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Rileyd edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010. Rileyd made 15 other changes.
Rileyd edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
Vince looks down at his ankle then back up at the vent as blood runs down his face from the wounds on his scalp. He sees many more pairs of silver eyes gleaming down at him. Then Vince watches as the creatures jump down at his feet and then race up his chest. He lets go of the beast that he is holding at arms length and then begins to hit the creature on him with his fists trying to free himself from them. One of the creatures is shown rushing up the side of his face and bites of a part of his ear. Then two creatures swarm his face and dig their sharp jagged teeth into his chin. He then attempts to scream but the pool of blood in his mouth is only heard, gargling. He then falls to the ground with a tremendous "thump" and then his eyes slowly close as the sounds of the beasts off screen are continuing to devourer his body.
Rileyd edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
The creature lands on Vince's face and its claws pierce his cheeks all the way through into his mouth. Vince gags. The next creature then flings itself from the vent on the wall and tears Vince's scalp with its fangs. Vince then falls backward into a shadow casted by the sink. He screams but the sound of his voice is muffled by the creature still attached to his face. He begins to gasp for air. He grabs the creature and attempts to pry it from his face. His hands slip at first on the creatures slimy flesh then he finally gets the creature off of his face. He stands up and then holds it at arms length and looks at it with fright and confusion. It begins to screech and hiss at him trying to free itself from his grasp.
Rileyd added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
Vince looks down at his ankle then back up at the vent as blood runs down his face from the wounds on his scalp. He sees many more pairs of silver eyes gleaming down at him. Then Vince watches as the creatures jump down and race up his chest.
Rileyd added a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
INT. int. bathroom - night
Rileyd added a transition in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
Rileyd added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
A creature is shown biting his left ankle.
Rileyd added a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
INT. int. bathroom (floor) - night
Rileyd added a transition in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
Rileyd added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
The creature lands on Vince's face and its claws pierce his cheeks all the way through into his mouth. Vince gags. The next creature then flings itself from the vent on the wall and tears Vince's scalp with its fangs. Vince then falls backward into a shadow casted by the sink. He screams but the sound of his voice is muffled by the creature still attached to his face. He begins to gasp for air. He grabs the creature and attempts to pry it from his face. His hands slip at first on the creatures slimy flesh then he finally gets the creature off of his face. He then holds it at arms length and looks at it with fright and confusion. It begins to screech and hiss at him trying to free itself from his grasp.
Rileyd added a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
INT. int bathroom - night
Rileyd added a transition in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
Rileyd added an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
The two creatures are shown looking down at Vince as he stars in fright back at them. One of the creatures jumps down at Vince striking him.
Rileyd added a slugline in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
INT. int. bathroom vent - night
Rileyd added a transition in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
Rileyd edited an action in "This is your first scene." on 11/11/2010 [view]
Vince is startled by the noise and looks around but does not see the vent cover laying on the floor. Loud noises continue from behind the door. Vince looks at the door and watches as the lock gets pushed out from the inside out and falls to the ground. He then rushes towards the door and slams himself into it in an attempt to keep it shut. But he realizes that the lock on the nob is still able to keep the door shut. With shaking hands he reaches at the door hinges to make sure that they are still intact. They are and then he backs away from the door back into the center of the bathroom. He then looks up at the vent on the wall and sees two pairs of silver eyes.
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