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FelixVaunois edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago. more
the man
I went for a walk last night out over the hills. I went there cos
(beat)
Well Im not sure, but there I was.
(beat)
It was about the time of year when its too hot for a jersey yet too cold without it. Stuck in between.
(beat)
There were these boys. Drinking. Smoking. Throwing things. They were driving around in a little motorbike they had. Kinda made me smile. I feel a certain comfort eaves-dropping into peoples lives. A comfort that they're as lost as I am.
(beat)
Yet pretend to be found or find what they're looking for. And these boys seemed happy. maybe they have found it.
FelixVaunois added a shot in "This is your first scene." a year ago. more
FelixVaunois edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago. FelixVaunois made 2 other changes. more
the man
I went for a walk last night out over the hills. I went there cos
(beat)
Well Im not sure, but there I was.
(beat)
It was about the time of year when its too hot for a jersey yet too cold without it. Stuck in between.
(beat)
There were these boys. Drinking. Smoking. Throwing things. They were driving around in a little motorbike they had. Kinda made me smile. I feel a certain comfort ease dropping into peoples lives. A comfort that they're as lost as I am.
(beat)
Yet pretend to be found or find what they're looking for.
FelixVaunois edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago. FelixVaunois made 4 other changes. more
the man
Why?
(beat)
Not because he didn't understand its value.
(beat)
Not because he was cold.
(beat)
But because it let off a nice light.
FelixVaunois edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." a year ago. FelixVaunois made 7 other changes. more
the man
Why? Not because he didn't understand its value.
(beat)
Not because he was cold.
(beat)
But because it let off a nice light.
 

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