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randemiss93 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011. randemiss93 made 24 other changes.
randemiss93 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
Brittany
No problem, just hurry up, because if you don't dinner will be cold!
randemiss93 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
ashley
Thanks for letting me move with you guys!
randemiss93 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
Brittany
Have fun kids!! Dinner will be ready when you get back.
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They packed up the truck, grabbed some empty boxes and tape, then they were on their way out the door.
randemiss93 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
Benny
Okay, it shouldn't take long for us just to pack up some clothes.
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Brittany
No problem, have fun kids!!
randemiss93 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
Brittany
No problem, have fun kids!!
randemiss93 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
Brittany
All I need you to do is put these boxes into the truck. Try to puzzle all of them in because I wanna be able to take as less trips to our new house as possible. After that you can go help her out.
randemiss93 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
ashley
Thanks for letting me move with you guys!!
randemiss93 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
Benny
Okay, thank you. It shouldn't take that long, because we only need to pack up her clothes.
randemiss93 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
Benny
Hey Mom, Ashley never had time to pack so we're going to go do that now. Do you need anything before we leave?
randemiss93 added an action in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
They finish the last part as Benny's mom comes in with the packing tape.
randemiss93 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
Benny
Sure, we just have to finish this room and then we can go.
randemiss93 added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
ashley
Oh yeah, my bad, I'm sorry. I was doing a lot of things this week that I forgot to pack up. Will you help me?
randemiss93 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
As she leaves his girlfriend, ASHLEY, enters the room.
randemiss93 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
BENNY trips over boxes, tries to get up, and trips over more of them.
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randemiss93 added a transition in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
randemiss93 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
As she leaves his girlfriend, Ashley, enters the room.
randemiss93 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
He then makes a walkway through the boxes from door to door.
randemiss93 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
Benny
God dang it, these boxes need to get moved right now!!! This is a fire hazard!!
randemiss93 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
Benny trips over boxes, tries to get up, and trips over more of them.
randemiss93 edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
Boxes were being stacked on top of other boxes.
randemiss93 edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/20/2011 [view]
benny
No we are moving, silly! Don't you remember the conversation we had on the phone last week? We talked for hours that day. You even said that you would help and wanted to move with us, and we said sure.
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