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EXT.GRAVE YARD - MORNING Last edited by roujan02, on 07/24/2011. 0 comments. More scene info.

EXT. GRAVE YARD — MORNING

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Red rat theme songs play “in the jungle

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A tree is seen, leafs not moving an inch. Then surrounding it appears to be multiple tombstones and graves covered in bushes and bugs revealing the ambiance of a grave yard. Then we see kadeem a poor rugged boy lying on one of the grave stone appear to be dead (zoom in shot to kadeems faces) (Song fades and ends) Then shockingly! We see kadeems eyes open suddenly and his finger wiping the dirt out his eyes. (Wide shot of kadeem) kedeem sits up and shakes it off and stretches and position himself to a siting position at the side of the grave and begins to show depression and tired of this living in his body language.

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KADEEM Father God… is only you know how much I am tired of waking up into such life style. Only you can understand…

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EXT. GRAVE YARD — DAY-CONTINUOUS

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FADE IN:(Wide shot) We see kadeem goes to collect some water in a bucket and then is seen picking up his tooth brush and tooth paste and cloth in a black plastic bag stash some were in near bushes/ or climbs a tree. (Close up shots of brushing teeth and washing face with red soap) he starts by brushing his teeth in the bucket of water then afterwards washes his face then reveals the neatly folded cloth out of the plastic bag and puts it on (Kadeem walks from behind the camera) Very calm and slow in his walk He walks off out of the grave yard

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EXT. INTERSECTION OF EASTWOOD PARK ROAD & HAGLEY PARK ROAD

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Car are seen driving swiftly from the command of the traffic light. Car engine and everything there of and surrounding echo’s in the air.

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We see kadeem approaching the stop light (kadeem walk from behind the camera with stop light in focus) with his washing tools/or goods organizing everything together. Suddenly kadeem hears a boasy! Loud character calling him he looks up surprised with confusion the realize who it is and smile’s and shake his head

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CHRIS Kadeem!! Kadeem!! Yo wah gwan!! Good morning sir how you doing sar look like seh yuh ready fi mek all a di money! Mine yuh nuh youth

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FADE IN:

(Red rat song intros)We see in and out shots of this character (heart beat in audio) from his stylish name brand slippers to his nice but rugged pants, with a neat wife beater and kerchief around his neck. Skin clean as if he just got out the shower, walking with a nice side way swag walk (shot in slow motion) then unexpectedly we see clips of a very hairy mustache growing over his lips, a beard with sections of it twisted as if someone use their hands and started to twist in a circular motion to get this effect and a very hairy jaw sections of hair twisted as well. Still not revealing who this person is we see pedestrians walking having a disgrace disgusted look in their face because of this

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XT. INTERSECTION OF EASTWOOD PARK ROAD & HAGLEY PARK ROAD — CONTINUOUS:

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We see chris (revealing his self to the viewer’s) greeting kadeem in a jovial manner but kadeem shows sign of resentment because of the poor work in his response and begin to talk about how he needs a change

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CHRIS What’s up bro you good. Glad to see you bro

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KADEEM Yea mon..Done know the routine here about to start this slavery work

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CHRIS that’s not the way to put it bro just stay strong one day we must come out of this bro one day KADEEM Bro this life style is not for us! We have good hearts we deserve better! CHRIS kadeem… ..There is the story my mother told me one time and every time I think about it puts my mind and soul at ease and now it will for you

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THEN SUDENLY!!! they are approach by two men with ratchet knifes appear to be robbers and the response from kadeem and Chris is an aggressive one, only to realize it’s their friend Morris and rage joking around and one responds with laughter and the other with a no nonsense response

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KADEEM YO!! MI NUH RUN DEM GAME DEH! NUH RAMP WID MI DEM WAY DEH EVA! CHRIS haha!! Yo unuh nuh easy yu nuh jah know star!

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MORRIS Just cool mon yuh nuh si seh a joke wi a joke jus sekkle yuh selk my youth RAGE joke wi a joke jus cool mon

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MORRIS How kadeem a move suh! Like him a girl!! Weh yuh seh yuh menstruate cycle is in EFFECT!!

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Everyone begins to laugh and we see kadeem lightening up and is more calm and friendly. THEN Morris bursts out saying

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” MORRIS YO!! RED!! Everyone imitated a poor and sad suffering facial expression

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MORRIS GREEN! Everyone gets back to their jovial state

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MORRIS Weh yuh seh!! Another day under the…. ALL TOGETHER ”RED AMBER AND GREEN”

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EXT. INTERSECTION OF EASTWOOD PARK ROAD & HAGLEY PARK ROAD — DAY

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The light is on red and we see each individual differently hustling hard to make sales (Birds view)

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For some reason rage dancing and there isn’t any music playing everyone looks in confusion

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MORRIS Everyday dis boy come a road and a dancy dancy like him a fool and nuh have no sense..mi feel seh something really do dis boy yuh nuh like is a mad house ina fi him head. Yo kadeem yuh nuh feel seh a time wi tie him up and bring him down a ward 21. Nuh tru chris?

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Everyone laughs BUT then suddenly we see rage swift move attracts a pedestrian and is tip exactly 1k we see confusion on the other faces.

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EXT. LIGHT

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FADE IN:

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EXT.CONTINUOUS Last edited by roujan02, on 07/24/2011. 0 comments. More scene info.

EXT. CONTINUOUS

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Kadeems is at the light waiting and anticipating a female driver as she pulls up. From what he observe from Chris’s smooth flirting approach he goes to give it a try and fails miserably and is disrespected

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Morris the trouble maker sees this a begins to laugh and says

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MORRIS Kadeem it really looks like it’s your time of the month fi tru lol!!! is weh really a gwan is a grand day or sumtn. how some people in and out a luck suh! No sah mi have fi get mines cho!

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EXT. LIGHT

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Morris enters the streets with determination and begins to utter some swift lyrics MORRIS ina di strees ina di streets wi have fi hustle fi di coin cause we na retreat ina di streets ina di streets wi neva promote wrong wi just wa ends meet

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EXT. WALK

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Morris is then surprisingly tip a 1k and walk over to the crew and begins to show off in his steps

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RAGE lol!suh ya gwan morris yuh nuh easy yuh nuh

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MORRIS kmt…..my youth a simple that. that a di least dem ting deh happens regular

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Every one burst out in laughter

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RAGE Bwy kadeem mi nuh know weh fi seh yuh nuh youth cause it look like ya di only one without a talent star

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KADEEM NUUH WORRY YUH SE

We see the cars driving off in the back ground from the command of the light. Rage snaps out of the laughter and alerts the crew RAGE YO!! LIGHT DEH PON RED

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We see everyone gets alerted as well and funnily everyone makes a quick facial change from the laughing state that they were in to an instant begging sad state in their faces. (Birds view shot of all four working at the light and fades away into the sky

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EXT. YARD — EVENING

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FADE IN:

(Wide shot intro from the sky to the boys) we see the four sitting surround a grave (close up shot of four) counting coins they made from the days hustle. Then we see rage slams his 1k then Chris slams his 1k and morris does the same all in a dominoes effect. They all look and Kadeem with a smirk on all their faces and in return we see Kadeem looking down as if he is very sad and disappointed. The SHOCKINGLY he pulls out 1k and slams it on the grave surface and laughs! (Replay a shot of him bending down picking up a 1k he found)

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KADEEM HOLD THAT!

EVERYONE yo!!!YO!!YO!!

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Everyone is startled with total shock written all over their faces

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MORRIS No no no no no something is wrong no man! You know seh mi feel seh a rob ya rob di innocent people dem from weh day ya yo!

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KADEEM nothing like dat mon you know she none a we roll suh under the “RED AMBER AND GREEN” all jokes aside thos mi nuh know still but mi just si di gran pon di floor and draw fi it still……..

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RAGE All jokes aside this is the most we ever made in one day all together one time….

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Everyone begins to realize what just really took place and is in an emotional state

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RAGE and bro’s we made a promise a promise that we will never brake once this day arises

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MORRIS Please don’t REMIND! Me

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EXT. ON THE STREET — EVENING

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FADE IN:

(Intro shot of the busy streets to behind the boys walking) here we see all friends walking with black scandal bags in each other hand not seeing what’s inside. (In and out shots) of friends approaching different stop light In the area greeting and conversing with the homeless and presenting them with a box food lunch and a drink out of the same black bag. Revealing to the viewers there promise.

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EXT. ISLAND GRILL RESTAURANT — EVENING

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FADE OUT:

(Intro shot of the island grill restaurant in focus with the friend walking in from behind the camera into focus looking up at the restaurant to begin dialog position) (Switch to mini wide shot in front of friends) The four friends arrive at their favorite restaurant excited to buy their days lunch and suddenly remembers there is a slight issue stopping them.MORRIS unuh nuh badda gwan like seh wi can walk ina dat FREELY! You know how dem people deh love gwan like them betta than people bout –wi no dutty bwy ina store- if I eva tell dem wich part a dem dutty yuh si!

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RAGE jus easy nuh mek it move yuh bredda

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Kadeem shakes his head in disgrace and embarrassment

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CHRIS tru ting morrris nuh mek it get to yuh

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MORRIS Mi nuh like when people love gwan like she dem wa diss MAN!!But hear WAH!! Is a basement dinna mi want ina di day ya so WHITE MAN

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Everyone looks at Chris. Chris looks behind him to see who he is talking and what everyone’s looking at

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MORRIS You more fi get threw more than we Soooo don’t gi wi no talk and go sort out wi food and mek sure it delivered on a pirates dish!

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Everyone laughs and agrees and pushes chris to walk off and says

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CHRISunu a tek liberty a man kmt! Cho!

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EXT.OUTSIDE ISLAND GRILLS SIDE WALK - EVENING Last edited by roujan02, on 07/24/2011. 0 comments. More scene info.

EXT. OUTSIDE ISLAND GRILLS SIDE WALK — EVENING

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FADE IN:

(intro wide shot of the four sitting on the side walk) four friends are seat on the side walk with their brand island grill boxes digging hard! (Camera dolly’s to each friend eating very hungrily stops at chris and kadeem for dialog)CHRIS yo kadeem

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KADEEM yea wa gwan

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CHRIS You remember the story I was to tell you that my mother told me

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KADEEM Yea u did a tell mi but you neva finish cause a dem iglas

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CHRIS lol yea..but as me did seh mi feel a di right time fi share this with you since kina a doubt the “RED AMBER AND GREEN” lifestyle still

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KADEEM Owoah mi a hear yuh still mi a listen

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CHRIS ight kool.. One day a rich dad took his son on a trip. He wanted to show him how poor someone can be. They spent time on the farm of a poor family. On di way home, father asked, did u see how poor they are? What did u learn? Son said... We have one dog, they have four. We have a pool they have a river. We have lanterns at night, they have stars. We buy food they grow theirs. We have walls to protect us, they have FRIENDS…..

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Quiet moment

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CHRIS Chris-And bro we have each other no matter what life throws at us we still manage to survive and even share among us and everyone around us

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So bro no matter what jus know seh GOD!!... FATHER GODABOVE A HIM A GUID WI

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