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tonydare36 edited a transition in "This is your first scene." on 11/18/2013. tonydare36 made 85 other changes.
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INT. Int. apartment - day
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INT. int. apartment - day
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INT. int. Apartment - day
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The rooms are empty. The kitchen is empty. Boyz 2 Men blasts. They clean and sing together.
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INT. ext. apartment - night
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Joe stands on the outside holding the flyer. He is confused. He points to the name. She fixes and says goodbye. She is about to walk inside when she sees a car pull up. Jamie comes out holding the flyer. She smiles. He walks up to her and kisses her. She's confused on why he came back. He rips up his job offer. She rips up the roommate flyer.
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INT. ext. apartment - day
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Alex hears a knock on the door. She runs to answer.
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Jenny
I'm Jenny. I'm super fun and so outgoing..
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megan
Hi I'm Megan. I'd be a great roommate because...
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Alex reads text messages from girl's who want to move in.
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INT. int. apartment - day
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Jamie drives. He stares at his Cd and Thor Hammer.
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INT. int. car - day
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She writes on a piece of paper. "Looking for a roommate." She tears up.
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INT. int. apartment - day
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Jamie sits packed with his stuff outside the curb waiting for Alex. She arrives. They hold each other. They say goodbye. He drives off.
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INT. ext. apartment - day
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Alex hands Jamie the letter. He reads and jumps for joy. Alex smiles and hugs him. Jamie gets upset. He shows her that he has to move to California.
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INT. int. apartment - day
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Jamie enters. She is standing outside in the balcony. She shows him a picture of her and another guy. She rips it and throws the pieces off the balcony. They kiss.
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Alex checks the mail and sees a letter for Jamie.
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INT. ext. mailbox - day
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Jamie enters with a new "Looking for a roommate sign. She shows him a picture of her and another guy. She rips it. He rips his sign. They throw the pieces off the balcony. They kiss.
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INT. int. apartment - night
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Alex
We should talk...
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Jamie
I'm sorry.
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Jamie texts Alex from work.
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INT. int. building - day
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Jamie is trying to write. He hears a very loud noise. He cant continue. He walks to Alex's room to shut her up. She is cleaning while listening to a song. She stops and turns it down. Jamie walks back to his room. She walks in to apologize. He is working on his paper. She sits and helps him. They both reach for a new sheet of paper. They hold hands. They quickly release. They stare away from each other.
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INT. int. apartment - day
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Alex walks in exhausted from work. Jamie walks down the stairs with two movie tickets to Thor. He offers them to her. She walks away and grabs the toy Thor Hammer. They smile and walk out the door.
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INT. int. apartment - night
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Jamie and Alex cook. They eat and talk. Jamie is starting the dishes when Alex comes next to him and helps. Jamie smiles.
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INT. int. apartment - night
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Jamie and Alex move in her stuff. He laughs at the John Travolta poster. She laughs at his Thor hammer. They both laugh.
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Jamie and Alex move in her stuff. He laughs at the John Travolta poster. She laughs at his
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INT. int. apartment - day
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Jamie knocks on her window. They both smile.
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INT. ext. car - day
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Jamie looks at Alex's car. Joe pulls up with the flyer in his hand. He waves to Jamie. Jamie stares at his CD. He runs to Alex.
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INT. Ext. apartment - day
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Alex enters her car that is loaded with her stuff. She turns around to look at Jamie.
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INT. int. car - day
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Jamie points to the flyer. He underlines with his finger her name. Alex grabs the flyer and adds the last two letters to spell out Alexis. She smiles. He grins. They both nod and walk away.
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INT. ext. apartment - day
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Alex imagines Jamie as a girl. They play video games and watch movies together. They clean and sing love songs together.
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INT. int. fantasy apartment - day
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