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ecurtin23 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 01/13/2015. ecurtin23 made 42 other changes.
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Johnson looks closer at the ticket and sees a CD with a note. "Yo check this shit out it's got 400 plays on Soundcloud. Thx." The CD is titled, "Fuck Police Brutality, Unless It's A Minority." Johnson screams and throws the CD at a wall. He gets into his car and drives away. \
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johnson
Oh great. Just what I need.
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Johnson runs out of the church in horror. He gets to his car and sees he has a ticket.
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father
Just give it a listen my son.
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johnson
How is that.. how is that even possible?
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father
Me and a couple of the youth pastors got together and laid down some tracks. It's getting a ton of buzz in the Christian rap community. Might really clear your mind. Lots of heatleft lyrics about finding yourself through Jesus. And selling xanax to minors. It even has a feature from out lord and savior Jesus Christ. He tears that shit UP.
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FATHER slides a CD under the booth onto Johnson's side. Johnson jumps up, freaked out.
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father
Uh... yes... something like that. It's also the name of a new mix track I've been working on.
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johnson
No.. no I haven't. But I think I get where you're going with this. I need to stop drinking and gambling and quit with all my bad addictions and get my life back together through The Lord. Is that right?
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father
My son, have you heard of "The Devils Temptations?"
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johnson
I have lied many times sir, even the amount of days since my last confession I lied about. Hell, I lie a lot. I don't know what to do with myself. My relationship with my wife is falling apart, I'm so behind at work and I can't seem to get on track. I think I'm losing it.
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father
Nothing. I mean, go on...
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johnson
what?
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father
Go on..
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johnson
Forgive me father, for I have sinned. It's been 10 days since my last confession.
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INT. int. church confessional - late afternoon
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Bill walks out of the room.
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bill
Johnson, peep that shit or you're fired.
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johnson
Listen Bill, I really don't have time to listen to your... whatever this is!
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johnson
But you've never sold crack!
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johnson
But you've never sold crack!
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bill
I really think I have something here. It's called "From Crack to Used Cars: Hustlers Ambition"
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johnson
Bill I really don't have time to listen to your... whatever this is!
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bill
Everyone? You're saying I have competition? Well anyways, it's called "From Crack to Used Cars: Hustlers Ambitiion." I really think I've got something here.
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johnson
What? Is this a fucking mixtape? What's going on here? Why is everyone giving me these things?
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The CD starts and it's clearly Bill rapping over his own self-made beatboxing recording.
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johnson
Okay okay. I'm putting it in.
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billY
Yes Johnson, do I sounds like I'm joking around?
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johnson
Did you mean like, right now?
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Bill stands there awkwardly for a few moments.
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johnson
Awesome. I'll make sure I do. Thanks Bill.
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bill (CONT'D)
Listen to this self help audio tape. It should really help you get back on track.
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Bill slowly unbuttons his top shirt buttons and removes his tie. All while making eye contact with Johnson who has a very confused look on his face. He then pulls out a CD.
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The worker slides one of his mixtapes into the bag and wraps it up. Johnson looks inside of the bag, then looks up at the worker, who then winks.
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Jack pays for his order. A few moments later the food is brought up to the worker. The worker is a pimply faced white guy with cornrows.
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Jack looks down at the tape to see an orange "50 c" sticker from a supermarket.
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HOMELESS MAN
Oh. Well you get a free mixtape with every donation. Have a listen man!
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johnson
I didn't want this. I just wanted to give you some change?
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homeless man
My mixtape. I recorded some bomb ass shit over that Disney garbage.
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The homeless man pulls a mixtape out of his pocket. It appears to be a KIDZ Bop CD.
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