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RyanEllington edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." 2 months ago. RyanEllington made 3 other changes. more
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I know they're sensible folk. And if I did not pay my dues they would not force me out of the brotherhood, and would allow me to stay. But if I did not pay my dues, and they kept me on as a brother, then if my son had become a Catholic, to marry a Catholic girl, or to become a state representative in Connecticut, or if he had become a Jew, to marry a Jewish girl, then - if I had not paid my dues - even though they had kept me on as a brother, and, perhaps, because they had kept me on as a brother when they could have forced me out, I would be in their grace, I'd be their debtor, and I would only be half a man, and their grace might not extend to my son's apostasy, because we are Protestant, and I may not have the influence to protect him.
RyanEllington edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." 2 months ago. RyanEllington made 9 other changes. more
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No. Our childhood was difficult, bloody - not unlike his. But our games were ours. He destroyed our gateway into another world - one where the *noise* of pleasure could drown out the silent pangs of utter hopelessness. He was our oppressor. We snuck into his house at night and tied him to his bed. we put an entire roll of cling wrap over his head and poked a few small holes - enough to get a little air in, but hardly enough to breath sufficiently. We watched him over the next several hours as his breathing became more labored. when we thought he was dead, we removed the plastic wrap and untied him. News broke the next day that he'd died in his sleep.
RyanEllington edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago. more
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I remember when she was young, she would rope her brothers into playing these adventure - cowboys and Indians.
RyanEllington edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago. RyanEllington made 4 other changes. more
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You are a man. Don't we all seek out someplace where we can be our worst selves? That isn't cowardice. That's practicality. We need someplace to be our worst selves so that we can prepare to be our best selves when the occasion arises.
RyanEllington added dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago. RyanEllington made 13 other changes. more
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We haven't seen much of him.
 

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