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JllX edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Narrator
The bitch that I was talking to on the phone? Yeah, she doesn't love me. About 7 months ago i found out she was cheating on me. Pshh, stupid hoe right? And now that bitch wants me back. The audacity! She can see that all these girls are on my sack and so she wants to come strolling back to get some D. Well guess what? She ain't getting any.
JllX edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Narrator
I'm Dev. I go to college. I get good grades. I'm an asshole. I like to drink and even though it may not seem like it, bitches love me. Yeah,
(laughs)
they fucking love me.
JllX edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Dev
What the fuck do you want? I told you to stop calling me.
(pause)
What makes you think I'm gonna pick up on the 7th time?
(pause)
Yeah well i picked up this time to tell you that i'm not gonna pick up.
(pause)
After this.
(pause)
We're broken up! We've been broken up! For 6 fucking months now. Look, I'm over everything. I'm over your shit. I'm over the drama. Over those fantastic blowjobs. Over those...voluptuous breasts. Over...over that tremendous ass. OVER THEM! FUUUUUCK!
JllX edited in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
JllX edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Dev
What the fuck do you want? I told you to stop calling me.
(pause)
What makes you think I'm gonna pick up on the 7th time?
(pause)
Yeah well i picked up this time to tell you that i'm not gonna pick up.
(pause)
After this.
(pause)
We're broken up! We've been broken up! For 6 fucking months now. I'm over everything. I'm over your shit. I'm over the drama. I'm over your sexy body. Over those voluptuous breasts. Over that tremendous ass. OVER THEM! FUCK!
JllX added dialogue in "This is your first scene." two years ago [view]
Dev