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JustCollin inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago. JustCollin made 24 other changes.
JustCollin inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
voice
NO-ONE LEAVES.....EVER.....
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The small chuckle begins to snowball into louder laughter.
JustCollin edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
SCOTTY
Where's Caleb??! Just give me my friend and we'll leave!! OKAY?!
JustCollin inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
voice
LEAVE?.....
JustCollin edited an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
A small, eerie chuckle is heard from the voice.
JustCollin edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
VOICE
YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE COME HERE...
JustCollin inserted an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
A small, eerie chuckle is
JustCollin inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
SCOTTY
Just give me my friend and we'll leave!
JustCollin inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
VOICE
YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE COME HERE...
JustCollin inserted an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
Commotion overtakes the phone call, screaming insues and the sounds of chaos pour out of the phone. SCOTTY stands frozen by the moment. In an instant, CALEB'S screams are silenced. There is a loud thud heard. Something on the other end picks the phone up. Heavy breathing is heard into the mic.
JustCollin inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
scotty
CALEB?!...CALEB!!....
JustCollin inserted an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
CALEB'S voice is overpowered by a vicious, high pitched scream.
JustCollin inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
caleb
Oh god..she's coming back..SHE'S COMING BACK!! SCOTTY!!!
JustCollin inserted an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
CALEB goes silent
JustCollin inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
caleb
Man, I've never seen anything like this in my-
JustCollin edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
caleb
I d-don't know! I just woke up....I can't remember how I got here. The room's all red. I can't see a fucking door anyhwere! The floor won't stop moving!
JustCollin inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
scotty
What the fuck are you talking about??
JustCollin inserted an action in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
SCOTTY looks bewildrered.
JustCollin edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
caleb
I d-don't know! I just woke up....I can't remember how I got here. The room's all red. I can't see a fucking door anyhwere! The floor keeps moving...
JustCollin edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
caleb
I d-don't know! I just woke up....I can't remember how I got here. It's a red room.
JustCollin edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
caleb
NO! I-I'm bleeding pretty bad here, man. I have no idea where I am, dude. She fucking bit me! You gotta get me outta here!!
JustCollin inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
caleb
I d-don't know! I don't remember how I got here...it's a red room
JustCollin edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
scotty
I will man! But where the hell are you?!
JustCollin inserted dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago [view]
scotty
I will man! But where the hell are you?
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