GabrielTejeda edited a slugline in "Gabe and Drew are killed" on 05/02/2011. GabrielTejeda made 47 other changes.
INT. Fade out —
Tommy stabs ben and then he throws him off the dock into the water.
Gabe dies. Ben cries for only a moment until Tommy comes out of freakin' nowhere and get in an intense fight. on a dock on the lake
your gonna be fine...
INT. Fade out —
Hell no dude. what if the killer is out there?
i have two knives. take one, ill hang on to the other.
Dude, there's no one else here. Whatever you have to say stays with us, man.
We missed you dude.
Well all i can say is that its good to be back.
Music begins and shows the boys hanging out and conversing.
Zoom in on Tommy's eyes. Cut to Drew, holding the knife with an "are you kidding" expression. The screen flashes to a sceen where Ryan is holding a knife laughing. The screen flashes again to reveal Drew, still holding the knife with the same expression.
yeah, there were like 10 search parties and the cops were checking houses.
Just don't worry about it.
Great, We all want to know how your doing.
See you later guys.
Okay. That sounds good and we need to catch up.
See you after school.
Okay see ya.
Alright, well I'll see you guys later.
Well that's good to hear.
alright, that sounds good. we do need to catch up.
Hey, Tommy want to hang out after school?
Tommy is walking down a hall after class Ben is following him. GABE comes out of a doorway and gets Tommy's attention.
INT. int. Hallways after class - day —
INT. fade out and fade in to next scene —
Ben and Chris seem disappointed about talking to tommy.
Hey Tommy! what's up?
Tommy is back In School
Tommy walks to his locker and his best friend Ben and Chris try talking to him.
INT. int. hallways - Day —
INT. . —
INT. the camera cuts to the ceiling and pans down to tommy's face. —
the kidnapper walks back upstairs continuing his laugh.
Get...Get away from me!
oh, you did...!
i didn't do anything!
You killed that total stranger.
Im not a killer!
that's right. You're a killer kid!
Oh my God.