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drw13 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/31/2008. drw13 made 28 other changes.
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Sayid
Wait, I can sense the presence of something....
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Julius
No, this kind of power is that of a god. Athena must be awaiting us in the temple.
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Alec
(astonished)
The Temple alone has that kind of power?
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Sayid
Wait I can sense the presence of something....
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Julius
Quickly before they are sucked in and gone forever!
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Julius
(to everyone)
You must be more aware of your surroundings, open not only your eyes but all of your senses if you wish to survive long enough to see your families again.
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Alec and his men silently follow Julius towards their goal. The men are visibly shaken and must struggle to keep themselves from trembling while holding onto the hilts of their swords.
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A tingle of fear rides up Alec's spine. A gust of wind blows through the darkened trees. In place of the usual rustle of leaves, was a high pitch roar. Alec glances up at the trees just in time to see the red demonic eyes glowing above them inside the collection of leaves. With no time to react, the demon's burst out from the trees onto the unsuspecting men below.
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Alec
Everyone be prepared to draw your weapons at any moment. There will surely be just as many surprises here as there was out there.
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A pillar of flames bursts from the ground. This was no ordinary flame though, it gave off no heat except to those caught inside it. It was as if it saved all of its energy to incinerate whomever was unlucky enough to be where it spawned. Alec can do nothing but watch as three of his men are quickly reduced to ash. The men are swallowed by the flame so quickly that they did not even have time to scream.
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EXT. Barren Wastelands, Halfway to AthensNight
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Alec and the rest of the men are swiftly able to grab onto the sinking men and save all but two. One was sucked into the abyss and another was pulled in trying to save him.
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Alec
(worried)
Hurry grab onto them! Pull them out!
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As the men walk forward a group of them are quickly sucked into the ground by some sort of hellish sinkhole.
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A tingle of fear rides up Alec's spine. A gust of wind blows through the darkened trees. In place of the usual rustle of leaves, was a high pitch roar. Alec glances up at the trees just in time to see the red demonic eyes glowing inside the collection of leaves. With no time to react, the demon's drop from the trees onto the unsuspecting men below.
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About halfway to Athens their first surprise came to light. A pillar of flames bursts from the ground. This was no ordinary flame though, it gave off no heat except to those caught inside it. It was as if it saved all of its energy to incinerate whomever was unlucky enough to be where it spawned. Alec can do nothing but watch as three of his men are quickly reduced to ash. The men are swallowed by the flame so quickly that they did not even have time to scream.
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None of the men can muster words at what they see. Acheron had burned down just about every building and built houses of fire and volcanic rock in their place. Screams of terror were all that could be heard emanating from most buildings especially a large prison like structure that looked like a bastard child of Greek and Underworld design. The lone beacon of sanity is a building that sits atop a hill in the center of town, the Temple of Athena. It is the lone object unspoiled by the spawn of Hades.
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Alec and his men silently follow Julius towards their goal.
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Alec
It is quite strange indeed....wait I can sense the presence of something....
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Julius
It is the presence of Athena's Temple. It prevents Acheron from fully converting the land, it is by her presence alone that the trees still grow.
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Alec
(whispering)
Yes, it is quiet odd. But the feeling here is much different. Even the landscape is not the same, the trees have leaves and the ash is not nearly as thick.
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Sayid
(whispering)
Something is not right, where are all the demons? We have been traveling for hours and yet to have seen a single one. Surely they know of this dagger, but there appears to be no one around to defend it.
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Alec and his men silently followed Julius towards their goal.
drw13 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/31/2008 [view]
Julius
(silently)
We must hurry, there is a cave at the backside of the hill that will lead up inside the temple, that should provide the least amount of trouble.
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None of the men could muster words at what they saw. Acheron had burned down just about every building and built houses of fire and volcanic rock in their place. Screams of terror was all that could be heard emanating from most buildings especially a large prison like structure that looked like a bastard child of Greek and Underworld design. The lone beacon of sanity was a building that sat atop a hill in the center of town, the Temple of Athena. It was the lone object unspoiled by the spawn of Hades.
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EXT. Athens Greece in RuinsNight
drw13 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 08/31/2008 [view]
Julius
(to everyone)
You must be more aware of your surroundings, open not only your eyes but all of your senses if you wish to live.
drw13 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 08/31/2008 [view]
About halfway to Athens their first surprise came to light. A pillar of flame burst from the ground. This was no ordinary flame though, it gave off no heat except to those caught inside it. It was as if it saved all of its energy to incinerate whomever was unlucky enough to be where it spawned. Alec could do nothing but watch as three of his men were quickly reduced to ash. The men were swallowed by the flame so quickly that they did not even have time to scream.
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