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NPGpolo88 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/19/2008. NPGpolo88 made 2 other changes. more
MILEs
No. God, what happened to you?
NPGpolo88 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/29/2008. NPGpolo88 made 13 other changes. more
JAKE takes the cig, lights it and begins smoking; it is obvious he used to smoke. JAKE takes a moment and looks at how the cig looks in his hand and remembers its familiarity. MILES turns on the boombox, the music is different from what was in JAKE'S CAR and seems to fit these two old friends well.
NPGpolo88 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/28/2008. NPGpolo88 made 10 other changes. more
JAKE takes the cig, lights it and begins smoking; it is obvious he used to smoke. JAKE takes a moment and looks at how the cig looks in his hand, remembering its familiarity. MILES is turning on the boombox, the music is different from what was in JAKE'S CAR and seems to fit these two old friends well.
NPGpolo88 inserted an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/28/2008. NPGpolo88 made 31 other changes. more
As JAKE sees the pathetic apartment he looks disgusted over MILES' shoulder. As MILES turns to go back into the apartment JAKE glances back down the stairs and we think for a split second he might leave.
edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/28/2008. more
JAKE walks brusquely away from the Dick's in employee uniform. He has obviously been working there for sometime. He still carries some of his former heaviness in his gaze, and he is tired from working. He shoulders past a male customer on his way into the store making the man move to the side. The man looks at JAKE disdainfully as he passes.
 

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