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DaveAllen added a shot in "Scene 2" on 05/17/2014. DaveAllen made 58 other changes.
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Bethany is still underwater, she has gone lifeless. Her eyes twitch side to side, before rolling back and losing life.
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-- Int bathroom
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He places his hand on the padlock that hung from the door, it is no longer open, and the door is sealed.
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Will pauses for a second at the stairwell, he decides against going up and turns to the exit. He arrives at the front door with Amy.
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Will reaches the stairs leading up to the 1st floor, where Bethany is located. He places his hand on the banister.
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--Int Hallway.
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Close up of Killers mask, twitching with anger.
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-- INT BATHROOM
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Will
Bethany!, Scarlett!
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Amy wipes vomit away from her mouth, as is pulled up by her arm. Will and Amy stagger up the stairwell of the basement and come out into the house.
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Will
Amy, get up, we've got to.. got to get out.
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--INT BASEMENT
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Bethany is totally lifeless, yet her eyes appear wide open and aware. With hands running through her hair, he head is submerged into the water.
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--INT BATHROOM
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Amy looks pale faced and stunned, she turns and throws up against the wall.
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Amy
(realising Patricks death)
Pat?
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Will
Oh, fuck
(He gags)
Patrick.
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Patricks body is lying on the floor, Will and amy stand over him. Will shakes his back to trigger a response, but Patrick's body rocks lifeless. Will rolls Patrick's body over, revealing his slashed throat and a pool of blood.
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-INT BASEMENT
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-- INT BASEMENT
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Bethany looks down, Scarlett has a mallet in her hand. She raises the weapon and bludgeons her Bethany's skull before she can let out a scream. Bethany concussed but breathing, drops to her knees in front of the bathtub.
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Bethany looks down, Scarlett has a mallet in her hand. She raises the weapon and bludgeons her Bethany's skull before she can let out a scream.
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Bethany
Okay, now your freaking me out.. what are you..
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Door pushes fully open, revealing a masked figure in the doorway. The figure (Scarlett) begins to walk toward Bethany slowly paced. Bethany turns to face the character.
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Bethany
Okay, now your freaking me out
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Door pushes fully open, revealing a masked figure in the doorway. The figure (Scarlett) begins to walk toward Bethany slowly paced.
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Bethany
Hello! Currently occupied in here.
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Will grabs the handrail and slowly descends into the basement, Amy follows keeping steps behind Will.
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wILL
Pat!
(his tone changes)
Patrick?
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Amy
Patrick?!
(pauses)
Pat, stop messing around.
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Amy
Patrick?! pauses)Pat, stop messing around.
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Amy
Patrick?!
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Will and Amy run to the stairwell to figure out the commotion. They stand at the top of the stairs looking down at Patricks, twisted body. They believe he has fallen and stand in shock, they can't tell if he is okay.
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Bethany is sat on the toilet, refreshing her lipstick. She hears the noise, but pushes the door shut, dismissing the seriousness of it.
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The fall of Patrick is heard throughout the house, startling the group.
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Int Basement, Bathroom
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Amy takes a swig and passes the bottle to Will, she leans her head on his shoulder.
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Amy
Id be surprised if this place had toilet left, let alone a working toilet.
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Bethany leaves the room, clinging onto the door frame to keep her balance. Amy reaches for the vodka and begins to unscrew the bottle.
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Bethany
(sharp and angered)
Will, I'm going for a piss, if thats okay with you.
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wILL
Beth, just leave it, I'm sure pat
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