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GabrielTejeda edited a slugline in "Gabe and Drew are killed" on 05/02/2011. GabrielTejeda made 47 other changes.
GabrielTejeda edited a slugline in "Gabe and Drew are killed" on 05/02/2011 [view]
INT. Fade out
GabrielTejeda edited an action in "Gabe and Drew are killed" on 05/02/2011 [view]
Tommy stabs ben and then he throws him off the dock into the water.
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Gabe dies. Ben cries for only a moment until Tommy comes out of freakin' nowhere and get in an intense fight. on a dock on the lake
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ben (CONT'D)
your gonna be fine...
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INT. Fade out
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Drew
Hell no dude. what if the killer is out there?
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ben
i have two knives. take one, ill hang on to the other.
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Drew
Dude, there's no one else here. Whatever you have to say stays with us, man.
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Tommy
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drew
We missed you dude.
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tommy
Well all i can say is that its good to be back.
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Music begins and shows the boys hanging out and conversing.
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Zoom in on Tommy's eyes. Cut to Drew, holding the knife with an "are you kidding" expression. The screen flashes to a sceen where Ryan is holding a knife laughing. The screen flashes again to reveal Drew, still holding the knife with the same expression.
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Tommy
But-
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chris
yeah, there were like 10 search parties and the cops were checking houses.
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tommy
Just don't worry about it.
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Ben
Great, We all want to know how your doing.
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Tommy
See you later guys.
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Tommy
Okay. That sounds good and we need to catch up.
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Gabe
See you after school.
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Tommy
Okay see ya.
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Ben
Alright, well I'll see you guys later.
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Gabe
Well that's good to hear.
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Tommy
alright, that sounds good. we do need to catch up.
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Ben
(comes from behind)
Yeah, Tommy. yeah dude, we want to hang out with you, catch up on old times.
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Gabe
Hey, Tommy want to hang out after school?
GabrielTejeda edited an action in "Classroom (2004)" on 05/02/2011 [view]
Tommy is walking down a hall after class Ben is following him. GABE comes out of a doorway and gets Tommy's attention.
GabrielTejeda edited a slugline in "Classroom (2004)" on 05/02/2011 [view]
INT. int. Hallways after class - day
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INT. fade out and fade in to next scene
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Ben and Chris seem disappointed about talking to tommy.
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Ben
Hey Tommy! what's up?
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Tommy is back In School
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Tommy walks to his locker and his best friend Ben and Chris try talking to him.
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INT. int. hallways - Day
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INT. .
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INT. the camera cuts to the ceiling and pans down to tommy's face.
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the kidnapper walks back upstairs continuing his laugh.
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kidnapper
...You did!
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Tommy
Get...Get away from me!
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kidnapper
oh, you did...!
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Tommy
i didn't do anything!
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kidnapper
You killed that total stranger.
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tommy
Im not a killer!
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Kidnapper
that's right. You're a killer kid!
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Tommy
Oh my God.
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