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Big event/ turning points Last edited by everyonewrites, on 07/24/2011. 0 comments. More scene info.

int. - hospital - day

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Jill

Wake up, honey. It's you're last day in the hospital.

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Jack

Wha-?

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Jill

In the national history museum? The light? Do you remember?

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Jack

Yeah, yeah. How long was I out?

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Jill

About 2 days.

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Jack

2 DAYS?

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Jill

Yeah, out cold. Everyone's been worried, especially billy.

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Jack

Can I go out now?

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Jill

Almost. the doctor wants to check on you.

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Jack

Okay.

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Jill leaves. Jack waits a little, then peeks out at the hall, and then heads down the hall. As he leaves, we see an orange on the nightstand.

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Ext. - D.C. - day

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Jack comes out of a suit store and he starts running towards a guarded building. Two men stop him before he can reach the entrance.

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Man 1

(looking dangerous) Hold on, sir, where do you think you're going?

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CIA Jack

(Jack's switched personality) I'd like to get into headquarters.

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Man 1

i'm sorry, sir, i'm going to need to ask you to leave.

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CIA Jack

Come on, don't you remember me?

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Man 1

Sir? Please walk away now.

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CIA Jack

And if I say no?

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The two men escort him away and throw him outside the gate.

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CIA Jack (CONT'D)

Well, okay, you could do that...

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A paper blows in his face. (hidden to the audience) he bolts up, and runs.

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Int. - jack's garage - night

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Jack puts a nerf gun, a chemistry set, a cell phone, salt and pepper, into a duffel bag and then drops the paper (Now shown to the audience to be a pic of Centipede) on top before zipping it up. he picks it up and walks outside.

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int. - starbucks - day

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CIA Jack takes out his cell phone and chooses an app called gps tracker. a radar shows two dots, one in the next block, the other three blocks over. He flips a coin.

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ciA JACK

I guess i'm only going a block.

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He heads over, and tackles a hooded man, with a large crunch! Squopcht! a liquid starts to come out.

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CIA Jack (CONT'D)

Oh my god, are you okay?

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hoodie

Yeah, i'm fine, but you squished most of my cantaloupe.

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CIA Jack

What?

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hoodie

(gets up) Yeah, I sell cantaloupe. opens jacket, shows many cantaloupes, some of which are squished. you wanna buy one?

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CIA Jack

I'll pass, thanks. (he walks away) Augh! i was so close! 2 blocks to recognition! Shoot!

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His phone starts to ring

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CIA Jack (CONT'D)

Hello?

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Nick

Hi Dad. Where are you? the doctor's in a frenzy!

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cia jack

i'm... away on business.

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Nick

Business?

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cia jack

Yeah.... Business.

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Nick

Dad, come on. I kno- wait, who are you? what are you doing?

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CIA Jack

Nick?

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Nick

What? (Static) no! I don't (static) Daaaad! (Static) (static) (Long static)

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CIA Jack

Nick!

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low voice over phone

If you ever want to see your family again, come to my hideout. I want to finish what you just started. I know how you'll track me there, too. *Click*

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Takes out tracking app, zoom in on phone, showing a signal, quickly heading north. zoom out once dot stops at destination

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