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Quick pitch

a man tries to get lunch, but there isn't any

Project Type: Short Film (5 min)

This project's owner would like a little help on parts of the project.

Recent changes

nmuniz added a comment to lunchless 1 month ago. more
not terrible, but below average. and I do not like these things:

1. how Kai is treated.

2. Lack of Characters

3. Boring story

4. too many capitalization mistakes.

I really hope you can fix this in the future.
minifig added a comment to lunchless 1 month ago. minifig made 1 other comment and 2 other changes. more
going good
minifig commented on an action. 1 month ago. minifig made 2 other comments and 14 other changes. more
this is a funny scene
minifig added dialogue in "EXT. THAT-A-WAY - AFTERNOON" 1 month ago. minifig made 2 other changes. more
kai
I will Just have to take it
minifig added dialogue in "EXT. THAT-A-WAY - AFTERNOON" 1 month ago. minifig made 40 other changes. more
Kai
you mean a man and a horse
 

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