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JamieJagerman added an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/11/2009. JamieJagerman made 39 other changes.
JamieJagerman added an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/11/2009 [view]
Oscar gets out of the car and locks the doors. Gail stands alone in the parking lot, jaw dropped and still holding the card. As Oscar walks, he smiles widely as Gail walks back inside.
JamieJagerman added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/11/2009 [view]
OSCAR
Cause I'm walking.
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Oscar lets his head drop, looking down at his feet. He shakes his head, eyes closed and runs his fingers through his short black hair.
JamieJagerman added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/11/2009 [view]
GAIL
Here ya' go! Oh
(beat)
your car isn't starting? That's a shame! Well, while your waiting for AAA why don't you come back inside?
JamieJagerman added an action in "This is your first scene." on 02/11/2009 [view]
Oscar goes to grab his phone and realizes that Gail is still standing there, her hand extended with a small white card between her index and middle finger.
JamieJagerman added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/11/2009 [view]
OSCAR
Darn it! My old piece of junk won't start! This is when AAA comes in handy I suppose.
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Oscar climbs into his car and slams the door shut. He fumbles for his keys, shaking as he moves. Gail reaches into her purse, frusterated by its clutteredness. Oscar shoves the key into the ignition and turns the key. The car doesn't start. He turns it again. It is idle.
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OSCAR
Uhm, I don't have time I'm terribly sorry.
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GAIL
Here, let me give you my number!
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OSCAR
Goodnight Gail.
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Gail grabs his arm as he goes to grab his car door. Oscar pivots on his heels and takes her hand off of him. He shakes his head quickly.
JamieJagerman added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/11/2009 [view]
OSCAR
Well Gail, listen, my mother is waiting and I really have to go so...
JamieJagerman added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/11/2009 [view]
GAIL
Oscar wait! Please wait! I want to talk to you!
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Oscar quickly strides out of the dinner theater and into the filled parking lot, his breath clear to see in the cold night air. Gail, following closely behind, tries her best to keep up with him in her red high heels.
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EXT. PARKING LOTNIGHT
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GAIL(WHISPER)
Oscar! Wait!
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Oscar shakes her off and begins walking out of the theather without a word.
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She tugs Oscar back into the seat as she sits down. Grabbing his hand, she holds it and smiles at him. Oscar gives her a half crooked smile as the lights dim and the show begins. Characters up on stage begin speaking and Gail rests her head on Oscar's shoulder.
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GAIL
But the show is about to start silly! Text your mom! You do have texting right? I mean, I couldn't imagine living without my texting! It's so much easier than actually having to call someone and dealing with static and actually talking to them on the phone and having the ear piece get your ear all sweaty!? So much easier to text. Just text her! Here, sit down!
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Gail gets up out of her seat in a hurry, sticking right by Oscar's side. She smiles and loops her arm in with his. Smiling wide, she chuckles at him.
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OSCAR
Look, Gail, your really nice, but I have to go. My mother is waiting for me and
(beat)
you know how mothers are right?
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Oscar nods and smiles, scooting away from Gail and up out of the booth. He shoves his hands in his pockets and taps his toe. Looking around the room, he shows a slight look of panic on his face.
JamieJagerman added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/11/2009 [view]
GAIL
Oh, mothers! You know how they can be right? Terrible. But you have to love them. I mean, they dealt with raising us! I mean really! I have to give my mother props on raising me. Apparently, when I was little, I was quite the handfull! Oh goodness the good old days. Like high school! Those were the real good old days! I loved highschool. Didn't you Oscar? I thought it was amazing. Best four years of my life. So much fun. What do you think?
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OSCAR
You know what Gail? I have to head out right now. My,
(beat)
mother is in town and I dont want to leave her all by herself for too long so...
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Gail giggles and scoots closer to Oscar. Oscar smiles sheepishly, trying to be as friendly as possible.
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OSCAR
Yeah.
(beat)
Whack jobs.
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Oscar stares at Gail, eyes wide and jaw hanging open.
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GAIL
Well I don't know. My friends told me it was a fabulous show, and pretty good food. So I figured why not? You know what I mean? But ya' know you can't always take advice from your friends. My friends can be total whack jobs sometimes. Total nuts! But you know how that is right? Friends can be so crazy! But you have to love them, their always there for me. You know?
JamieJagerman added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/11/2009 [view]
OSCAR
So tell me Gail, what is such a pretty girl like you doing at a dinner theater like this?
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Gail chuckles to herself, looking around happily. Oscar looks at her and licks his lips. As she turns around, he grins widely at her.
JamieJagerman added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/11/2009 [view]
OSCAR
Ahh, Gail. What a pretty name for a beautiful lady like yourself. The name's Oscar.
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Gail bats her eyelashes flirtatiously and smiles at Oscar. Oscar puts his arm around Gail and smiles back.
JamieJagerman added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/11/2009 [view]
GAIL
Gail. Whats yours?
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OSCAR
Now what would you name be?
JamieJagerman added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 02/11/2009 [view]
GAIL
Hello yourself.
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Giggling to herself, Gail slides into Oscars booth and sits close to him.
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OSCAR
Well hello there.
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INT. Mc CALLS TAVELING DINNER THEATERNIGHT
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