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Sam
I...don't...believe this. I really don't fucking believe this.
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Frodo
(Staring at SAM in disbelief)
Are you for real?
(Slaps SAM over the back of the head)
We, no, YOU, have lost the ring, the ONE ring. To rule them all, and bind them. We're so wrecked when Gandalf finds this out. Come on then, it's probably already in Sauron's evil, bloody grasp by now anyway.
(They both leave and head to the tavern)
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Frodo (CONT'D)
(O.S)
What are you looking at?
(Clicking his fingers)
Hey, are you even listening?
(He realises and turns)
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(He turns and exits, leaving SAM and FRODO standing in awe.)
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(ARAGORN walks past them, SAM turns round and look at ARAGORN)
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aragorn
(Sighing)
I won't tell Gandalf. Look, I know what's up, if you want help just go and see Elrond, he helped me anyway,
(sniggers to himself)
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(ARAGORN looks the hobbits up and down, ECU of a bead of sweat rolling down SAM's face)
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Frodo
Ah! Nothing Aragorn, just running around you know, gotta get prepared for this massive adventure, hey?
(Tapping ARAGORN on the side)
Yeah, I really can't wait to put that ring into the fire at Mount Doom, gonna be really... really good.
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sam
Well...
(FRODO interrupts him)
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Aragorn
Hello there Frodo, Sam, what are you doing out out at this hour? It's nearly sun down?
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(CU shot of mud mottled boots, switches to a pan shot up to reveal a tunic and then the serious demeanor of ARAGORN)
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Frodo (CONT'D)
O.S What are you looking at?
( Clicking his fingers)
Hey, are you even listening?
(He realises and turns)
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Frodo
(Grunts in disbelief)
What the hell were you thinking?
(PAUSES)
Right we'll go back and see if they still have it.
(Standing up, playing with his hands)
Yeah Sam, we'll go down, and ask them.
(They both turn to leave, FRODO turns to SAM)
One thing. Under no circumstances, at all, do we let Gandalf find out about this, he's already annoyed over his ever-dwindling supply of Old Toby, this would just push him over the edge. Man, I hate to think what he would do, and we really need his help here Sam. Just... don't do anything else as fucking stupid, yeah?
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(OTS shot of FRODO looking out into RIVENDELL, his head in his hands)
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(CU shot of Frodo as he throws is arms into the air in anger)
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Frodo
A BET! I told you don't play dice with the elves, they are smarter than most people and I for one know not to trust them as far as you can throw them. But no, Mr Samwise the BLOODY STUPID, has better ideas!
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Frodo
WHAT?! How do you think I'd react? How can you just lose it like that?
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Frodo
( Grunts in disbelief)
What the hell were you thinking?
(PAUSES)
Right we'll go back and see if they still have it.
(Standing up, playing with his hands)
Yeah Sam, we'll go down , and ask them.
( They both turn to leave, Frodo turns to Sam)
One thing, under no circumstances, at all, do we let Gandalf find out, he's already annoyed at his ever dwindling supply of Old Toby, this would just push him over the edge, I hate to think what he would do, and we really need his help here Sam. Just... don't do anything else as fucking stupid, yeah?
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(SAM's eyes light up behind to something behind FRODO)
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(CU shot of SAM)
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(SAM's eyes light up behind to something behind Frodo)
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(OTS shot of FRODO looking out into Rivendell, his head in his hands)
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(Throwing himself at SAM)
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(He turns the corner and bumps into FRODO,they collide)
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(Fades out as they walk past the camera and into the chamber.)
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Frodo
(Whispering)
Who cares, everyone else is asleep!
(Addressing GANDALF AND GIMLI)
Thank you kind Lords, for this offering, may we come in?
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Frodo
(Whispering)
,
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Sam
(Turns to FRODO)
Are they for real?!
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GANDALF
(Laughing)
Haha, isn't it wonderful, reclaimed it for legal purposes. Those fools. Yes, yes Old Toby. So now let us resolve our little mishap, I believe some things are best left forgotten, and what better way, this way we can't even decide to forget!
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Sam/FRODO
Old Toby?!
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(ELROND grabs a handful of the contents and shows SAM and FRODO)
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FrodO
(Looking curiously at the sack)
What's in there? If this is any more wizard stuff, we're going.
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GANDALF
(Smiling)
Elrond and I have conversed, we deem it fit that you are not punished, but rather thanked, it seems that the Ring was not all we acquired from Haldir and his friends.
(ELROND appears at the door holding a large muslin sack)
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Sam
So, have you decided our fate? Shall we just go...
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(Montage of SAM and FRODO waiting outside of chamber, after which the doors finally open)
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GANDALF
(Turns to FRODO and SAM)
You two wait here, I will speak to him. Come inside with me Gimli.
(GANDALF and GIMLI go into the chamber)
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(BLACKOUT. Cut shot to INT. RIVENDELL - Night. Tracking shot of GANDALF marching SAM and FRODO down expansive corridors, with GIMLI sluggishly following suit. They reach ELROND's chamber and stop abruptly.)
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GANDALF
(Grabs their collars and hoists them up in the air)
We are going to Elrond, he will decide on what actions are needed to be taken here. What were you thinking? If the short ale clouds your decisions so much, perhaps lay off it a while?
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Sam
What happened to not telling 'the Wizard' eh? You arsehole, dropping me in it. I don't believe this, yeah, I did gamble, and I am so, so sorry, but, it's back, isn't it? It's fine, I mean Sauron didn't get it, can everyone just chill out a bit and...
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Frodo
(Talking over GANDALF)
No, I didn't lose it! It was Sam, he has a problem, not me!
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GANDALF
(Forces the door shut, and bolts it)
You two get here, NOW. You are liars, and irresponsible, and ought to have never been trusted in the first place. You are coming with me to Elrond immediately.
(Noticing Gimli trying to down both tankards behind SAM and FRODO)
Gimli, stop drinking, please. We're leaving.
(GANDALF grabs GIMLI, and walks over to SAM and FRODO)
YOU TWO ARE INTOLERABLE! WHAT POSSESSED YOU TO DO THIS? DID YOU GAMBLE IT AS WELL? NO DOUBT...
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GANDALF
(Forces the door shut, and bolts it)
You two get here, NOW. You are liars, and irresponsible, and ought to have never been trusted in the first place. You are coming with me to Elrond immediately.
(Noticing Gimli trying to down both tankards behind SAM and FRODO)
Gimli, stop drinking, please. We're leaving.
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Frodo
We were coming here just now to tell you! ...But since everything's fine, uh, we'll just be leaving...
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(Enter SAM and FRODO, just as the ring lands on the floor. GIMLI looks at the ring, whilst GANDALF turns to see SAM and FRODO enter the tavern. GANDALF stands up and summons the ring attached to a chain into his hand)
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HALDIR
So be it, I will be back in a moment.
(As he stands up, he drops something which draws the attention of GIMLI AND G
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HALDIR
So be it, I will be back in a moment.
(As he stands up, he drops something which draws the attention of GIMLI AND Ganda
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(Meanwhile, INT. TAVERN - Night, Light-hearted ditty playing in background, drunken swaying, the camera pans down to GIMLI and GANDALF playing dice against two elves, HALDIR and GALADRIEL)
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GIMLI
(Laughing)
HAHA! You two owe us a tankard each!
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GANDALF
(Waving his hand gently)
I believe we have more than luck on our side, let us wager something more, my staff and my hat.
(He throws the dice, it lands up on 6.)
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GIMLI
(dabbing his forehead with his beard)
Gandalf, do you think we can take them? I wager a tankard on this being a 6.
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