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EXT: Woods, daytime: Establishing shot

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Introduce LOWINCOME HOLMES and his trusty dimwitted companion TRAYLOR PARKER. Lowincome is looking through a small notebook.

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LOWINCOME

We're close, I can feel it...

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Traylor

You said that 3 hours ago. I'm taking a break.

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Traylor begins to sit.

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LOWINCOME

We're here!

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Traylor falls over. He stands up and approaches Lowincome. The camera backs out to reveal the "mountain".

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They approach the "mountain" and climb to the top. Lowincome opens his notebook again skimming through images of swords and other treasures. Traylor peeks over his shoulder.

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Traylor

It should be right here!

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LOWINCOME

Well that's not the case here is it Traylor? Not the case at all...

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Traylor

Please tell me we're not in the wrong place.

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Lowincome observes the area. Flashing around to different details on the crime scene.

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Lowincome

It would appear there was a tussle of sorts here...

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Lowincome approaches the blood stained rock.

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LOWINCOME (CONT'D)

What does that look like to you Traylor?

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Traylor

Uhh..

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LOWINCOME

Exactly! Blood! Obviously this man was shot in the head.

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Traylor

Where's the body?

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Lowincome wafts the air.

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LOWINCOME

That, my friend, flies around you in the belly's of buzzards.

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He runs to another spot following an invisible trail.

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Lowincome (CONT'D)

There were three men involved, one had a hat. They were terrible shots.

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He sniffs a rock and snaps a twig.

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Lowincome (CONT'D)

The one with the hat died first he was shot, then the other two battled right here. and there.

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He presses his face close to the ground.

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Lowincome

A hobbit lay here.

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He returns to where the sword was.

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LOWINCOME (CONT'D)

And finally the man with the shortest hair was victorious and he carried the artifact off that way.

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Traylor

Wow. but what happened to the other guy.

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Lowincome gestures to the body on the ground.

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Traylor (CONT'D)

Oh. Alright so what now?

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Lowincome

Now we follow the trail and find the victor of this little brawl. for he has the artifact we seek.

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Traylor

How do we know where to go?

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Lowincome

It's elementary my dear Traylor!

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Lowincome konks Traylor on the head.

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The two search for the victor of the battle. They eventually come up to him sleeping against a tree.

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Traylor

That has to be it! just take it and lets get out of here!

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LOWINCOME

That would hardly be fair.

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He drops his cane on the mans head. He wakes up and readys himself for a fight. Lowincome dodges all his punches. One of them hits Traylor in the face. Lowincome casually knocks him out. they take the sword.

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Lowincome (CONT'D)

Well, that was easy!

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INT. STUDY

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Lowincome flips through his notebook.

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LOWINCOME

The inscription on the side says the artifact is the key. what could that mean?

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Traylor

Maybe you have to--

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Traylor drops the sword revealing a key hidden in the handle.

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Lowincome

Hmm, would you look at that. For once your dimwittedness pays off!

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Lowincome grabs a book from the shelf.

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LOWINCOME (CONT'D)

I recognize this key... Ah ha, as i suspected, this is the Key to the treasure of Zantharon.

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TrayloR

Where's that?

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Lowincome grabs a globe and spins it.

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Lowincome

It's right... here.

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He glances down and adjusts the location of where his finger is on the globe.

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LOWINCOME (CONT'D)

no wait... here.

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They travel to the location of the treasure. when they arrive they see a guardian. The man from before approaches with a gun held up to Lowincome.

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Pete

Give me the key!

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Traylor

Come on! really?

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LOWINCOME

No don't worry! it's fine! Here you go sir.

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Lowincome tosses the key towards Pete. He picks it up and approaches the treasure. The guardian stays still until he puts the key in the lock. Then he awakens and destroys Pete. then he sets his sights on Lowincome.

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Traylor

That's it, we're boned.

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Lowincome

Relax my dimwitted assistant.

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He takes out a bottle of water and takes a sip. The guardian approaches him and he splashes him with the water causing him to short circuit. they collect the key and open the treasure. they both look in amazement at what lies in the box.

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Traylor

wait did you call me dimwitted?

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