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Quick pitch

2 young men decide to break into a neighbor's house to rob them. Unbeknowst to them, they've picked the wrong fucking house.

Project Type: Short Film (5 min)

This project's owner would like a little help on parts of the project.

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JustCollin edited an action in "This is your first scene." 19 hours ago. JustCollin made 3 other changes. more
SCOTTY slowly opens a door directly opposite from the hallway door they entered in through. As he pushes the door fully open, he enters. Inside is a completely white room. White carpets, white wallpaper, even a bed with white sheets. The room is eerily perfect. A baby carriage with a porcelain doll inside sits nearby. SCOTTY pushes his way into the room with flashlight in hand. After searching the interior of this room for a moment, he begins to make his way towards the door as we...
JustCollin edited an action in "This is your first scene." 33 hours ago. more
He opens the door as he reaches it. Inside this room there are more dolls, a bed and a dresser. Childlike laughter is heard again as he backs away from the door. The laughter intesifies and more laughing comes in. The house fills with different voices and sinister laughter and it surrounds SCOTTY. Distraught and defeated, he rests his back against the wall behind him, and slides down to the floor. The situation finally gets the better of him as he begins to become emotional while the laughter continues around him.
JustCollin edited an action in "This is your first scene." 34 hours ago. JustCollin made 2 other changes. more
There is a long silence as SCOTTY stands in the hallway. This moment is ended by the door at the end of the hall closing on it's own, the door to the BLUE ROOM. We see someone who resembles CALEB right before the door shuts. SCOTTY looks at the door, puzzled as he slowly makes his way towards it
JustCollin edited an action in "This is your first scene." 35 hours ago. JustCollin made 10 other changes. more
SCOTTY makes his way in slowly and takes the room in. A dolls teaparty is taking place on the bed. Behind him, an antique set of dresser drawers. A set of chairs is around this tea party with dolls in each one. Near the edge of this bed is CALEB'S black hat he was wearing earlier. SCOTTY moves over to it and picks it up. The hat is severely damaged. There's cuts and lashes as well as blood and some hair left in the hat. SCOTTY stares at the hat while we have a first person POV under the bed. Something makes its way towards SCOTTY'S legs. As he goes to leave the room, a long, white hand with black nails emerges from under the bed. It grabs SCOTTY by his ankle as he walks away, causing him to fall to the floor. SCOTTY begins to get pulled under the bed as yet another arm emerges to help pull SCOTTY under. He panics. While being pulled across the floor he notices a sewing needle close by. He grabs the needle and proceeds to swing harshly under the bed at this unseen force. The hands let him go as we hear a gurgled, high pitched noise from under the bed. SCOTTY makes his way to his feet and quickly exits the room, slamming the door behind him. Childlike laughter is heard again as he backs away from the door. The laughter intesifies and more laughing comes in. The house fills with different voices and sinister laughter and it surrounds SCOTTY. Distraught and defeated, he rests his back against the wall behind him, and slides down to the floor. The situation finally gets the better of him as he begins to become emotional while the laughter continues around him.
JustCollin edited an action in "This is your first scene." 40 hours ago. JustCollin made 2 other changes. more
CALEB steals a piece of the candy. As he enjoys his newly acquired treat, we see a figure cross from one side of the room to the other behind him. The figure is somewhat out of focus. It's dressed in black from head to toe CALEB remains completley ignorant to this happening behind him. He turns and walks towards another part of the kitchen.
 

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