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A tale of woe told by a broken-hearted man named Eli. Life is great as he nears his 21st birthday and meets the love of his life, Mary. As Eli is handed his father's business, Mary makes herself busy with other men. When Eli finds out, he is heartbroken. However, there is nothing he can do: Mary has killed him. During his funeral, his spirit walks the floors, gaping at the sight of his family and friends. In an angry rage, he becomes the king of his own hell. Communicating with a young girl who can somehow see him, he reveals that Mary was his killer. She is, in turn, killed. Now, Eli bosses her around his Hell in an abusive manner until she reminds him of the love they shared.

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translucas234 edited dialogue in "SCENE 3 - THE APPOINTMENT" 10 months ago. translucas234 made 2 other changes. more
ELI (To Audience)
Egad, this is wonderful news! Father's business and all belongs to me! I can only hope I am as gracious and fair as my father is towards his employees.
translucas234 edited dialogue in "SCENE 2 - NINE IN THE AFTERNOON" 11 months ago. translucas234 made 5 other changes. more
HENRY
Good morning, son. Get to the back, we have stock to inventory.
translucas234 added dialogue in "SCENE 3 - THE APPOINTMENT" 11 months ago. translucas234 made 18 other changes. more
ELI (To Audience)
Egad, this is wonderful news! Father's business!
translucas234 added dialogue in "SCENE 3 - THE APPOINTMENT" 11 months ago. more
ELI
(aside)
Father runs a small shop on the outskirts of town. He was very generous in letting me
translucas234 added dialogue in "SCENE 3 - THE APPOINTMENT" 11 months ago. translucas234 made 3 other changes. more
Henry
Well, son. I wanted to get your opinion on something regarding the shop.
 

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