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Steve
I'll never complain about my life being boring again.
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Steve comes up behind him and hits him in the back of the head with the weight.  Chris falls to the floor, unconscious.
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Chris
Alright, here I...
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Steve looks around the room and finds some old free weights.  He picks one up and then hides against the wall.  Chris walks through the door, carrying a chainsaw.
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STEVE CoNt.
Something heavy...need something heavy...
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Steve moves his hands toward his back pocket and pulls out the pocket knife that Mike had given him on Monday.  He cuts the ropes that are tying his hands together and unties his legs.
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Steve
Fuck!  How am I gonna get out of here?...I've got it, Mike's knife!  How could I be so dumb?
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Chris exits the room.
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Chris
Probably, yeah.  But at least I'm gonna be breathing past four o'clock today.  Anyway, don't go anywhere.  I'm gonna go grab my chainsaw.  Be back in a flash.
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Steve
You're fucking crazy!  You know that, right?
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Chris
Now, now, what kind of nemesis would I be if I didn't explain my master plan to you before I killed you?  Not a very good one.
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Steve
Why are you telling me all this?  Why haven't you just killed me already?
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Chris
I disagree.  When the cops find Mike's body, they'll come to the office asking questions.  When they get to me, I'll inform them that you guys had been having a little prank war that may have gotten out of hand.  When they get to Kathy, she'll inform them that you were looking for Mike today and angrily stormed out of the office to go to his place.  After these damning interviews, the cops will start looking for you.  The first place they'll go is your house, where I'll have already packed away some of your clothes and personal effects.  They'll assume that you're on the run and start a man hunt for you.  But they won't ever find you because I will have disposed of your body long before the man hunt ever begins.
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Steve
How're you gonna pin this on me?  You'll never get away with it.
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Chris
Sorry, Steve.  It's not so much that I want to kill you, it's that I have to kill you.  I overheard you and Mike talking about your stupid Craig's List idea on Monday, and I realized that it'd be the perfect opportunity for me to finally kill Mike and get away with it, by framing you for the murder.
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Steve
But, why do you want to kill me?  I've never done anything to you.
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Chris
Why?!  You can't be serious.  That jerk had made my work life a living hell ever since he started working with me...always insulting me and threatening me.
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Steve
You killed Mike?  But, why?
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Chris
Try not to look so shocked, Steve.  You know, Mike also had that same stupid look on his face before I killed him.
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Steve
...Chris?
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A dark figure enters the room.  When he steps out of the shadows, we can see that it is Chris.
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STEVE (INTERNAL MONOLOGU
So here I am.  Trapped by an unknown psychopath in a dark room, with no clue as to who he is and no way out.
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Steve is in a dark room, tied to a chair.
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INT. INT. DARK ROOM - UNKNOWN
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Just then, Steve is hit from behind by a mysterious figure and falls into unconsciousness.
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STEVE CoNt.
Holy shit!
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Walking slowly, Steve moves deeper into the house until he finds Mike's body on the floor, lying in a pool of blood.
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Steve
Mike...?
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INT. INT. HOUSE - AFTERNOON
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Steve goes to pound on Mike's door, but finds that it's slightly open.  He opens the door the rest of the way and walks into the house.
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Steve
Hey, Mike!  I'm coming for you, you stupid bastard!
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Steve pulls up into Mike's driveway and gets out of his car.  He walks up to Mike's front door.
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INT. EXT. HOUSE - AFTERNOON
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Steve storms out of the office.
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Steve
Unless being an asshole has suddenly become an illness, I don't think he's sick...never mind, I'm sure he's actually sick.  In fact, I think I'll go see how he's doing.  Thanks, Kathy.  I'll be taking the afternoon off.
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Kathy
...No.  He left a message this morning saying he was sick and wouldn't be able to make it into the office..
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Steve
Have you seen that prick, Mike, today?
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Kathy
Hello, Steve.  What can I do for you?
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Steve
Good idea, Chris.  Thanks.
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Chris
Nope.  Why don't you try Kathy in H.R., she'd probably know where he is.
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Steve
Of course!  How could I have been so blind?  Who else would've been able to prank me at the office without me noticing?  And he could've gone and trashed my house at anytime yesterday; I wasn't at the office, so I wouldn't have seen him step out for an hour or two.  I am gonna fuck that bastard up!  Have you seen him around today?
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Chris
What reason would I have to lie?  I'm guessing that if this whole thing was Mike's idea, he's probably been the one screwing with you this whole time.
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Steve
No way.  Your just messing with me...right?
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Steve
Mike's. why?
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Chris
Well, the thing you said about not having any enemies isn't exactly true.  I think Mike was pretty upset that you got that last promotion instead of him.  Ever since then he's been bad mouthing you to anyone that'll listen.
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Steve
Mike's, why?
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Chris
Damn, that's a pretty messed up situation you got yourself into.  Just a quick question though.  Was it your idea, or Mike's, to look for an enemy on Craig's List?
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Steve
You're gonna think this is stupid, but...it all started on Monday morning.  I was complaining about how boring my life was to Mike, and he suggested that I was bored because everyone liked me too much for me to have any enemies.  So, we ended up looking for an enemy for me on Craig's List.  Someone else who was bored, to have a bit of a prank war with.  We found a guy, and things were going fine at first, but then he turned out to be a psycho.  He trashed my place, and now he's threatening to kill me.  To make things worse, I've never even seen him so I don't know who to look out for.
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Chris
C'mon, man, I've got time.
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Steve
Never mind.  It's a long story.
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