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a Movie I have been trying to write for about 10 years now. it has been a book, a stage play, even a graphic novel but has never gotten finished. would love your input. Bout a group of young homosexuals and their friends in Midwestern united states and the things thy face together and alone
Project Type: Feature Film (Two hours)
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DeadLanternMat added a comment to Marathon
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I think a lot of the dialogue feels a little too forced and "edgy" for the sake of being edgy. My concern would be one of "People generally don't talk like this" in real world situations and thus, it makes it difficult to identify with these characters on a baseline level.
ToryBeth added a comment to Marathon
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I don't think it would pass a PG rating.
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