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SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago. SnapDragon made 44 other changes.
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
JUNIper
(in a laid-back tone)
It was an ancient one. We have the technology to remove it you know? the only thing the virus is capable of is rendering devices into a motionless state. please stop thinking that I am heartless enough to cause Toby to be destroyed.
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Juniper
(looks to the left with a look of guilt, speaks quietly)
No,i did not... but I may have intentionally inserted a virus into his engine when i struck him down.
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
George
(in a scolding, slightly loud voice)
Goodness Juniper! do you have any idea what you have done? It'll take weeks for his mechanic to get him up and running again! There is also no guarantee that he will be able to execute basic functions!
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Juniper
(stretching her arms)
yeah, that's what happened. However, He is a lot worse off than I am GEORGE.
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Two people occupy a large, brightly lit room. Huge mechanical devices are strewn from the ceiling above an operating table where a girl, sixteen, short with long red hair, lies with her chest cut open. metallic devices can be seen moving inside her. A tall, bald, muscular man bends over her with a screwdriver and a drill.
SnapDragon edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Juniper rolls her eyes and hops off the bench.
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
George (CONT'D)
(much calmer)
could you tell me how serious the virus is at least?
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
George
(yelling and red faced)
Are you serious!? And all of this over what? Money, new technology, or horse play? He is your brother for crying out loud! What were you thinking? If he comes out of this acting like a boiled turnip YOU'RE reteaching him everything.
SnapDragon edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
George puts the lung down and moves away from the table to a workbench. He grabs a fist full of wiring and bolts. He looms over Juniper again And tampers with her mechanical heart. He begins to speak with a sarcastic yet serious undertone.
SnapDragon edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Juniper rolls her eyes and speaks calmly.
SnapDragon inserted an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Juniper rolls her eyes and speaks calmly
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Juniper
(looks to the left with a look of guilt)
No,i did not... but I may have intentionally inserted a virus into his engine when i struck him down.
SnapDragon inserted an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
George slams his fist on the bench which startles Juniper.
SnapDragon edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
George puts the lung down and moves away from the table to a workbench. He grabs a fist full of wiring and bolts. He looms over Juniper again And tampers with her mechanical heart. He begins to speak with a sarcastic undertone.
SnapDragon edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Juniper ignores him as she leaves the room. She knows that this isn't the end of their conversation, but she puts it off to search for her brother Toby.
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
George
Goodness Juniper! do you have any idea what you have done? It'll take weeks for his mechanic to get him up and running again! There is also no guarantee that he will be able to execute basic functions!
SnapDragon edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
George stares back with disbelief and horror in his eyes, he nearly drops the lung he's holding.
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Juniper
(Through her clenched teeth)
Yeah, but I ripped out a good chunk wire from his stomach and head.
SnapDragon edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
George scoffs and shakes his head he takes out what looks like a mechanical lung and starts tampering with it.
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
George
I would imagine so, you were always stronger, but that doesn't mean he didn't give you a good wollopin'. Did he use an electro magnetic pulse mechanism against you?
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Juniper winces as George looses a few bolts to open her lung. She speaks in a pained voice.
SnapDragon edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
George puts the lung down and moves away from the table to a workbench. He grabs a fist full of wiring and bolts. He looms over Juniper again And tampers with her mechanical heart.
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Juniper
(looks to the left with a look of guilt)
No, but I may have intentionally inserted a virus into his engine when i struck him down.
SnapDragon inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
George
What else did you do to him? knowing you, you must have done something completely uncalled for. Did you rip out his memory chip and hide it?
SnapDragon inserted an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
George moves away from the table to a workbench. He grabs a fist full of wiring and bolts. He looms over her again And tampers with Juniper's mechanical heart.
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
George
Goodness Juniper! do you have any idea what you have done? It'll take weeks for his mechanic to get him up and running again! There is also no guarantee that he will remember basic functions!
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Juniper
Yeah, but I ripped out a good chunk wire from his stomach and head.
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Man
So what have we done this time JUNIPER? got into another scuttle with TOBY I assume?
SnapDragon added an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
juniper ignores him as she leaves the room. She knows that this isn't the end of their conversation, but she puts it off to search for her brother Toby.
SnapDragon added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
george
Well...that's a relief, but don't think you're off the hook just yet!
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Juniper
Yeah, but i ripped out a good chunk wire from his stomach and head.
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
George
Good god Juniper! do you have any idea what you've done? It'll take weeks before his mechanic can get him up and running again! And there's no guarantee that he will execute basic functions. How much did you mess with his software?
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Juniper
(looks to the left with a look of guilt)
I may have also intentionally inserted a virus into his engine when i struck him down.
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Juniper
Yeah, but i ripped out a good chunk wire from his stomach.
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
JUNIper
It was an ancient one. We have the technology to remove it you know? the only thing the virus is capable of is rendering devices into a motionless state.
SnapDragon added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
JUNIper
It was an ancient one. We have the technology to remove it you know? the only thing the virus is capable of
SnapDragon added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
George
could you tell me how serious the virus is at least?
SnapDragon edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Man
So what have we done this time JUNIPER? got into another scuttle with Toby I assume?
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George puts the lung back and stitches up Junipers flesh. She sits back up and puts on a rugged, black, t-shirt. George puts his tools back in an iron box.
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Woman
I have some news for Juniper
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juniper
what is it?
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woman
it's Toby m'lady. he...
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She trails off and starts crying. Juniper and George stare at her with worried looks
SnapDragon deleted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
woman
I was able to fix the broken wires, but the virus that was installed in him can't be removed
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