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Mariana called 911 , and they were going to pick up Median's body in a couple of minutes. Mariana steps back in the room, then hears knocking at the door realizing that it was the police who had come to pick up the body.
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Mariana called 911 , and they were going to pick up Median's body in a couple of minutes.
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Ana
"Okay, I'll wait here."
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Mariana
"Ana, I know this is very hard but everything happens for a reason. Now don't move okay. I am going to call the police so they can come and get the body."
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Mariana gets close enough to Ana to comfort her.
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Ana
"No Median , my little girl! Mariana! My only daughter is dead! Not again please, not the same nightmare twice. First my husband and now my daughter!"
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Mariana then kneels next to Ana, shakes her as a way to wake her up. Ana finally wakes up little by little and comes back to life. Ana sat up and started crying with such emotion that she started yelling.
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INT. Exterior/Interior Afternoon
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Ana's sister, Mariana, is knocking at the door but there is no answer. So then she decides to walk in and looks all around the house.
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Ana
"No Median , my little girl! Mariana daughter is dead not again please not the same nightmare as when my husband died please not again!"
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Mariana then kneels next to Ana shakes her as a way to wake her up. Ana finally wakes up little by little and comes back to life. Ana sat up and started crying with such emotion that she started yelling.
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Mariana
"Oh gosh, what happened! Ana wake up, wake up."
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Mariana
"Oh gosh, what happened!"
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Mariana walks up the stairs and checks in the bathroom, and in Ana's room but nothing. Last but not least she goes into Median's room and sees the closet door open. She goes in there to find Ana laying on Median's dead body's chest.
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Mariana
"Ana! Median! Hello Anyone home?"
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Ana's sister, Marian, is knocking at the door but there is no answer. So then she decides to walk in and looks all around the house.
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Ana puts Median Down, then lays down right next to her. Ana falls asleep....
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Ana *thinking*
'Why didn't of think to come talk to you last night, why didn't I come check on you last night.'
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Ana *thinking*
'Why didn't of think to come talk to you last night, why didn't I come check on you last night.'
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Ana unhangs Median crying with such frustration, then sits on the floor hugging so tight onto Median's soulless body. By that time
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Ana
"Median! No, no, NOO! What have you done, what did I do to push you to this point!"
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Ana wakes up at a good time (7:00a.m.). Gets up to go check on Median. Knocks on Median's door to realize that there's no answer. She gets a very bad feeling about this and rushes downstairs to get knife to be able to open the door. Once she opens the room door, she sees that the bed is empty and neat like Median hadn't slept there. She knocks once again on the bathroom door and n opens to see no one there. Finally she decides to check in Median's big closet. She opens the door, then falls down to her knees, unable to speak or cry just speechless. What she had found was nothing worse but the dead body of her only child. Median had hung herself in her closet.
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Ana wakes up at a good time (7:00a.m.). Gets up to go check on Median. Knocks on Median's door to realize that there's no answer. She gets a very bad feeling about this and rushes downstairs to get
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Ana wakes up at a good time (7:00a.m.)
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INT. Interior - Morning
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Median runs upstairs to her room. Ana just stays there in shock knowing the painful truth then breaks down crying.
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Median
"I..I'm sorry."
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Median then realizes what she had said.
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Median
"See! Times like this I wish my dad hadn't of gone out to look for YOUR sister! If he hadn't paid attention to your whining, he wouldn't of gone out and wouldn't of have gotten in that car accident that cost him his life! Don't you understand the pain I went through when that police man came to knock on our door and tell us that the most important person in my life had died! It was like being dead alive, my dad died! The one person that had always been there for me was no where to be seen again! Sometimes I wish it had been me who died so I wouldn't have to go through this pain. All you say to try to make it better is "forget". That doesn't help at all, yeah I may say I'm stronger now or that I have forgotten but why lie! Why say I have when I perfectly know it's not true!"
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Median runs up stairs to her while Ana just stays there in shock. Then Ana breaks down crying realizing all what her daughter had said, knowing it was nothing but the painful truth.
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Median
"I.. I'm sorry, I couldn't keep this any longer."
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Median finishes saying all she had to say. Then realizes what she had said.
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Median
"See! Times like this I wish my dad hadn't of gone out to look for YOUR sister! If he hadn't paid attention to your whining, he wouldn't of gone and wouldn't of have gotten in that car accident that cost him his life! Don't you understand the pain I went through when that police man came to knock on our door and tell us that the most important person in my life had died! It was like being dead alive, my dad died! The one person that had always been there for me was no where to be seen again! Sometimes I wish it had been me who died so I wouldn't have to go through this pain. All you say to try to make it better is "forget". That doesn't help at all, yeah I may say I'm stronger now or that I have forgotten but why lie! Why say I have when I perfectly know it's not true! Ahh I hate this, leaving to Ohio would be like leaving my dad why don't you understand!"
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Ana
"Look Median it will be hard at first but then you'll get use to it. You have to understand that the only reason we are leaving is for our own good.
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Median smiles and then gets kind of sad.
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Mediun turns around, and sees her mom, then turns back to her friends.
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Median gets off and slams her car door, and walks away.
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INT. Interior - Morning
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Ana stands up with her cup in her hand and walks towards Median,then puts her cup down.
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Median
"Look mom, I don't want to go, I've been here all of my life and it is not fair for you to take me away from it."
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Median wakes up to see that what had looked like a dream, was just exactly and nothing less than the reality she was living in. Median decides to get up to get ready for school.
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Median
"See! Times like this I wish my dad hadn't of gone out to look for YOUR sister! If he hadn't paid attention to your whining, he wouldn't of gone out and wouldn't of have gotten in that car accident that cost him his life! Don't you understand the pain I went through when that police man came to knock on our door and tell us that the most important person in my life had died! It was like being dead alive, my dad died! The one person that had always been there for me was no where to be seen again! Sometimes I wish it had been me who died so I wouldn't have to go through this pain. All you say to try to make it better is "forget". That doesn't help at all, yeah I may say I'm stronger now or that I have forgotten but why lie! Why say I have when I perfectly know it's not true!
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Median
"See! Times like this I wish my dad hadn't of gone out to look for YOUR sister! If he hadn't paid attention to your whining, he wouldn't of gone out and wouldn't of have gotten in that car accident that cost him his life! Don't you understand the pain I went through when that police man came to knock on our door and tell us that the most important person in my life had died!
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Ana and Median are both yelling at each other then Median has an anger burst.
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Ana
"Young lady don't use that tone on me, you owe me respect!"
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Median
"Mom I said I wasn't hungry!"
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