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mattmitchell added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago. mattmitchell made 1 other comment and 29 other changes.
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Student 6 is flanked by alumni (or people pretending to be alumni) and walks to drone. Student tags drone and drone takes off and above and reveals Caulfield campus and out on Monash symbol.
mattmitchell added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
EXT - LOCATION TBC BUT MAYBE COALFIELD COMMON GREEN - DAY
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mattmitchell added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Student 6 converses with Teacher 6 in new location. Words on screen for each [student = ambition, teacher = experience/research]. STUDENT 6
mattmitchell added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
INT - LOCATION TBC - DAY
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mattmitchell added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Student 5 converses with Teacher 5 in new location. Words on screen for each [student = ambition, teacher = experience/research]. Student 5 tags Student 6 and transition to next location
mattmitchell edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Student 4 converses with Teacher 4 in new location. Words on screen for each [student = ambition, teacher = experience/research]. Student 4 tags Student 5 and transition to next location
mattmitchell added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
INT - LOCATION TBC - DAY
mattmitchell added a transition in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
mattmitchell added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Student 4 converses with Teacher 4 in new location. Words on screen for each [student = ambition, teacher = experience/research]. Transition to next location
mattmitchell added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
INT - LOCATION TBC - DAY
mattmitchell added a transition in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
mattmitchell added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Student 3 is on screen with ambition in text. Student 3 converses with Teacher 3 whose on experience is on screen. Student 3 tags student 4 who walks off screen and transitions to next location
mattmitchell edited an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Student 2 is surrounded by doctors and looking over patient in mock-up experience of emergency ward [words on screen of student's ambition] and with teacher or instructor with them and their experience [words on screen]. Student 2 moves off screen and tags next Student 3 and transition to next scene
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INT. int - monash clayton - cave - day
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Student 2 is surrounded by doctors and looking over patient in mock-up experience of emergency ward [words on screen of student's ambition] and with teacher or instructor with them and their experience [words on screen]. Student 2 moves off screen and tags next student and transition to next scene
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INT. INT - ALFRED HOSPITAL EMERGENCY - DAY
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Pick up shots, CUs and WS of Prof McMenimen teaching and include cutaways of 3D body parts. Words on screen that reinforce the world-first 3D printing done at Monash [words TBC]. Student walks off camera and out of building and tags next student who walks off screen.
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Student leaves
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INT. INT - MONASH ANATOMY LAB - DAY
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Student leaves
mattmitchell added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Pick up shots, CUs and WS of Prof McMenimen teaching and include cutaways of 3D body parts. Words on screen that reinforce the world-first 3D printing done at Monash [words TBC]
mattmitchell added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Drone tracks student for some way from behind as camera picks up shot of student from front on. Student walks into Anatomy where class is in action. WS of students gathered around table with #D body parts. 3D TV in action in background. Paul McMenimen is here talking to students.
mattmitchell added an action in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Aerial from drone vision at early morning light revealing campus. Drone pulls down to Northern Plaza to reveal student who smiles at camera on drone and words appear on screen saying student's name and ambition [insert when student and ambition known]. Student turns and walks to Anatomy lab.
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INT. EXT - MONASH CLAYTON CAMPUS, NORTHERN PLAZA - AERIAL FROM DRONE - DAY
mattmitchell commented on the outline. two years ago [view]
This video will feature actual MNHS students as the link to each part of the video. The aspirations of each student will be included as text on screen to reinforce the ambition of those students to peers and parents. Researchers and teachers will also be used in a teaching context with text on screen to relay to the viewer their achievements in research and practice. We'll open with a drone shot of the campus and come down to a student. Each student will then 'tag' another student as they go to the different areas of MNHS including the Anatomy Lab, CAVE and others where the students will interact with other students and teachers. It will finish on a student coming back to a drone (not seen) which will then soar up and reveal the campus again before taking off.

Actual students will do more than link to the locations and research, they will inspire peers and parents with their aspirations and achievements. Using researchers and teaching staff in context with the students removes the need to commit text to screen to explain teaching as it's implied. Rather, text will be used to reinforce their research achievements.

Key selling points will be used from the outset and peppered throughout the video, in order:

- One of the largest schools for the education of doctors, nurses and midwives in Australia (drone shot)

- Number 35 university in the world for practical, clinical and health sciences (tracking shot following student to first class in anatomy with Prof McMenamin)

- Learn from leading researchers (e.g. Professor Paul McMenamin and his world-first 3D anatomical printing technology (inside Anatomy)

- Access to placements, internships including at The Alfred Hospital, one of the largest, busiest and most advanced emergency departments in Australia (inside The Alfred)

- Be part of an almost 40,000-strong alumni in over 90 different countries (as student walks to drone and is flanked by people pretending to be alumni)

- Almost 98 per cent of medicine students find work within four months of graduation (as drone takes off revealing student with alumni and looking up. Visually reinforces soaring employment opportunities)
mattmitchell created this project! two years ago
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