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This is your first scene. Last edited by noodle83, on 02/01/2012. 0 comments. More scene info.

1Ext. wiltshire close council estate,chelsea,london-morning

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The estate was large, red brick, imposing cluster of four buildings, towering above the elegant, charming houses, clearly offended by the dwarfing presence of such monstrosity. The effort was made to groom the buildings and the neat hedge run around the estate but they were in vain. Adding to the unfortunate visuals was the wind.It felt double duty to roam in between the buildings adding audio effects to the feral feel. It was an eyesore in the neighbourhood of plenty.

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The one pretty thing was an old tree which branches almost reached the windows of the second floor flat. Some of them were in fact tapping on the glass. The curtains were only partly drawn and the windowsill was covered in books, make up and toys.

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2int. wiltshire estate,Alana's flat- early morning

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The flat is dark and quiet, apart from the sliver of light coming from the underneath of the bathroom door and a sound of an electric toothbrush. The door to the bathroom opens and ALANA MOORE (39)comes out in a t-shirt and pants. Her hair is messy and she's still only half awake and clearly cold. She tiptoes through the dark corridor to the kitchen, tripping over cardboard boxes. In the kitchen she puts the kettle and the central heating on. She then makes her way to the bedroom where there is more cardboard boxes marked books, clothes, papers and puts bedside lamp on. Her clothes lay crumpled on the floor next to the bed. She shakes them up and dresses herself. It's a pair of navy polyester pants and grey shirt with a name badge and the ROSECO supermarket logo. She does the best she can with the hair and leaves the room.

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3int.wiltshire estate,alana's flat,kitchen- early morning

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Alana makes a cup of instant coffee in a mug flask and goes to the corridor where she slips her black work shoes on, puts her coat and grabs her bag. She pushes the door of another bedroom and peaks in. She then adjust her bag and checks the time on the wall clock visible through the living room. It's 5.30am.

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4ext. king's road, bus stop- early morning

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Alana stands on the bus stop, hands in pockets and shivering. She is getting impatient and there is no sign of a bus. The street is empty. She gives up on waiting and sets on walking instead.

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Intro to Chloe and Keira Last edited by noodle83, on 02/01/2012. 0 comments. More scene info.

5int. alana's flat, girl's bedroom- morning

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KEIRA(14) and CHLOE(19)are asleep in the bunk beds with younger sister taking the bottom part. The room is painted ugly shade of pink and medium sized, but well put together with two desks and a room divider to help create a separate space. There is more of the boxes similar to the one in Alana's bedroom and corridor as well as filled bin bags and few weekend bags.One of the desks is converted into the vanity table with three wing mirror and enough accessories to open small shop, while other is overflowing with papers, books and craft materials It's messy within the reason and quite bright despite the large tree with the branches almost touching the outside window. The windowsill is cluttered with toys, make up and books. The windows themselves are cheap plastic which creates nasty condensation inside, causing moisture and dump concentration in the corners.

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Two alarm clocks start ringing at the same time to no avail. The girls stay buried under the duvets.

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Intro to ROSECO Last edited by noodle83, on 02/01/2012. 0 comments. More scene info.

6 int. roseco supermarket- morning

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The Supermarket is massive. Absolutely vast space filled with white fridges, grey aisles, bright lights and THE HUM! Loud, unbearable, hostile humming and buzzing. The noise is over exaggerated to match Alana's subjective experience.

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Alana sits on the till in row of ten.All of them identical white islands.She's close enough to see her colleagues but too far to talk to them. The customers' lips move but all she can hear is the buzzing and white noises, disrupted only by loud beeb, every time the item passes through the scanner. She smiles weakly when the old lady is adamant to make conversation and her own lips also start moving but she can't even hear her own words, just humming.

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7 int.alana's flat, girl's bedroom- morning

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Chloe stumbled out off bed and pulled the duvet from the top bunk where Keira is still sleeping despite the snoozed alarm going off again.

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chloe

Get up, get up! It's 10 past 8.

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Keira stirs and mumbles incoherently and Chloe gives up.

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8 int.alana's flat, bathroom-morning

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Chloe's face reflected in the mirror. Big smile on her face, but serious eyes.

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chloe

I really feel I was born to do it and if you give me a chance I will not let you down...Since I've lost my father I had to help my mum to look after my little sister and just want to show everyone that I can do this, and for my dad to be proud, because he is watching me from heaven, and my mum lost her job and now she just works part time in the supermarket...I'm gonna sing Stutter by Elastica...

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She draws the big breath to start singing when the doors open and Keira burst into the bathroom.

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chloe (CONT'D)

What the fuck?! Knock Keira!

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Keira shrugs her arms and pulling her pants down sits down on the loo. She reaches to the toothbrush and the toothpaste on the sink and and starts brushing her teeth still on the toilet.

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chloe (CONT'D)

That's gross!

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Chloe ignores her sister and finishes brushing her teeth gets of the loo, pulling her pants with one hand. She rinses the toothbrush, sprinkles her face with water and leaves the bathroom.

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9 int.13 sloane avenue,artur zamoysky's house,kitchen-morning

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Meet Arthur Zamoyski Last edited by noodle83, on 02/01/2012. 0 comments. More scene info.

ARTUR ZAMOYSKY(54) attempts to make a coffee in his overcomplicated coffee maker. He looks with dissaproval at the shiny monstrosity hissing and spitting the steam but failing to produce more than a trickle of black liquid. He sights with annoyance and pulls a jar of instant coffee from the cupboard. He fills the mug with water and moves through open plan kitchen to the living area where he settles by the curtainless window settee looking out at the passing people.

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10 int. alana's flat, kitchen-morning

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Keira is rummaging through the kitchen drawers, clearly looking for something. She's now dressed in school uniform of green shirt and grey, too short trousers. Her legs are painfully skinny and ankles are on full show exposing very bright yellow socks in black, worn out ballet pumps. She claims the kitchen work top to check the top of the fridge. Not satisfied she jumps down and sticks her head into the living room where Chloe stretched on the carpet furiously repeats series of belly crunches.

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keira

Did mum leave me any money?

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11 int. alana's flat, living room-morning

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TV is playing fitness DVD and Chloe desperately tries to keep up with the fitness coach on the screen barking the orders.

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chloe

17!..18!..19!..20!..What do you want?

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She slops exhausted and sweaty on the carpet.

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keira

Did mummy leave any money for me?

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chloe

No, what do you need the money for?

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keira

The Art Camp, it's the last day today, she told me last week she would try to come up with the money.

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chloe

How much?

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keira

35 quid, it's discounted, normally it's like 100 and 20.

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chloe

Are you like retarded? She's not gonna give you 35 quid, you know the gas bill came yesterday. Better forget it, it's not like you were gonna be Picasso or something,

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Keira looks at her sister, her face set and eyes narrow.

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keira

Chloe, you thighs look sooo fat when you lying down. I would only entertain James in total darkness if I were you.

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chloe

Fuck off!!!

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Keira turns around and grabbing her school bag leaves the house.

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Chloe scrambles off the floor, tears in her eyes she looks down at her thighs squeezing them in between her fingers. The skin is chubby and forms into visible orange peel effect. She bursts crying.

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chloe (CONT'D)

Stop it stupid, you have an audition tomorrow! I would like to say that I am very excited to be here and will give my absolute best...Yes, I believe I can win this competition. I will be a star, I know I will...

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She wipes her tears, rewind the DVD and gets back on the carpet.

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outside Artur's house Last edited by noodle83, on 02/01/2012. 0 comments. More scene info.

12 ext. sloane avenue-morning

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Keira walks to school. She drags her feet, sour expression on her face. She stops to pull her trousers slightly down so the ankles are a bit more covered but she's not very successful. She suddenly pulls her backpack off her shoulders and starts rummaging through it unaware of a man watching her from his window. She eventually pulls creased piece of paper and sights with relief. She zips up her bag and stands up only then seeing a man looking at her from his house. Her eyes travel up to the first floor and she gasps.

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13 int. 13 Sloane avenue,Artur's bedroom-morning

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BIANCA (29), Artur's current girlfriend stretches naked in front of the window. She giggles at the expression of the schoolgirl and moves away from the window. She falls back into the crispiest, whitest bed in a luxurious, although slightly bare bedroom. She gets p again and not bothering to dress leaves the bedroom.

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14 ext. sloane avenue-same time

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Keira keeps on walking with Artur looking out until she's out of sight, Bianca comes naked behind him and wraps her arms around him.

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15 int. 13 sloane avenue,open plan kitchen/living room-same time

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Artur turns startled and looks at naked Bianca.

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artur

God, you scared me! Look at you, you look spectacular.

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He pulls her onto his lap

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artur (CONT'D)

Although maybe not the best look for Wednesday morning, my cleaner will be here any minute.

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He takes off his robe and stays only in his long strappy pyjama bottoms. She puts it on with a smile.

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bianca

How about some coffee then

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artur

Be my guest, but don't attempt bloody coffee maker. I'm sure it's possessed and the liquid it from time to time spits out is actually poison. Kaya, my cleaner Milena and Zoe knows how to operate it.

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Bianca laughs and approaches the coffee machine. She presses few buttons, puts the coffee in and after a few promising sounds there is a steady trickle of dark espresso sipping into the cup. She makes another cup for Artur looking at her in astonishment.

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bianca

Look at your poor

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