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DOCUMENTARY ABOUT SCHOOL-WIDE SCHOOL PROBLEM'S

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filmmaking101 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/08/2009. filmmaking101 made 6 other changes. more
Domonique: Education is the criteria that the children need to meet. The quality of education will suffer and so will the society with the overcrowded situation. The first problem is that teachers are unable to help individual student's those who need extra help. It will be hard to get the classroom to be quiet with so many students. This leaves no time for individual attention to explain assignments or answers questions.
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INT. [students walking to their next class in the hallway and see how pack the hallway can get in passing periods title appears then domonique appears and start narration. Alfredo is the camera guy in every scene]
filmmaking101 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 10/05/2009. filmmaking101 made 1 other comment and 19 other changes. more
Domonique: Quality education means education that meets the need of children as well as an education that can compete both here and abroad. In overcrowded situations the quality of educations suffers and in turn everyone suffers in society. The first problem identified was that teachers are unable to help individual student's those who need extra help in gaining or maintaining their discussion's. Teachers aides are not always available and sometimes students even have to share text books. It can take the entire class time for students to find seats. This leaves no time for individual attention to explain assignments or answers questions. Stated an article "Slipping through the Cracks: The problem of overcrowding in schools" by Toni Doswell ***who is Toni Doswell why are using her words?***
filmmaking101 edited an action in "last scene" on 10/01/2009. filmmaking101 made 11 other changes. more
Domonique: So far we don't know how long this problem will last but the students and teachers will have to deal with this and have to make it throughout the school year. Overcrowded classrooms means that there will be less school supplies for the students and will be more work on the teachers to deal because students that need more attention will be getting less attention instead and may end up failing the class subject. Classrooms could be so pack that students may not be able to take the subject that are required to graduate and may have to wait a school year to get the class they need or either take it at a community college or go to adult school.
filmmaking101 edited an action in "9th scene- the last group of students being interviewed--*" on 09/29/2009. filmmaking101 made 19 other changes. more
Keely:Since you are a senior do you think you are capable of dealing with this classrooms crisis?
 

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