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2 young men decide to break into a neighbor's house to rob them. Unbeknowst to them, they've picked the wrong fucking house.

Project Type: Short Film (5 min)

This project's owner would like a little help on parts of the project.

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JustCollin edited an action in "This is your first scene." 4 weeks ago. JustCollin made 22 other changes. more
SCOTTY makes his way in slowly and takes the room in. A dolls teaparty is taking place on the bed. Behind him, an antique set of dresser drawers. A set of chairs is around this tea party with dolls in each one. Near the edge of this bed is CALEB'S black hat he was wearing earlier. SCOTTY moves over to it and picks it up. The hat is severely damaged. There's cuts and lashes as well as blood and some hair left in the hat. SCOTTY stares at the hat while we have a first person POV under the bed. Something makes its way towards SCOTTY'S legs. As he goes to leave the room, a long, white hand with black nails emerges from under the bed. It grabs SCOTTY by his ankle as he walks away, causing him to fall to the floor. SCOTTY begins to get pulled under the bed as yet another arm emerges to help pull SCOTTY under. He panics. While being pulled across the floor he notices a pair of scissors close by on the floor. He grabs them and proceeds to swing harshly under the bed at this unseen force. The hands let him go as we hear a gurgled, high pitched noise from under the bed. SCOTTY makes his way to his feet and quickly exits the room, slamming the door behind him. Childlike laughter is heard again as he backs away from the door. The laughter intesifies and more laughing comes in. The house fills with different voices and sinister laughter and it surrounds SCOTTY. Distraught and defeated, he rests his back against the wall behind him, and slides down to the floor. The situation finally gets the better of him as he begins to become emotional while the laughter continues around him.
JustCollin added an action in "This is your first scene." 4 weeks ago. JustCollin made 14 other changes. more
SCOTTY enters the room. CALEB sits in a chair with several dolls around him and in his lap.
JustCollin edited an action in "This is your first scene." 4 weeks ago. JustCollin made 2 other changes. more
SCOTTY makes his way in slowly and takes the room in. A dolls teaparty is taking place on the bed. Behind him, an antique set of dresser drawers. A set of chairs is around this tea party with dolls in each one. Near the edge of this bed is CALEB'S black hat he was wearing earlier. SCOTTY moves over to it and picks it up. The hat is severely damaged. There's cuts and lashes as well as blood and some hair left in the hat. SCOTTY stares at the hat while we have a first person POV under the bed. Something makes its way towards SCOTTY'S legs. As he goes to leave the room, a long, white hand emerges from under the bed. It grabs SCOTTY by his ankle as he walks away, causing him to fall to the floor. SCOTTY begins to get pulled under the bed as yet another arm emerges in helping pull SCOTTY under. He panics. While being pulled across the floor he notices a pair of scissors close by. He grabs them and proceeds to swing harshly under the bed at this unseens force. The hands let him go as we hear a gurgled, high pitched noise from under the bed. SCOTTY makes his way to his feet and quickly exits the room, slamming the door behind him. Childlike laughter is heard again as he backs away from the door. The laughter intesifies and more laughing comes in. The house fills with different voices and sinister laughter and it surrounds SCOTTY. He rests his back against the wall behind him, and slides down slowly.
JustCollin edited an action in "This is your first scene." 1 month ago. JustCollin made 154 other changes. more
SCOTTY makes his way in slowly and takes the room in. A dolls teaparty is taking place on the bed. Behind him, an antique set of dresser drawers. A set of chairs is around this tea party with dolls in each one. Near the edge of this bed is CALEB'S black hat he was wearing earlier. SCOTTY moves over to it and picks it up. The hat is severely damaged. There's cuts and lashes as well as blood and some hair left in the hat. SCOTTY stares at the hat while we have a first person POV under the bed. Something makes its way towards SCOTTY'S legs. As he goes to leave the room, a long, white hand emerges from under the bed. It grabs SCOTTY by his ankle as he walks away, causing him to fall to the floor. SCOTTY begins to get pulled under the bed as yet another arm emerges in helping pull SCOTTY under. He panics. While being pulled across the floor he notices a pair of scissors close by. He grabs them and proceeds to swing harshly under the bed at this unseens force. The hands let him go as we hear a gurgled, high pitched noise from under the bed.
JustCollin edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." 1 month ago. JustCollin made 26 other changes. more
scotty
Hurry up, man.
 

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