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EmmaShooshan added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago. EmmaShooshan made 43 other changes.
EmmaShooshan added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Nora
(speaking only)
I gotta go outside. I can't breathe here.
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(beat)
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Chuck
You know that's not true, Nora.
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Chuck appears in the doorway.
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Nora
(speaking only)
So did we.
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Betty
(signing)
Don't say that. He has a lovely home.
EmmaShooshan added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Nora
(signing and speaking)
But he got out! He must not be very happy in his prison.
EmmaShooshan added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Betty
(signing)
He lives in a glass cage.
EmmaShooshan added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Nora
(signing and speaking)
I don't! It makes me uneasy. We shouldn't have mice in this house, its not right. Its not clean
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Betty
(signing)
We don't need him. I just like having him around.
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Nora smacks Peter on the shoulder.
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Peter
Mouse.
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Nora
(signing and speaking)
I don't know! The type to need a rat.
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Betty
(signing, amused)
What type of scientist?
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Nora
(speaking and signing)
Well, Chuck shouldn't have given it a rat's name then.
(beat)
It doesn't matter, we don't a rat! You're not that type of scientist, Betty!
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(beat)
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Nora
(speaking and signing)
Well, Chuck shouldn't have given it a rat's name then.
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Peter
(speaking and signing)
Its not a rat, its a mouse.
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Nora
(speaking only, frantic)
Why do we have a rat?
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Nora
(speaking only)
You look rather silly down there!
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Betty helps Nora down from perch.
EmmaShooshan edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Nora
(signing and speaking)
You look rather silly down there!
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Betty
(signing)
You look rather silly up there.
EmmaShooshan added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Nora
You look rather silly down there.
EmmaShooshan edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Betty
You look rather silly up there.
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Betty helps Nora down from her perch.
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Maurice cracks up laughing.
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Anushka nods and follows Chuck out of the kitchen.
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Anushka and the twins stand by the counter. Anushka holds Remy the mouse in her gentle hands, and the twins pet his head.
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Anushka nods and follow
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Chuck
(relieved)
Anush, come bring Remy downstairs, won't you?
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Peter sweeps the fallen Cheerios.
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Nora stands on a chair and refuses to get down.
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Betty, Chuck, and Maurice rush up stairs, prepared for disaster.
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Anushka stands by the counter holds Remy the mouse in her gentle hands. She strokes his head.
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Betty, Chuck, and Maurice rush up stairs.
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INT. KITCHEN, MOMENTS LATER
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Maurice
(signing and speaking)
Remy! Its the mouse!
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Maurice laughs, breathless.
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Maurice
(uninterested)
Yeah, love?
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Sounds of shuffling chairs and spoons hitting the ground are heard from the kitchen.
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Nora rests her head on the table, still half-asleep.
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