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noodle83 deleted the scene "Chloe wakes up" on 02/01/2012. noodle83 made 43 other changes.
noodle83 deleted the scene "Chloe wakes up" on 02/01/2012
noodle83 edited the scene titled "Chloe wakes up" on 02/01/2012
noodle83 added a new scene titled "Chloe wakes up" on 02/01/2012
noodle83 added an action in "Intro to ROSECO" on 02/01/2012 [view]
Alana sits on the till in row of ten.All of them identical white islands.She's close enough to see her colleagues but too far to talk to them. The customers' lips move but all she can hear is the buzzing and white noises, disrupted only by loud beeb, every time the item passes through the scanner. She smiles weakly when the old lady is adamant to make conversation and her own lips also start moving but she can't even hear her own words, just humming.
noodle83 edited the scene titled "Chloe wakes up" on 02/01/2012
noodle83 added a new scene titled "Chloe wakes up" on 02/01/2012
noodle83 edited an action in "Intro to ROSECO" on 02/01/2012 [view]
The Supermarket is massive. Absolutely vast space filled with white fridges, grey aisles, bright lights and THE HUM! Loud, unbearable, hostile humming and buzzing. The noise is over exaggerated to match Alana's subjective experience.
noodle83 edited an action in "Intro to ROSECO" on 02/01/2012 [view]
The Supermarket is massive. Absolutely vast space filled with white fridges, grey aisles, bright lights and THE HUM! Loud, unbearable, hostile humming and buzzing. The noise is overexadurated
noodle83 added an action in "Intro to ROSECO" on 02/01/2012 [view]
The Supermarket is massive. Absolutely vast space filled with white fridges, grey aisles, bright lights and HUM
noodle83 added a slugline in "Intro to ROSECO" on 02/01/2012 [view]
INT. 6.int. roseco supermarket-later morning
noodle83 added a new scene titled "Intro to ROSECO" on 02/01/2012
noodle83 edited an action in "Intro to Chloe and Keira" on 02/01/2012 [view]
KEIRA(14) and CHLOE(19)are asleep in the bunk beds with younger sister taking the bottom part. The room is medium sized, but well put together with two desks and a room divider to help create a separate space. It's messy within the reason and quite bright despite the large tree with the branches almost touching the outside window. The windowsill is cluttered with toys, make up and books. The windows themselves are cheap plastic which creates nasty condensation inside, causing moisture and dump concentration in the corners.
noodle83 added an action in "Intro to Chloe and Keira" on 02/01/2012 [view]
Two alarm clocks start ringing at the same time to no avail. The girls stay buried under the duvets.
noodle83 added an action in "Intro to Chloe and Keira" on 02/01/2012 [view]
KEIRA(14) and CHLOE(19)are asleep in the bunk beds with younger sister taking the bottom part. The room is medium size but well put together with two desks and a room divider to help create a separate space. It's messy within the reason and quite bright despite the large tree with the branches almost touching the outside window. The windowsill is cluttered with toys, make up and books. The windows themselves are cheap plastic which creates nasty condensation inside causing moisture and dump concentrating in the corners.
noodle83 added a slugline in "Intro to Chloe and Keira" on 02/01/2012 [view]
INT. 5int. the moore's flat, girl's bedroom-later morning
noodle83 deleted the scene "Intro to Kaira and Chloe" on 02/01/2012
noodle83 added a new scene titled "Intro to Kaira and Chloe" on 02/01/2012
noodle83 added a slugline in "the intro to Alana's flat" on 02/01/2012 [view]
INT. int. the moore's flat,girl's bedroom-morning
noodle83 added an action in "the intro to Alana's flat" on 02/01/2012 [view]
Alana stands on the bus stop, hands in pockets and shivering. She is getting impatient and there is no sign of a bus. The street is empty. She gives up on waiting and sets on walking instead.
noodle83 edited the scene titled "Intro to Chloe and Keira" on 02/01/2012
noodle83 edited the scene titled "Intro to Chloe and Keira" on 02/01/2012
noodle83 added a new scene titled "Intro to Chloe and Keira" on 02/01/2012
noodle83 added a slugline in "the intro to Alana's flat" on 02/01/2012 [view]
INT. 4ext. king's road, bus stop-morning
noodle83 added an action in "the intro to Alana's flat" on 02/01/2012 [view]
Alana makes a cup of instant coffee in a mug flask and goes to the corridor where she slips her black work shoes on, puts her coat and grabs her bag. She pushes the door of another bedroom and peaks in. She then adjust her bag and checks the time on the wall clock visible through the living room. It's 5.30am.
noodle83 edited a slugline in "the intro to Alana's flat" on 02/01/2012 [view]
INT. 3int.wiltshire estate,the moore's flat,kitchen-morning
noodle83 edited a slugline in "the intro to Alana's flat" on 02/01/2012 [view]
INT. 2int. wiltshire estate,The moore's flat-morning
noodle83 edited a slugline in "the intro to Alana's flat" on 02/01/2012 [view]
INT. 3int.wiltshire estate, moore's flat
noodle83 edited a slugline in "the intro to Alana's flat" on 02/01/2012 [view]
INT. 2int. wiltshire estate,moore's flat-morning
noodle83 edited a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 02/01/2012 [view]
INT. 1Ext. wiltshire close council estate,chelsea,london-morning
noodle83 added a slugline in "the intro to Alana's flat" on 02/01/2012 [view]
INT. int.wiltshire
noodle83 added an action in "the intro to Alana's flat" on 02/01/2012 [view]
The flat is dark and quiete apart from the sliver of light coming from the bathroom and a sound of an electric toothbrush. The door to the bathroom opens and ALANA MOORE (39)comes out in a t-shirt and pants. Her hair is messy and she's still only half awake and clearly cold. She tiptoes through the dark corridor to the kitchen where she puts the kettle and the central heating on. She then makes her way to the bedroom and puts bedside table lamp on. Her clothes lay crumpled on the floor next to the bed. She shakes them on and dresses herself. It's a pair of navy polyester pants and grey shirt with a name badge and the ROSECO supermarket logo
noodle83 edited a slugline in "the intro to Alana's flat" on 02/01/2012 [view]
INT. int. wiltshire estate,moore's flat-morning
noodle83 edited a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 02/01/2012 [view]
INT. Ext. wiltshire close council estate,chelsea,london-morning
noodle83 added a slugline in "the intro to Alana's flat" on 02/01/2012 [view]
INT. int. wiltshire estate,moore's flat-day
noodle83 edited the scene titled "the intro to Alana's flat" on 02/01/2012
noodle83 edited the scene titled "the intro to Alana's flat" on 02/01/2012
noodle83 added a new scene titled "the intro to Alana's flat" on 02/01/2012
noodle83 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/01/2012 [view]
The one pretty thing was an old tree which branches almost reached the windows of the second floor flat. Some of them were in fact tapping on the glass. The curtains were only partly drawn and the windowsill was covered in books, make up and toys.
noodle83 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/01/2012 [view]
The estate was large, red brick, imposing cluster of four buildings, towering above the elegant, charming houses, clearly offended by the dwarfing presence of such monstrosity. The effort was made to groom the buildings and the neat hedge run around the estate but they were in vain. Adding to the unfortunate visuals was the wind.It felt double duty to roam in between the buildings adding audio effects to the feral feel. It was an eyesore in the neighbourhood of plenty.
noodle83 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/01/2012 [view]
The one pretty thing was an old tree which branches almost reached the windows of the second floor flat.
noodle83 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/01/2012 [view]
The estate was a large, red brick, imposing cluster of four buildings, towering above the elegant, charming houses, clearly offended by the dwarfing presence of such monstrosity. The effort was made to groom the buildings and the neat hedge run around the estate but they were in vain. Adding to the unfortunate visuals was the wind.It felt double duty to roam in between the buildings adding audio effects to the feral feel. It was an eyesore in the neighbourhood of plenty.
noodle83 added a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 02/01/2012 [view]
INT. Ext. wiltshire close council estate,chelsea,london-day
noodle83 created this project! on 02/01/2012
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