me to the park every day and we play football and run. If you would like you could go with us tomorrow? We go for about three hours.
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kevin
What ever man. I have never ran this much in m life. My parents normally make me stay in side and do chores. Well at least my step dad does, when hes not around i can do a little more. But for the most part i do not get any running in.
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Kevin's friend Cal
Come on you slow poke. You gotta keep up with me to play the the game. The nam of the game is tag. You cant tag me if your a mile behind me " he laughs"
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John and Courtney make their way to their car and head home. Mean while kevin has found a new friend and they are running around the stores playing tag.
ChrisDavis added an action in "This is your first scene." on 03/09/2009 [view]
John and Courtney make their way t their car and head home. Mean while kevin has found a new friend and they are running around the stores playing tag.
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John
Sounds good to me.
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Courtney
Well you are right about some of it, but we cant leave him all night so we will come back in a couple of hours. He will be wanting us to take him home by then. you know?
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John
I dont give a damn if that kid gets a cold or even gets hurt. He can go hungry for all i care. That kid has givin us nothing but trouble all day and he needs to be punished for it.
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Courtney
No what happens if he catches a cold or what if he gets hurt? We can get in big trouble if that happens.
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John
Ok thats it that kid is sleeping out in the cold tonight. We are leaving now!
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Another ten minutes goes by, Courtney and John have still not been able to find Kevin.
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Cashier
ok, my bad then.
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Kevin
No, it's not me i came here by my self. My parents are on a business trip for the weekend, they said i could come down here if i got bored.
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Cashier
Hey kid, i think they are looking for you? they just described you and it seems almost exactly like you.
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Security
Kevin will u please come to the North end of the mall. Your parents are looking for you. And if any one see's him is about 5 ft tall with worn down cloths, and blond hair.
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After about ten minutes of walking around "looking" for kevin, they make their way to mall security office and have them annouce his name, and start looking for him.
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The couple starts to walk and have a look around. But not very hard they look like a couple just walking around.
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The couple split up and start to look. But not very hard they look like a couple just walking around.
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John
No we will leave him, if needed
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Courtney
We'll we are not going to just leave him. We have to find him, then we can punish him.
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John
Man if he does not show up with in the next twenty minutes,we we are going to leave him here for the night. And he can sleep out on the streets and that should teach him.
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Kevin walks to a machine puts a coin in and starts to play. Mean while his Mother and step father start looking for him.
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kevin
I could use a new pair of shoes... But the hell to it, im going to have some fun!
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Right before the man puts the coins in his hand he thinks of what else he could do with this money.
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Kevin walk's into the arcade and starts to look around. He look's around in his pocket and wallet but cant find much but a few dollars. He goes to check his pockets but all that is found is a couple of hole's and some lint. He goes to the the cashier and asks for some coins. He puts the cash on the counter and waits for the coins to come.
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Kevin
We'll i sure hope your right mister. Becasue the way its looking now, that wont happen.
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Elderly Guy
Ya i know what u mean kid. My child hood growing up sucked but in the end we all came togeather.
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