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vsfifthgrade edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012. vsfifthgrade made 35 other changes.
vsfifthgrade edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
Gregory runs into a spider web and gets caught. He wiggles to try to break free but cannot. Elmer also tries to break him free but he is powerless. Spider children descend onto them and start carrying them towards Tarantula's lair.
vsfifthgrade edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
Tarantulina
Hee, hee, hee! This little minotaur is clever...but is he clever enough to out wit my spiders!? My spider children, would you like some minotaur for a snack?
vsfifthgrade edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
spider children
Yes, Queen Tarantulina!
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gregory
Let us go!
vsfifthgrade added an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
Gregory runs into a spider web and gets caught. He wiggles to try to break free but cannot. Elmer also tries to break him free but he is powerless. Spider princes and princesses descend onto them and start carrying them towards Tarantula's lair.
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elmer
Gregory! Look out!
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gregory
We've got to be getting close!
vsfifthgrade added an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
Gregory running through the maze.
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INT. cut to: farther in the maze
vsfifthgrade added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
tarantulina
Then go! Make sure he never escapes the Giant Maze and bring him to me!
vsfifthgrade added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
spider princesses
Yes, Queen Tarantulina!
vsfifthgrade added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
Tarantulina
Hee, hee, hee! This little minotaur is clever...but is he clever enough to out wit my spiders! Ahahahah!
vsfifthgrade added an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
The spider queen watches Gregory run through the maze on some sort of crystal ball device.
vsfifthgrade added a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
INT. cut to: spider queen's lair
vsfifthgrade added an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
Gregory and Elmer run off giggling as the ghost shakes his fist in anger.
vsfifthgrade added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
ghostie
You tricky little minotaur!
vsfifthgrade added an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
Gregory holds up the piece of pie he pretended to eat, smiles, and throws the pie in the ghost's face.
vsfifthgrade added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
ghostie
Hah! Here is your tablet as you requested but I fear you won't be able to enjoy it for very long.
vsfifthgrade added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
gregory
Mmmm mmmm!
vsfifthgrade added an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
The ghost pulls out the piece of tablet while Gregory gets a piece of pie. Gregory pretends to eat the pie.
vsfifthgrade added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
gregory
Deal!
vsfifthgrade added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
ghostie
Why, yes! I'll tell you what...you eat a piece of pie and I'll give you a piece of the tablet!
vsfifthgrade added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
gregory
Alright...but do you know where a piece of this tablet is?
vsfifthgrade added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
ghostie
Cmon...just have one bite.
vsfifthgrade added an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
The ghost looks uncomfortable being caught in the lie.
vsfifthgrade added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
elmer
Just answer the question, sheets! Is this pie going to do us in?
vsfifthgrade added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
ghostie
Poison!? Hah! How could you even...I mean...I would never!
vsfifthgrade added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
gregory
...is this a poison pie?
vsfifthgrade added an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
Elmer and Gregory look at each other suspiciously, sensing that something is amiss.
vsfifthgrade added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
ghostie
You like this pie, huh? Please, take all you like! This pie is...too die for...heh heh heh
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Suddenly a ghost emerges from the pie.
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elmer
Jackpot, baby!
vsfifthgrade added an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
They follow their noses until they find a delicious pie on a table.
vsfifthgrade added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
gregory
Mmm! What's that intoxicating aroma!?
vsfifthgrade added an action in "This is your first scene." on 06/07/2012 [view]
Gregory sniffs the air.
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