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George
My name is George. I am outgoing and can be very loud. I will do half the chores and working out is my favorite hobby. I have 1 brother and we are very close. Expect him over alot!
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The apartment is filthy. Dishes stacked. Pizza boxes everywhere. Rat noises surround JAMIE who is sitting on the couch trying to write. He looks at the mess. JOE, dirty, hairy, and shirtless, walks in and grabs a slice of pizza. He takes a bite and leaves the rest on the counter. Joe scratches his belly button and reaches for Jaime's milk that is in the fridge. The milk is clearly labeled with Jamie's name. Jamie stares down Joe. Joe takes a chug. Jamie grabs his pen and paper and storms out.
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The rooms are empty. The kitchen is empty. Music blares. They rap together. They kiss.
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INT. int. apartment - day
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Joe stands on the outside holding the flyer. He is confused. He points to the name. She fixes it and says goodbye. She is about to walk in when she see's a video game controller on the ground. She is confused. She starts to follow it. Jamie stands by his car holding the flyer. She smiles. He walks to her and kisses her.
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INT. ext. apartment - day
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Alex hears a knock on the door.
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Charlotte
I'm Charlotte. I'm super fun and so outgoing...
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Megan
Hi I'm Megan. I'd be a great roommate because...
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Alex reads text messages from girls who want to move in.
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INT. int. apartment - day
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Jamie drives. He stares at his cd's.
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INT. int. car - day
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Jamie sits packed with his stuff outside the curb waiting for Alex. She arrives. They hold each other. They say goodbye. He drives off. Alex walks into the half empty apartment. She sits down with a pen and paper. She writes "Looking for a Roommate." She tears up.
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INT. ext. apartment - day
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Alex hands Jamie the letter. He reads it and jumps for joy. Alex smiles and hugs him. Jamie gets upset. He shows her that he has to move to California.
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INT. int. apartment - day
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Alex checks the mail and see's a letter for Jamie.
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Alex checks the mail and see
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INT. ext. mailbox - day
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Jamie and Alex sit on the couch. They watch tv and argue about a character on the show. They laugh.
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INT. int. apartment - night
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Jamie and Alex eat together. They are cuddled close.
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INT. ext. restuarant - day
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Jamie walks Alex to her room. He smiles and does a little dance that makes her laugh. She closes her door. He waits a second before walking to his room and closes his door. He sits up and stares at his door. He closes his eyes but is awoken by light. Alex walks into his room.
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INT. int. apartment - night
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Jamie walks into the living room and see's Alex rapping. He laughs. He joins. They go through albums together. His hands overlap hers. They end up holding hands.
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INT. int. apartment - day
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Jamie tries to write his poems agian. Alex walks in and offers to help. They write together.
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Alex walks in exhausted from work. Jamie left a trail of video game controllers. She follows them. Jamie waits for Alex and challanges her to play. They play video games.
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INT. int. apartment - day
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Jamie and Alex cook. They eat and talk. Jamie is starting the dishes when Alex comes next to him and helps. Jamie smiles. They talk the whole night.
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INT. int. apartment - night
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Jamie tries to write his poems. Alex walks in holding two tickets for the movies. Offers them to him. He smiles and accepts.
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INT. int. apartment - night
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Jamie and Alex move in her stuff. He laughs at the dorky stuff she has. She points to his dorky stuff. They both laugh.
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INT. int. apartment - day
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Jamie enters his car. He holds his pen and paper. He writes "Looking for a Roommate."
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The apartment is filthy. Dishes stacked. Pizza boxes everywhere. Rat noises surround JAMIE who is sitting on the couch trying to write. He looks at the mess. JOE, dirty, hairy, and shirtless, walks in and grabs a slice of pizza. He takes a bite and leaves the rest on the counter. Joe scratches his belly button and reaches for Jaime's milk that is in the fridge. The milk is clearly labeled with Jamie's name. Jamie stares down Joe. Joe takes a chug. Jamie grabs his pen and paer and storms out.
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Jamie knocks on her window. They both smile.
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INT. ext. car - day
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Jamie looks at Alex's car. Joe pulls up with the flyer in his hand. Jamie stares at his cd's. He runs to Alex.
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INT. Ext. apartment - day
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Alex enters her car loaded with her stuff. She turns around to look at Jamie.
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INT. int. car - day
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Jamie points to the flyer at Alex's name. Alex adds letters. It reads Alexus. She smiles. He grins. They both nod and walk away.
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INT. ext. apartment - day
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