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EXT: Woods, daytime: Establishing shot

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Introduce LOWINCOME HOLMES and his trusty dimwitted companion TRAYLOR PARKER. Lowincome is looking through a small notebook.

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LOWINCOME

We're close, I can feel it...

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Traylor

You said that 3 hours ago. I'm taking a break.

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Traylor begins to sit.

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LOWINCOME

We're here!

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Traylor falls over. He stands up and approaches Lowincome. The camera backs out to reveal the "mountain".

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They approach the "mountain" and climb to the top. Lowincome opens his notebook again skimming through images of swords and other treasures. Traylor peeks over his shoulder.

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Traylor

It should be right here!

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LOWINCOME

Well that's not the case here is it Traylor? Not the case at all...

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Traylor

Please tell me we're not in the wrong place.

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Lowincome observes the area. Flashing around to different details on the crime scene.

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Lowincome

It would appear there was a tussle of sorts here...

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Lowincome approaches the blood stained rock.

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LOWINCOME (CONT'D)

What does that look like to you Traylor?

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Traylor

Uhh..

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LOWINCOME

Exactly! Blood! Obviously this man was shot in the head.

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Traylor

Where's the body?

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Lowincome wafts the air.

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LOWINCOME

That, my friend, flies around you in the belly's of buzzards.

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He runs to another spot following an invisible trail.

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Lowincome (CONT'D)

There were three men involved, one had a hat. They were terrible shots.

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He sniffs a rock and snaps a twig.

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Lowincome (CONT'D)

The one with the hat died first he was shot, then the other two battled right here. and there.

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He presses his face close to the ground.

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Lowincome

A hobbit lay here.

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He returns to where the sword was.

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LOWINCOME (CONT'D)

And finally the man with the shortest hair was victorious and he carried the artifact off that way.

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Traylor

Wow. but what happened to the other guy.

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Lowincome gestures to the body on the ground.

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Traylor (CONT'D)

Oh. Alright so what now?

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Lowincome

Now we follow the trail and find the victor of this little brawl. for he has the artifact we seek.

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Traylor

How do we know where to go?

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Lowincome

It's elementary my dear Traylor!

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Lowincome konks Traylor on the head.

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The two search for the victor of the battle. They eventually come up to him sleeping against a tree.

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Traylor

That has to be it! just take it and lets get out of here!

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LOWINCOME

That would hardly be fair.

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He drops his cane on the mans head. He wakes up and readys himself for a fight. Lowincome dodges all his punches. One of them hits Traylor in the face. Lowincome casually knocks him out. they take the sword.

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Lowincome (CONT'D)

Well, that was easy!

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