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TSeigle edited dialogue in "Scene 7 - Flashback Khe Sanh 2" a year ago. TSeigle made 23 other changes.
TSeigle edited dialogue in "Scene 7 - Flashback Khe Sanh 2" a year ago [view]
Eugene (CONT'D)
You wouldn't happen to know where I can find Chuck at would ya?
TSeigle edited dialogue in "Scene 7 - Flashback Khe Sanh 2" a year ago [view]
Soldier
How have we been holding up? Were not the ones who took who spent the few days in a field hospital.
TSeigle edited an action in "Scene 7 - Flashback Khe Sanh 2" a year ago [view]
Eugene is talking to the doctor in the medical tent and the doctor gives Eugene permission to return to his unit. Eugene leaves the tent and as he is walking through the base back to his barracks he sees the extent of last nights mortar barrage a lot of the buildings were leveled, small craters, smoke and small fires. He sees some soldiers rebuilding and repairing damaged buildings. He finally returns to an empty barracks and walks over and sits on his bed. He looks over and stands up to grab his rifle he slings it over his shoulder and walks out to go find chuck and the rest of guys. After walking to the other side of the base he sees them all. One soldier looks over and notices Eugene. He hits another soldier on the shoulder and he looks up and also sees Eugene.
TSeigle edited dialogue in "Scene 5 - Flashback 1968 Hospital" a year ago [view]
Chuck (cont'd)
You know I over heard this morning that that around midnight Hill 861 was attacked by an enemy battalion.
TSeigle edited dialogue in "Scene 5 - Flashback 1968 Hospital" a year ago [view]
Chuck
*Chuckles* well I don't know Eugene, You know one minute I'm sitting there reading a magazine and then the next minute this place is being blown all to hell... I expected a ground attack but it never came, *chuckles* Charlie sure knows how to fuck with us.
TSeigle edited dialogue in "Scene 4 - 1979 Hospital" a year ago [view]
Eugene
... No... No I don't remember.
TSeigle edited dialogue in "Scene 4 - 1979 Hospital" a year ago [view]
Doctor
Iwitness says that he saw you driving and then all of sudden swerved into on coming traffic almost like you were trying to avoid something? Do you remember? Were was there an animal or something in the road maybe someone's dog?
TSeigle edited an action in "Scene 4 - 1979 Hospital" a year ago [view]
Eugene wakes up in a hospital bed, looks up and sees that he is in a hospital he looks around at some of the equipment and then lays his head back down on the pillow when a doctor walks in with a clipboard Eugene looks over at the doctor without lifting his head from the pillow, the doctor looks at Eugene smiling and glances at the clipboard.
TSeigle edited an action in "Scene 3 - Flashback Khe Sanh" a year ago [view]
Bill looks over and sees Eugene. With the camera behind Eugene and focused on Bill, Eugene starts to run forward over to Bill. suddenly a mortar hits the ammo dump causing a large explosion near where Bill is standing Eugene stops and looks up at the explosion he cant see anything through the smoke and fire a few seconds later another mortar hits a small distance in front of Eugene covering the whole screening and knocking Eugene to the ground. While on the ground the camera focuses on Eugene covered in dirt with blood running from his forehead there is a ringing sound and the camera is distorted to show that Eugene is disoriented while still on the ground Eugene looks up to see Bill engulfed in flames. Bill is frantically running and hitting his body trying to put out the flames. You can hear him screaming and Eugene tries to call out Bills name but cant. Bill falls to his knees still hitting his body trying to put the flames out then he finally falls flat to the ground, body still on fire the camera goes back to Eugene's horrified face he is also struggling to stay conscious the screen slowly fades to black to simulate Eugene passing out.
TSeigle edited dialogue in "Scene 3 - Flashback Khe Sanh" a year ago [view]
Chuck
He's somewhere around the main ammo dump!
TSeigle edited dialogue in "Scene 3 - Flashback Khe Sanh" a year ago [view]
Chuck (CONT'D)
Eugene, Go find Bill. Ill look for the other guys.
TSeigle edited an action in "Scene 3 - Flashback Khe Sanh" a year ago [view]
Eugene stands up and grabs his rifle without even putting his boots on and runs out of his barracks. You can still hear mortars flying over head and explosions. you can even see a few on screen. Chuck is right behind Eugene.
TSeigle edited dialogue in "Scene 3 - Flashback Khe Sanh" a year ago [view]
Chuck
Nah, that was over a month ago... that lieutenant is probably full of shit.
TSeigle edited dialogue in "Scene 3 - Flashback Khe Sanh" a year ago [view]
Eugene (CONT'D)
Hey, Do you guys remember when they stationed me at the listening post at the beginning of this month and we shot those 5 VC?
TSeigle inserted dialogue in "Scene 3 - Flashback Khe Sanh" a year ago [view]
Eugene
I don't know.
TSeigle edited dialogue in "Scene 3 - Flashback Khe Sanh" a year ago [view]
Eugene
Well since you guys are so interested ill tell you... I was down at CP.
TSeigle edited an action in "Scene 3 - Flashback Khe Sanh" a year ago [view]
This scene shows a group of soldiers sitting in their barracks some cleaning their rifles some resting a couple others playing cards the time is shown in the bottom left reading 1100 hours and disappears when the main character walks. He starts taking off some of his gear.
TSeigle edited an action in "Scene 2 - Man on Fire" a year ago [view]
The main character hangs up the phone and continues his regular morning routine. He gets in his car and starts driving to work and on his way to work about halfway through the commute he notices the same man who was on fire in his home walk out into the middle of the road which causes him to swerve and have a flash back when he was serving in Vietnam during the war.
TSeigle edited an action in "Scene 2 - Man on Fire" a year ago [view]
The next scene cuts to a close up of the main characters face and slowly zooms out to reveal that he is sitting alone at a table in his home eating breakfast and reading the paper. After he finishes eating breakfast and folds the paper over and leaves it on the table, he stands up and carries his plate over to the sink he turns the water on and begins washing the plate as he washes the plate you can see over his shoulder when the camera is at his front, someone sitting at the table. The man sitting at the table is completely engulfed in flames the phone rings and the the camera pans over to the other side of him when he answers the phone and the camera pans back and the man on fire is gone.
TSeigle edited an action in "Scene 1 - Preliminary" a year ago [view]
The soldiers put out the candle in the poorly lit listening post causing the screen to fade to black. The Screen suddenly lights up from muzzle flash and you can hear automatic gunfire. The Gunfire stops after a few moments and everything goes back to black you can hear whispering and foot steps running away as the movie title fades in. After the movie title appears with music in the background it has a sudden cut to the next scene.
TSeigle inserted dialogue in "Scene 1 - Preliminary" a year ago [view]
unnamed
*whisper* Give 'em the challenge.
TSeigle edited dialogue in "Scene 1 - Preliminary" a year ago [view]
eugene
*Slightly louder than a whisper* War Weapons Week...
TSeigle edited dialogue in "Scene 1 - Preliminary" a year ago [view]
Unnamed
*Whisper* What, what is it? I didn't hear nothin'.
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