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INT. OLD LADY WILSON'S BASEMENT. 1;05 AM.

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We see flash lights from outside approaching the door. There is a high pitched ping followed by a thud. The door opens and in step CALEB AND SCOTTY, who shut the door behind them quickly. Inside there is random furniture covered in white sheets, a fridge, a jukebox, etc etc. The two take in the room, looking at these local surroundings.

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caleb

See man, completely empty.

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scotty

Well don't speak too soon, we've been in the house a total of 8 seconds.

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SCOTTY and CALEB begin to look through the room for a moment. looking under sheets and opening drawers to a nearby desk.

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caleb

You see anything down here?

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scotty

Nah, looks like storage mostly.

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caleb

Yeah, me either. Let's go upstairs.

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CALEB produces a small, black pistol from his back waistline, checks the clip and tucks it back in. SCOTTY stares at him for a moment.

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caleb (CONT'D)

What?

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scotty

You brought a gun?

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caleb (CONT'D)

Hey, after today, I'm not taking any chances.

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SCOTTY shakes his head in disbelief. The two make their way up the stairs.

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iNT. old lady wilson's upstairs. 1;08 AM.

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From inside the upstairs hallway we see the downstairs door open. CALEB sticks his head out cautiously, peeking around both sides of the door. He enters the hallway after scoping it out and waves SCOTTY in behind him. After both are in, CALEB closes the door quietly behind them. CALEB pulls SCOTTY in closer to him, like a group huddle right before the big play.

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caleb

(whispering) Ok, let's split up. Keep your eyes open and don't make a peep until we know we're good. Got it?

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SCOTTY nods his head in silent agreement. Our pair of wanna-be thieves tred quietly down opposite ends of the hallway. CALEB moves towards the living rooms while SCOTTY makes his way towards the hallway's bedrooms.

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INT. OLD LADY WILSON'S LIVING ROOM. 1;10 A.M.

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CALEB cautiously makes his way into a deserted living room, taking in his surroundings as he walks through.

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caleb

(himself) This place is fucking weird...

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CALEB walks through the empty living room and into a kitchen as we...

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cut to scotty

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iNT. WHITE ROOM. 1;13 A.M.

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SCOTTY slowly opens a door directly opposite from the hallway door they entered in through. As he pushes the door fully open, he enters. Inside is a completely white room. White carpets, white wallpaper, even a bed with white sheets. The room is eerily perfect. A baby carriage with a porcelain doll inside sits nearby. SCOTTY pushes his way into the room with flashlight in hand. After searching the interior of this room for a moment, he begins to make his way towards the door as we...

cut to caleb

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INT. KITCHEN. 1;15 a.m.

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CALEB enters a kitchen. He scans the room and finds very little of interest, except a nearby candy dish. CALEB smiles.

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caleb

Sweet...

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CALEB steals a piece of the candy. As he enjoys his newly acquired treat, we see a black figure standing in the living room behind him. The figure is somewhat out of focus. CALEB remains completley ignorant to this thing behind him. He turns and walks towards another part of the kitchen.

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INT. BLUE ROOM. 1;17 A.M.

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SCOTTY is searching another eerily decorated bedroom. This one is very white, but not as bad as the last one. Blue and white stripes line the walls. We get only a quick shot of this room as SCOTTY closes the door behind him. He opens another door nearby and enters....

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INT. GREEN ROOM. 1;17 A.M.

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This room's walls are plastered in a green wallpaper with gold stripes. The rug shows the age of the house. It's a very odd and ugly 70'sish pattern. In the middle of the room is a very large, comfortbale looking king sized bed. A teddy bear sits propped up on one of the bed's many pillows.

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scotty

Jesus..

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SCOTTY begins to take a quick look around the room and find nobody. He looks around for another moment before stopping. He picks up a nearby porcelain doll and inspects it. The doll is chalk white with blonde hair and wears a dress. An unpleasant look appears on SCOTTY'S face. It's wide eyes staring back holes into him. He looks around to the other dolls within the room. There are several positioned in random places, all just as eerie as the one he's holding. SCOTTY shakes his head is disbelief as he tosses the doll across the room and heads towards the door.

INT. HALLWAY. 1;20 A.M.

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SCOTTY exits the room. We follow behind him as he begins to walk back down the hallway. SCOTTY sees something at the end of the hallway.......a doll. SCOTTY looks puzzled. As he makes his way towards the doll, we see the same figure as before coming out from the GREEN ROOM and into the BLUE ROOM. Like CALEB Before, he is ignorant to it's presence. As he gets closer to the doll, a look of fear begins to form. It's the exact same doll he'd thrown only moments ago in THE GREEN ROOM. Yet, somehow it's here. SCOTTY bends down and snatches the doll up quickly. He looks around for a moment and sees CALEB making his way from a smaller connected hallway.

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CALEB

Alright, I believe we are alone, sir.

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CALEB looks down at the doll in SCOTTY'S hands. He sets his gun down on a nearby table.

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caleb (CONT'D)

Haha looks like you've made a friend! Who's this?

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CALEB takes the doll from SCOTTY'S hands and looks at it. He laughs a little while looking at it. SCOTTY looks slightly concerned.

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scotty

Did you put this here?

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caleb (CONT'D)

Me? Nah man, I just now saw you with it.

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scotty (CONT'D)

For real?

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SCOTTY looks at the surroundings, like he suspects someone else is with them. CALEB tosses the doll onto a nearby couch.

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caleb

Everything cool, man?

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scotty (CONT'D)

Y-yeah, I'm good.

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caleb

Ok, cool cause it's time to get to work.

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CALEB passes SCOTTY a medium-sized, black travel bag.

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caleb (CONT'D)

Just grab what we know we can sell: Jewlery, electronics, antiques...

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scotty (CONT'D)

Yeah, man. Let's just load up and get outta here, ok?

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CALEB nods his head once in agreement. He and SCOTTY split up as we....

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fade to black.

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fade from black.

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INT. LIVING ROOM 1;57 A.M.

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We see an open, black bag on a kitchen table. Inside are various items: an ipod, a tablet, some jewlery, prescription pill bottles. We see a hand enter frame and throw a small roll of cash, held together with a rubber band, into the bag. The same hands then zip the bag shut before we can see the owner of the hands is CALEB. CALEB throws the bag over his shoulder and walks into THE WHITE ROOM where SCOTTY is loading the last of his finds into his bag.

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caleb

You ready to go?

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scotty

Yep.

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SCOTTY and CALEB make their way out of this room and towards the original door they entered the hallway from. They open it and begin their trek down the stairs.

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INT. DOWNSTAIRS. 1;58 A.M.

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CALEB and SCOTTY make their way to the door they entered from. They check themselves and do a final patdown.

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scotty

You got everything?

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caleb

Yeah...I think so.

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CALEB reaches to his back waistband and freezes...

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caleb (CONT'D)

Oh shit! The gun.

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scotty

You left it??

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caleb

I'll just go grab it real quick, be right back.

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scotty

Hurry up, man.

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CALEB runs back upstairs very quickly.

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iNT. MAIN HALLWAY. 2;00 A.M.

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We cut to the upstairs hallway and see CALEB re-enter. He makes his way to the weapon he's carelessly left behind. As he puts the gun in his hand, CALEB turns around in time to barely catch the door to THE WHITE ROOM slowly close. He jumps at the sight of this and stares at the door, terrified. CALEB swallows hard and asks...

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caleb

Hello? Anyone there?

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He raises his gun in one hand, flashlight in the other and makes his way slowly to the door of THE WHITE ROOM. CALEB pushes the door open and enters the room as we...

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CUT TO ...

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INT. DOWNSTAIRS. 2;03 A.M.

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Downstairs, SCOTTY waits patiently for CALEB. He's playing with his cellphone, looking down. After a moment, a gun shot goes off. SCOTTY jumps and drops his phone. He stares wide eyed at the stairs in shock. 4 or 5 more gun shots go off....then silence. SCOTTY stands frozen in place for a moment before he makes his way to the first step. He looks to the closed door for some kind of explanation for what just happened.

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scotty

Caleb!! What the fuck was that?!

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SCOTTY'S question goes unanswered. The silence is overwhelming. He slowly begins to make his way up the stairs, ever cautious.

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INT. MAIN HALLWAY. 2;04 A.M.

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scotty

Caleb! Are you okay, man?

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SCOTTY still hears nothing but the silence of the house around him. Carefully, he makes his way down the hall and towards the spot where CALEB had left his gun. As he approaches, SCOTTY notices something at the beginning of the hallway...it's CALEB'S gun. SCOTTY bends down and picks the gun up. As he holds it, he feels something wet on the pistol.....it's blood. He stares at his hands, widely confused. He begins to try and wipe some of the blood from his hands onto his shirt, This moment of confusion is broken by the sound of a quick child's giggle coming from the front door of the house. SCOTTY turns quickly at the sound of this and points the gun out in the direction of the laughter. His outstretched hand shakes with the pistol's grip wrapped around his fingers.

scotty (CONT'D)

CALEB!!! Where are you?!

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Silence....

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SCOTTY slowly, but surely, begins to head in the direction of the laughter. Still holding the pistol out in front of him, he approaches the front door.

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scotty

C'mon man, talk to me! Where are you?

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INT. FORMAL LIVING ROOM. 2:04 a.m.

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SCOTTY pushes through this room looking for CALEB. He passes a piano. He almost makes it into the formal dining room when the piano behind him rings out. SCOTTY jumps around to see several dolls sitting on the piano bench that is now pulled out. As SCOTTY points his gun at this scene, he backs away towards an open door. This open door slams shut violently behind SCOTTY. He jumps and turns, pointing his gun in it's direction. He quickly makes his way back across the room, side stepping the piano on the way to the front door.

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INT. FRONT HALLWAY. 2;07 A.M.

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SCOTTY attempts to open the front door. It's locked from the outside. He tugs on it for only a second before stepping back and taking aim at the lock with CALEB'S gun. He pulls the trigger....and the gun only clicks. He fires the trigger a few more times before inspecting the gun over.

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scotty

What the...

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SCOTTY removes the clip to find that the gun is out of ammo.

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scotty (CONT'D)

Ahh shit!

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SCOTTY throws the gun across the room in anger. He begins to make his way back to the...

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int. main hallway. 2;10 a.m.

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SCOTTY goes back to the hallway door leading to the basement. The door is shut now. SCOTTY tugs and attempts to turn the door's handle, but to no avail. This door to is now locked from the inside. As he struggles with the door, something can be seen approaching SCOTTY from the left. He turns to see a baby carriage at the beginning of the hallway. SCOTTY freezes, staring a blank stare into the carriage. After a brief second, he takes one, slow step away from it. As soon as he does the carriage takes off on it's own accord down the hallway towards scotty. He turns to the door next to him, pushes the door open and quickly enters...

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int. white room. 2;11 a.m.

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SCOTTY turns back as he enters, just in time to see the unmanned carriage continue past his doorway right before SCOTTY slams it shut. He gathers himself for a second and takes a deep breath as he turns around to face the room. He moves over to the window and tries to pry it open. SCOTTY tugs and tugs but with no success. He punches the wall in anger at this. He turns and begins to search the room, looking for something to smash the window with. He finds nothing available and attempts to open a nearby closet. A record player behind SCOTTY begins to play a very old fashioned, upbeat and eerie tune as soon as these closet doors are open. SCOTTY jumps and turns to face the record player. He stands and watches the record spin for a brief moment before pulling the needle off abruptly, causing an ugly record scratch sound. SCOTTY turns his attention back to the windows, trying to open them. SCOTTY is interrupted again as the record player revs back to life by itself, behind him. He jerks around quickly and faces the player. He stares angrily, gritting his teeth as he marches over to the record player and rips it's power chord from the wall. He has a triumphic look on his face as he comes back up. SCOTTY'S small victory is cut short as the record kicks back on again, this time playing a much darker, disturbing musical number. Across the room, a set of closet doors begins to shake violently from the inside, Terrified, SCOTTY bolts across the room and attempts to slam the door behind him. Just as the door almost slams, a hand wraps around the side of the door and pulls back. It's a long, white hand with black finger nails. As SCOTTY struggles for the door, laughing and various voices are heard from inside the room. SCOTTY eventually places one foot on the wall, giving him leverage and allowing him to finally pull the door shut.

INT. MAIN HALLWAY. 2;16 A.M.

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scotty

Caleb! Say something!

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There is a long silence as SCOTTY stands in the hallway. This moment is ended by the door at the end of the hall closing on it's own, the door to the BLUE ROOM. We see CALEB right before the door shuts. SCOTTY looks at the door, puzzled, as he slowly makes his way towards it

scotty (CONT'D)

Caleb!!

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SCOTTY rushes to the door after seeing his friend. He shoves it open and freezes as he enters. The room is empty, except for a phone, dresser, bed, some dolls, etc. SCOTTY looks dumbfounded at the empty room.

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scotty

What the hell...

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SCOTTY scans the room after walking more into it. His attention is quickly drawn to something sticking out from under the bed. Something black. He slowly bends down to collect the item, recognizing it. It's CALEB'S hat, but severly damaged. The hat is torn and maimed as if by some animal. Semi-dried blood is caked onto the sides. As SCOTTY raises back up, there is a doll on the bed. He jumps at the sight of this. Before SCOTTY can fully examine it, the phone beside him rings, echoing throughout the silent house. SCOTTY jumps, frightened at the random call.

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scotty (CONT'D)

Shit!!

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SCOTTY takes a deep breath and gives himself a second to regain his composure. The phone rings again. SCOTTY stares at the ringing telephone, not sure what to do. Slowly, SCOTTY reaches a hand out to the old, corded telephone. It continues to ring loudly. Finally, SCOTTY picks up the ever-ringing phone and hesitantly answers. White static pours through the phone in waves, coming in loud and then soft. SCOTTY winces and keeps the phone pulled away from his ear.

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scotty (CONT'D)

He-hello?

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The static continues for a moment before a voice finally is heard.

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caleb

SCOTTY!!! HELP! HELP ME!!

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SCOTTY jumps into action.

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scotty

CALEB! Are you OK?! Where are you, man?!

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caleb

NO! I-I'm bleeding pretty bad here, man. I have no idea where I am, dude. She fucking bit me! You gotta get me outta here!!

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scotty

I will man! But where the hell are you?!

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caleb

I d-don't know! I just woke up....I can't remember how I got here. The room's all red. I can't see a fucking door anyhwere! The floor won't stop moving!

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SCOTTY looks bewildrered.

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scotty

What the fuck are you talking about??

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caleb

Man, I've never seen anything like this in my-

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CALEB goes silent

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caleb (CONT'D)

Oh god..she's coming back..SHE'S COMING BACK!! SCOTTY!!!

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CALEB'S voice is overpowered by a vicious, high pitched scream.

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scotty

CALEB?!...CALEB!!....

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Commotion overtakes the phone call, screaming insues and the sounds of chaos pour out of the phone. SCOTTY stands frozen by the moment. In an instant, CALEB'S screams are silenced. There is a loud thud heard. Something on the other end picks the phone up. Heavy breathing is heard into the mic.

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VOICE

YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE COME HERE...

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SCOTTY

Where's Caleb??! Just give me my friend and we'll leave!! OKAY?!

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A small, eerie chuckle is heard from the voice.

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The small chuckle begins to snowball into louder laughter.

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voice (CONT'D)

NO-ONE EVER LEAVES.....

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Childlike laughter is heard again as he backs away from the door. The laughter intesifies and more laughing comes in. The house fills with different voices and sinister laughter and it surrounds SCOTTY. Distraught and defeated, he rests his back against the wall behind him, and slides down to the floor. The situation finally gets the better of him as he begins to become emotional while the laughter continues around him.

scotty

This isn't happening....

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The laughter steps up in volume.

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SCOTTY (CONT'D)

None of this is real...none of this is real!

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The laughter ascends.

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scotty (CONT'D)

CALEB?! WHERE THE FUCK ARE YOU?!

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After reaching a fevered pitch, the laughter abrupty stops. The door to the GREEN ROOM opens up in front of SCOTTY. White light pours from the room onto SCOTTY sitting in the hallway. SCOTTY raises his head up to look in the room.

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scotty (CONT'D)

.....Caleb?

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SCOTTY stands up in disbelief and stares into the room for a moment before entering.

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scotty

Caleb?

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SCOTTY enters the room. CALEB sits in a chair with several dolls around him. On the floor, the bed around him, even in his lap. CALEB posses a large head wound, blood trails down his face.

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scotty (CONT'D)

Caleb! Say something! Are you alright?!

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As CALEB and the dolls stare perfect, blank, hollow smiles into SCOTTY, we see a figure behind him in the corner of the room. A long, white hand with black nails stretches out across the door slowly, and slams the door shut.

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CUT TO BLACK/ END SCENE/ ROLL CREDITS/ THANKS FOR COMING OUT!

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scotty (CONT'D)

I will!! But you gotta tell me where you are!

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caleb

It's a red room...I don't remember how I got here...I don't see a door anywhere, man! The floor is black an-

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CALEB goes silent.

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scotty

Caleb??

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caleb

Oh god...what the fuck is that....WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT?!

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