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albatross88 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 03/05/2014. albatross88 made 80 other changes.
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Kid
Gee thanks mister, you're a lifesaver.
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Detective
Here kid, have a box of
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Detective gives a child a box of donuts.
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Detective (Voiceover)
And that was the end of that. I solved my case as usual, and restored the basis of human society. Americans lived once again - until they died from heart failure from eating all the donuts.
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Men take away many boxes of donuts.
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INT. Outside of car.
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Detective
That's what you deserve for taking away every man's basic right to donuts. This one was for the people.
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Detective wounds Wang Lee, wins.
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Small gunfight.
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Wang tries to make a run for it. Detective pursues.
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Wang tries to make a run for it.
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Detective (Voiceover)
He thought he could get away... Ha!
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Car chase ensues.
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Only Detective and Wang Lee remain.
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Detective
Nice try buddy, I need you and the stock.
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Wang Lee
If you let me go, I'll leave you my whole stock of the Gods' food.
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Shoot-out ensues.
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Hucks Donut at the bad guys
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Detective
Dear bad guys, time to meet you baker!
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INT. Bites donut, Becomes ready for battle, Draws Pistol.
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INT. Bites donut, Becomes ready for battle.
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Detective
Powers of the Almighty Donut, I summon thee!
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Detective breaks free of henchmen.
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Henchmen remove a dozen donuts from the car. Use the donuts as a form of torture.
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Wang Lee
That's right, it works - Every. Single. Time.
(Evil Laugh.)
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Henchmen remove a dozen donuts from the car. Use the donuts as torture.
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Detective
The method... NO.
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Wang Lee
Get him to talk. Tell us what you know.
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Wang Lee
Yes, tis I, the so-called "Donut Bandit."
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Detective (VOiceover)
Just when I thought it would all be over, the real fun began.
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Detective
I knew it was you, you son of a gun.
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Wang Lee
Get him out.
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Ext. Parking Lot, Car Trunk
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INT. Car Trunk
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Wang Lee
Go cuff the fool. Take him to the trunk.
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INT. Dark Prison Cell or Car Trunk.
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Wang Lee
Go cuff the fool. Take him to the cell.
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Detective
(Groans.)
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Bomb explodes, car erupts into flames
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Moves toward car.
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Detective
I believe this shall all end soon.
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Detective
Blast! Only a dozen... We must persevere, this surely can't be all.
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INT. Office - Next Day
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Detective
Blast! Only a dozen... We must continue. This surely can't be it.
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INT. Finds a dozen donuts
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Detective
Just as I suspected
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INT. Drives to Wang Lee's Past Hideout location
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Detective
We must check his old hideout.
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EXT. Parking Lot - Day
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Wang Lee
Someone is getting too nosy. Send him a message and make an example of this fool.
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