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ted
My name is Ted. I love to party and i'm a bachelor. I think i'd be the perfect roommate because we can totally bag chicks together. I dont cook but beer is incluced, no purchas nesscary. And wine for the ladies we bring home.
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Jamie sits in his new half empty apartment. He reads his new potential roommates text messages.
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INT. Int. apartment - day
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Jamie hangs more flyers.
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INT. ext. park - day
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Jamie hangs flyers.
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INT. ext. store - day
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Joe exits the apartment and see's Jamie drive off. Jamie throws another piece of paper at Joe. Joe picks it up and it reads "Your disgusting."
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INT. ext. apartment - day
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Jamie enters his car. He holds his pen and paper. He writes "Looking for a Roommate."
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INT. int. car - day
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The apartment is filthy. Dishes stacked. Pizza boxes everywhere. Rat noises surround JAMIE who is sitting on the couch trying to write. He looks at the mess. JOE, dirty, hairy, and shirtless, walks in and grabs a slice of pizza. He takes a bite and leaves the rest on the counter. Joe scratches his belly button and reaches for Jaime's milk that is in the fridge. The milk is clearly labeled with Jamie's name. Jamie stares down Joe. Joe takes a chug. Jamie grabs his pen and paper and storms out.
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INT. int. apartment - Day
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They hold each other. She rips up the looking for a roommate sign. She throws it on the floor.
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Joe stands on the outside holding the flyer. He is confused. He points to the name. She fixes it and says goodbye. She is about to walk in when she see's a video game controller on the ground. She is confused. She starts to follow it. Jamie stands by his car holding the flyer. She smiles. He walks to her and kisses her. She's confused on why he came back. He rips up his job offer. He shows her unsent text messages. "I miss you", "I need to see you", "I love you". She looks at him
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Jamie drives. He stares at his Cd's.
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INT. int. apartment - day
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Jamie tries to write his poems. Alex has loud music playing. Jamie walks out to tell her to turn it down. She is listening with another guy. He see's him and walks back upstairs. Alex runs upstairs. He's upset. She explains he is her brother. They kiss.
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INT. int. apartment - night
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Jamie and Alex sit on the couch. They watch tv and argue about a character on the show. They laugh.
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Jamie enters with a new looking for a roommate sign. She shows him a picture of her and another guy. She rips it. He rips his sign. They throw the pieces off the balcony. They kiss.
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Jamie texts Alex from work. He apologizes. She responds with we should talk.
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Jamie enters with
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INT. int. apartment - night
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INT. int. building - day
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INT. int. apartment
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Jamie and Alex eat together. They cuddle close.
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INT. ext. restuarant - day
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Jamie texts Alex from work. He apologizes. She responds with we need to talk.
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Jamie walks into the living room and see's Alex singing. He laughs. He joins. They go through albums together. His hands overlap hers. They end up holding hands. They quickly release. They stare away from each other.
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Jamie tries to work again. Alex walks in and offers to help. They write together.
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Jamie tries to get his important work done. Alex walks in holding two tickets for the movies. Offers them to him. He smiles and accepts.
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Jamie points to the flyer at Alex's name that is left uncrossed out. Alex adds letters. It reads Alexis. She smiles. He grins. They both nod and walk away.
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Alex sits with her imagination of Jamie. The two girls play video games. They sing and dance together.
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Jamie sits and waits for Alex. He holds his favorite corny love songs. A car pulls up. Alex, a beautiful, petite girl, comes out. They both stand shocked.
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Jamie sits back down. He receives a message back. Just a smiley face.
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Jamie
Love songs suck.. but I cant quit listening either! Alex you sound just what I'm looking for. Meet me at the apartment!
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Jamie and ALEX eat together laughing. They hold their movie tickets in the air. They play video games. They dance and sing a well known love song.
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Alex
My name is Alex. I am neat clean and courteous. I will do half the chores and I don't mind sharing food. I love going to midnight movie premieres and playing video games. I don't blast my music but i hope you don't mind corny love songs. That's my only weird addiction I can't kick. Hope to hear back from you!
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Jamie works out with George. He gets exhausted. George wakes him up to work out early in the morning. Jamie hits his foot on a weight. He see's George invite in his brother. Joe walks in and hugs Jamie. Joe and George get crazy together and sandwich Jamie.
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George
My name is George. I am outgoing and can be very loud. Working out is my favorite and only hobby. I have 1 brother and we are very close. Expect him over a lot!
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Jamie works out with George. He gets exhausted. George wakes him up to work out early. Jamie hits his foot on a weight. He see's George invite in his brother. Joe walks in and hugs Jamie. Joe and George get crazy together and sandwich Jamie.
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INT. int. apartment - day
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Jamie shakes his head. He reads another text message.
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Jamie stares at his phone. He reads another text.
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Jamie looks up.
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Mark
My name is Mark. I just graduated high school. I am scared to be on my own but I know i'm ready for the real world. I will take on all the responisibilites. No need to worry about me!
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INT. int. fantasy apartment- day
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Jamie makes food and Mark askes for some. Jamie goes out to eat with Mark and Mark has no money. Jamie pays for it. Jamie is falling asleep but Mark sneaks into his bed looking scared.
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