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noodle83 added dialogue in "outside Artur's house" on 02/01/2012. noodle83 made 92 other changes.
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bianca
Look at your poor
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Bianca laughs and approaches the coffee machine. She presses few buttons, puts the coffee in and after a few promising sounds there is a steady trickle of dark espresso sipping into the cup. She makes another cup for Artur looking at her in astonishment.
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artur
Be my guest, but don't attempt bloody coffee maker. I'm sure it's possessed and the liquid it from time to time spits out is actually poison. Kaya, my cleaner Milena and Zoe knoiws how to operate it.
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bianca
How about some coffee then
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He takes off his robe and stays only in his long strappy byjama bottoms. She puts it on with a smile.
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artur
Although maybe not the best look for Wednesday morning, my cleaner will be here any minute.
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He pulls her onto his lap
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artur
God, you scared me! Look at you, you look spectacular.
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Artur turns startled and looks at naked Bianca.
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INT. 15 int. 13 sloane avenue,open plan kitchen/living room-same time
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Keira keeps on walking with Artur looking out until she's out of sight, Bianca comes naked behind him and wraps her arms around him.
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INT. 14 ext. sloane avenue-same time
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BIANCA (29), Artur's current girlfriend stretches naked in front of the window. She giggles at the expression of the schoolgirl and moves away from the window. She falls back into the crispiest, whitest bed in a luxurious, although slightly bare bedroom. She gets p again and not bothering to dress leaves the bedroom.
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INT. 13 int. 13 Sloane avenue,Artur's bedroom-morning
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Keira walks to school. She drags her feet, sour expression on her face. She stops to pull her trousers slightly down so the ankles are a bit more covered but she's not very successful. She suddenly pulls her backpack off her shoulders and starts rummaging through it unaware of a man watching her from his window. She eventually pulls some crissed
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Keira walks to school. She drags her feet, sour expression on her face. She stops to pull her trousers slightly down so the ankles are a bit more covered but she's not very successful. She suddenly pulls her backpack off her shoulders and starts rummaging through it unaware of a man watching her from his window. She eventually pulls some crimpeled
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INT. 12 ext. sloane avenue-morning
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She wipes her tears, rewind the DVD and gets back on the carpet.
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chloe
Stop it stupid, you have an audition tomorrow! I would like to say that I am very excited to be here and will give my absolute best...Yes, I believe I can win this competition. I will be a star, I know I will...
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KEIRA(14) and CHLOE(19)are asleep in the bunk beds with younger sister taking the bottom part. The room is painted ugly shade of pink and medium sized, but well put together with two desks and a room divider to help create a separate space. There is more of the boxes similar to the one in Alana's bedroom and corridor as well as filled bin bags and few weekend bags.One of the desks is converted into the vanity table with three wing mirror and enough accessories to open small shop, while other is overflowing with papers, books and craft materials It's messy within the reason and quite bright despite the large tree with the branches almost touching the outside window. The windowsill is cluttered with toys, make up and books. The windows themselves are cheap plastic which creates nasty condensation inside, causing moisture and dump concentration in the corners.
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The flat is dark and quiet, apart from the sliver of light coming from the underneath of the bathroom door and a sound of an electric toothbrush. The door to the bathroom opens and ALANA MOORE (39)comes out in a t-shirt and pants. Her hair is messy and she's still only half awake and clearly cold. She tiptoes through the dark corridor to the kitchen, tripping over cardboard boxes. In the kitchen she puts the kettle and the central heating on. She then makes her way to the bedroom where there is more cardboard boxes marked books, clothes, papers and puts bedside lamp on. Her clothes lay crumpled on the floor next to the bed. She shakes them up and dresses herself. It's a pair of navy polyester pants and grey shirt with a name badge and the ROSECO supermarket logo. She does the best she can with the hair and leaves the room.
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Chloe scrambles off the floor, tears in her eyes she looks down at her thighs squeezing them in between her fingers. The skin is chubby and forms into visible orange peel effect. She bursts crying.
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Keira turns around and grabbing her school bag leaves the house.
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chloe
Fuck off!!!
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keira
Chloe, you thighs look sooo fat when you lying down. I would only entertain James in total darkness if I were you.
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Keira looks at her sister, her face set and eyes narrow.
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chloe
Are you like retarded? She's not gonna give you 35 quid, you know the gas bill came yesterday. Better forget it, it's not like you were gonna be Picasso or something,
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chloe
Are you like retarded? She's not gonna give you 35 quid, you know the gas bill came yesterday. Better forget it, it's not like you were gonna be Picasso or something
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Keira looks at her sister
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chloe
Are you like retarded? She's not gonna give you 35 quid, you know the gas bill came yesterday. Forget it Picasso
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keira
35 quid, it's discounted, normally it's like 100 and 20.
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chloe
How much?
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keira
The Art Camp, it's the last day today, she told me last week she would try to come up with the money.
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chloe
No, what do you need the money for?
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keira
Did mummy leave any money for me?
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She slops exhausted and sweaty on the carpet.
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chloe
17!..18!..19!..20!..What do you want?
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TV is playing fitness DVD and Chloe desperately tries to keep up with the fitness coach on the screen barking the orders.
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INT. 11 int. alana's flat, living room-morning
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keira
Did mum leave me any money?
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chloe
I really feel I was born to do it and if you give me a chance I will not let you down...Since I've lost my father I had to help my mum to look after my little sister and just want to show everyone that I can do this, and for my dad to be proud, because he is watching me from heaven, and my mum lost her job and now she just works part time in the supermarket...I'm gonna sing Stutter by Elastica...
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Keira is rummaging through the kitchen drawers, clearly looking for something. She's now dressed in school uniform of green shirt and grey, too short trousers. Her legs are painfully skinny and ankles are on full show exposing very bright yellow socks in black, worn out ballet pumps. She claims the kitchen work top to check the top of the fridge. Not satisfied she jumps down and sticks her head into the living room where Chloe stretched on the carpet furiously repeats series of belly crunches.
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INT. 10 int. alana's flat, kitchen-morning
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INT. 9 int. 13 sloane avenue, arthur's zamoyski's house,open plan kitchen/living room-morning
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ARTUR ZAMOYSKY(54) attempts to make a coffee in his overcomplicated coffee maker. He looks with dissaproval at the shiny monstrosity hissing and spitting the steam but failing to produce more than a trickle of black liquid. He sights with annoyance and pulls a jar of instant coffee from the cupboard. He fills the mug with water and moves through open plan kitchen to the living area where he settles by the curtainless window settee looking out at the passing people.
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ARTUR ZAMOYSKY(54) attempts to make a coffee in his overcomplicated coffee maker. He looks with dissaproval at the shiny monstrosity hissing and spitting the steam but failing to produce more than a trickle of black liquid. He sights with annoyance and pulls a jar of instant coffee from the cupboard. He fills the mug with water and moves through open plan kitchen to the living area where he settles by the curtainless window settee looking out at the passing people.
noodle83 deleted the scene "Keira's looking for money" on 02/01/2012
noodle83 deleted the scene "Keira's looking for money" on 02/01/2012
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