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EXT.GRAVE YARD - MORNING Last edited by roujan02, on 07/24/2011. 0 comments. More scene info.

EXT. GRAVE YARD — MORNING

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Red rat theme songs play “in the jungle

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A tree is seen, leafs not moving an inch. Then surrounding it appears to be multiple tombstones and graves covered in bushes and bugs revealing the ambiance of a grave yard. Then we see kadeem a poor rugged boy lying on one of the grave stone appear to be dead (zoom in shot to kadeems faces) (Song fades and ends) Then shockingly! We see kadeems eyes open suddenly and his finger wiping the dirt out his eyes. (Wide shot of kadeem) kedeem sits up and shakes it off and stretches and position himself to a siting position at the side of the grave and begins to show depression and tired of this living in his body language.

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KADEEM Father God… is only you know how much I am tired of waking up into such life style. Only you can understand…

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EXT. GRAVE YARD — DAY-CONTINUOUS

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FADE IN:(Wide shot) We see kadeem goes to collect some water in a bucket and then is seen picking up his tooth brush and tooth paste and cloth in a black plastic bag stash some were in near bushes/ or climbs a tree. (Close up shots of brushing teeth and washing face with red soap) he starts by brushing his teeth in the bucket of water then afterwards washes his face then reveals the neatly folded cloth out of the plastic bag and puts it on (Kadeem walks from behind the camera) Very calm and slow in his walk He walks off out of the grave yard

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EXT. INTERSECTION OF EASTWOOD PARK ROAD & HAGLEY PARK ROAD

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Car are seen driving swiftly from the command of the traffic light. Car engine and everything there of and surrounding echo’s in the air.

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We see kadeem approaching the stop light (kadeem walk from behind the camera with stop light in focus) with his washing tools/or goods organizing everything together. Suddenly kadeem hears a boasy! Loud character calling him he looks up surprised with confusion the realize who it is and smile’s and shake his head

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CHRIS Kadeem!! Kadeem!! Yo wah gwan!! Good morning sir how you doing sar look like seh yuh ready fi mek all a di money! Mine yuh nuh youth

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FADE IN:

(Red rat song intros)We see in and out shots of this character (heart beat in audio) from his stylish name brand slippers to his nice but rugged pants, with a neat wife beater and kerchief around his neck. Skin clean as if he just got out the shower, walking with a nice side way swag walk (shot in slow motion) then unexpectedly we see clips of a very hairy mustache growing over his lips, a beard with sections of it twisted as if someone use their hands and started to twist in a circular motion to get this effect and a very hairy jaw sections of hair twisted as well. Still not revealing who this person is we see pedestrians walking having a disgrace disgusted look in their face because of this

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XT. INTERSECTION OF EASTWOOD PARK ROAD & HAGLEY PARK ROAD — CONTINUOUS:

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We see chris (revealing his self to the viewer’s) greeting kadeem in a jovial manner but kadeem shows sign of resentment because of the poor work in his response and begin to talk about how he needs a change

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CHRIS What’s up bro you good. Glad to see you bro

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KADEEM Yea mon..Done know the routine here about to start this slavery work

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CHRIS that’s not the way to put it bro just stay strong one day we must come out of this bro one day KADEEM Bro this life style is not for us! We have good hearts we deserve better! CHRIS kadeem… ..There is the story my mother told me one time and every time I think about it puts my mind and soul at ease and now it will for you

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THEN SUDENLY!!! they are approach by two men with ratchet knifes appear to be robbers and the response from kadeem and Chris is an aggressive one, only to realize it’s their friend Morris and rage joking around and one responds with laughter and the other with a no nonsense response

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KADEEM YO!! MI NUH RUN DEM GAME DEH! NUH RAMP WID MI DEM WAY DEH EVA! CHRIS haha!! Yo unuh nuh easy yu nuh jah know star!

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MORRIS Just cool mon yuh nuh si seh a joke wi a joke jus sekkle yuh selk my youth RAGE joke wi a joke jus cool mon

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MORRIS How kadeem a move suh! Like him a girl!! Weh yuh seh yuh menstruate cycle is in EFFECT!!

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Everyone begins to laugh and we see kadeem lightening up and is more calm and friendly. THEN Morris bursts out saying

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” MORRIS YO!! RED!! Everyone imitated a poor and sad suffering facial expression

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MORRIS GREEN! Everyone gets back to their jovial state

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MORRIS Weh yuh seh!! Another day under the…. ALL TOGETHER ”RED AMBER AND GREEN”

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EXT. INTERSECTION OF EASTWOOD PARK ROAD & HAGLEY PARK ROAD — DAY

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The light is on red and we see each individual differently hustling hard to make sales (Birds view)

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For some reason rage dancing and there isn’t any music playing everyone looks in confusion

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MORRIS Everyday dis boy come a road and a dancy dancy like him a fool and nuh have no sense..mi feel seh something really do dis boy yuh nuh like is a mad house ina fi him head. Yo kadeem yuh nuh feel seh a time wi tie him up and bring him down a ward 21. Nuh tru chris?

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Everyone laughs BUT then suddenly we see rage swift move attracts a pedestrian and is tip exactly 1k we see confusion on the other faces.

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EXT. LIGHT

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FADE IN:

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