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This is your first scene. Last edited by drewalrs, on 04/19/2011. 0 comments. More scene info.

int. Diner day

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JAMES and FUHRER walk in front doors of an empty diner, flanked by two thugs. At the front of the store, an asian clerk and his wife look on, frightened.

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FUHRER

Service!Mr Kam, stop frying them rats and get your dirty yellow can out here.

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MR. KAM comes out from around counter and smiles nervously at Fuhrer.

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FUHRER (CONT'D)

James, get the VHS tapes.

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JAMES runs behind counter and gets tape

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james

I got the tape boss. What now?

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FUHRER

Don't leave them behind. (To KAM) Why the sour face? Wheres my money?

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Kam

How can I get your money when you drive away all my customers. Thugs coming and going from my shop is no good for business.

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FUHRER

You owe me three weeks. Thats seven hundred, nicker.

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Kam

No, four-fifty

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FUHRER

Price shoots up when you don't pay me, dumbass. Don't think Im going soft because a few of my men are behind bars, temporarily.

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Kam

I cant pay so much in winter. Business is no good.

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FUHRER

These old wooden buildings burn easily. Poof. Who else is home?

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Kam

Just my wife and the translator that you asked for.

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james

You two bitches get out here!

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From the kitchen KERRY and ALISON step into the dining area.

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FUHRER

(to Kam, regarding Kerry) Shes a bit young. You sure that shes up to the job?

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Thug 1

Why cant you do it?

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Kam

Yes, she can do it! And because, like I keep telling you, I was born in Exeter! And my bloody mother was from the Philippines, not China!

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FUHRER

(To James) Mess him up.

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JAMES goes up to KAM and violently dislocates his arm. Kam crumples to the floor, writhing in agony.

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FUHRER (CONT'D)

Up stairs boys, they should be here soon.

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Cut to:

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Ext. parking lot day

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Two Asian men get out of a fancy car. They go to the trunk and grab designer luggage. They enter the shop.

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FUHRER

Mr. Xu, come on up stairs. I trust your flight was pleasant and the traffic not too rough.

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MR. XU and FUHRER bro-hug and fist bump. No words are exchanged. Kerry approaches the two and bows to both men.

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Kerry

I am here to assist with any language difficulties. (repeat in Chinese) I am here to assist with any language difficulties.

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JAMES, FUHRER, KERRY, MR. XU, LIAM, and THUGS all go up stairs. Two tables are pushed together and on top of them are automatic weapons. At the other end of the room is a metal target box.

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liam

Beautiful. I know plenty of people who are willing to sell me guns, but only you can provide me with such fancy kit.

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FUHRER

No one else has our connections.

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liam

How hard is the ammunition to get ahold of?

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FUHRER

Would I sell you a gun that you cant shoot, Liam? These guns are used by the German army. Now Im not saying that they are as available as the standard nine mill, but anything German is avalible out there. Plus I will set you up with a thousand rounds per weapon just to get you rolling.

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Mr. Xu

(translated by KERRY) Excellent. If you would care to inspect the money, I ask you do so quickly as I would like to wrap up business as soon as possible.

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FUHRER

Naturally, this is on trust. would you care for your luggage back?

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Mr. Xu

(translated by KERRY) There will be no need, thank you. They are fakes, excellent ones at that. Perhaps your wife shall enjoy them as a gift.

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FUHRER

Most kind. (to LIAM) Here is the key and map to the storage locker. If you have any difficulties, please feel free to contact me.

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