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everyonewrites added an action in "Big event" on 07/24/2011. everyonewrites made 30 other changes.
everyonewrites added an action in "Big event" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Jill leaves. jack waits a little, then peeks out at the hall, and then heads down the hall. as he leaves, we see an orange on the nightstand.
everyonewrites added dialogue in "Big event" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Jack
Okay.
everyonewrites added an action in "Big event" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Jill
everyonewrites added dialogue in "Big event" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Jack
Can i go out now?
everyonewrites added dialogue in "Big event" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Jill
yeah, out cold.
everyonewrites added dialogue in "Big event" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Jack
2 DAYS?
everyonewrites added dialogue in "Big event" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Jill
about 2 days.
everyonewrites edited dialogue in "Big event" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Jack
Yeah, yeah. How long was I out?
everyonewrites added dialogue in "Big event" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Jack
Yeah, yeah. How long was I out.
everyonewrites added dialogue in "Big event" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Jill
In the national history museum? the light? do you remember?
everyonewrites added dialogue in "Big event" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Jack
Wha-?
everyonewrites added dialogue in "Big event" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Jill
Wake up, honey. It's you're last day in the hospital.
everyonewrites added a slugline in "Big event" on 07/24/2011 [view]
INT. int. - hospital - day
everyonewrites edited the scene titled "Big event" on 07/24/2011
everyonewrites added an action in "Opening" on 07/24/2011 [view]
(slow motion) jack pushes Billy and gets hit in the head with the spotlight. Billy repeatably says Mr O'Connor!
everyonewrites added dialogue in "Opening" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Jack
BILLY!
everyonewrites edited an action in "Opening" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Jack sees the spotlight falling
everyonewrites edited dialogue in "Opening" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Jack
Hold on, billy, just wait for us.
(shot of the cable snapping)
everyonewrites added an action in "Opening" on 07/24/2011 [view]
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everyonewrites edited dialogue in "Opening" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Jack
Hold on, billy, just wait for us
everyonewrites edited dialogue in "Opening" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Billy
(Rushes to the elephant)
Come on, Mr. O'Connor!
(we hear a snapping sound, cut to picture of spotlight with frayed, almost broken cables)
everyonewrites added an action in "Opening" on 07/24/2011 [view]
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everyonewrites edited dialogue in "Opening" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Billy
(Rushes to the elephant)
Come on, Mr. O'Connor!
(we hear a snapping sound, cut to picture of spotlight with frayed, almost broken cables)
everyonewrites added dialogue in "Opening" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Billy
(Rushes to the elephant)
Come on, Mr. O'Connor!
(we hear a snapping sound)
everyonewrites added dialogue in "Opening" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Paul
I want airplanes!
everyonewrites added dialogue in "Opening" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Kathleen
I wanna see the fish!
everyonewrites edited dialogue in "Opening" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Billy
Wow! Look at the giant elephant!
everyonewrites edited an action in "Opening" on 07/24/2011 [view]
They walk into the museum. Paul's bummed about not getting to see the airplanes. Cut to inside view of them walking in.
everyonewrites added dialogue in "Opening" on 07/24/2011 [view]
Billy
Wow! ook at the giant elephant
everyonewrites added an action in "Opening" on 07/24/2011 [view]
They walk into the museum. Paul's bummed about not getting to see the airplanes.
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