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This is your first scene. Last edited by JasminePaigeMoore, on 08/13/2012. 0 comments. More scene info.

detention-Interior classroom-afternoon

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Fade into close-up of male student. He is characteristically a cool guy. He looks bored. There is a sound of scratching that catches his attention. He looks to his left then continues in his own world.

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Camera pulls out to a two shot and now we see a teenage girl who seems like a stereotypical popular. She is paying keen attention to her hair when the scratching noise is back. Both teens are now looking at over to their left now.

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Camera pulls back one more time to now show a classic nerdy girl. Furiously drawing on a sketch book. She is intent with it in her own world when...

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Cool Guy

What are you doing?

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The classic nerd slowly lifts up her book to show she was drawing a picture of the two of them looking at her just as they are now. The two teens pull away awkwardly.

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There is a moment of silence before...

Cool Guy (CONT'D)

So, what are you in for?

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Stereotypical popular

Hmm, Lude behavior.

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Cool Guy

(nodding) That's hot.

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Stereotypical popular

I bet. What are you in for?

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Cool Guy

Lude behavior. (winks)

The scratching is back. Both look over again.

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Cool Guy (CONT'D)

Hey! What about you? Why are you here.

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Classic Nerd

(awkwardly) Lude behavior.

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Stereotypical popular

Great.

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They look away.

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Classic Nerd

I heard there is a substitute today.

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Cool Guy

A sub, huh?

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Cut to:

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The scene dissolves into a dream sequence. We see a the floor of a door. As it opens to reveal a pair of sexy legs it pans up. There is an attractive girl at the door. She beckons for cool guy.

Sexy legs

You have been a naughty boy today. Haven't you.

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The girl drops her papers and bends over to pick them up. Camera pans back down and cool guy snaps back to reality.

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Cut to:

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Stereotypical popular

Hmm, a new play toy...

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The scene dissolves again to the floor of the door. As it pans up we see a strong pair of legs and a gorgeous body. He slowly slips off his tie and snaps it on the floor.

gorgeous body

Clearly, I have a lot of things to teach you.

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He starts to take off his pants as the stereotypical popular snaps back to reality.

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cut to:

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Classic nerd now looks out to space. The scene dissolves to the floor of the door again but as it opens there is a musical cue of yodeling. As we pan up we see a gag of a teacher. Quite different from the previous two.

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cut to:

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Classic nerd snaps back due to the sound of a door opening.

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When it opens we see that classic nerds fantasy was accurate.

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Gag of a teacher

Hello, my little trouble-makers. I will be your sub for detention today.

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cut to:

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There are reactions from the three students. Only the classic nerd seems happy.

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Fade out.

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