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drewalrs added an action in "This is your first scene." on 04/19/2011. drewalrs made 36 other changes.
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INT. Ext. parking lot day
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FUHRER
Up stairs boys, they should be here soon.
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JAMES goes up to KAM and violently dislocates his arm. Kam crumples to the floor, writhing in agony.
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FUHRER
(To James)
Mess him up.
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Kam
Yes, she can do it! And because, like I keep telling you, I was born in Exeter! And my bloody mother was from the Philippines, not China!
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Thug 1
Why cant you do it?
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FUHRER
(to Kam, regarding Kerry)
Shes a bit young. You sure that shes up to the job? Why cant you do it, anyways?
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JAMES and FUHRER walk in front doors of an empty diner, flanked by two thugs. At the front of the store, an asian clerk and his wife look on, frightened.
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james
You two bitches get out here!
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Kam
Just my wife and the translator that you asked for.
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FUHRER
These old wooden buildings burn easily. Poof.
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Kam
I cant pay so much in winter. Business is no good.
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FUHRER
Price shoots up when you don't pay me, dumbass. Don't think Im going soft because a few of my men are behind bars, temporarily.
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Kam
No, four-fifty
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FUHRER
You owe me three weeks. Thats seven hundred, nicker.
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FUHRER
Don't leave them behind.
(To KAM)
Why the sour face? Wheres my money?
drewalrs added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/19/2011 [view]
Kam
How can I get your money when you drive away all my customers. Thugs coming and going from my shop is no good for business.
drewalrs added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 04/19/2011 [view]
FUHRER
Don't leave them behind.
(To KAM)
Wheres my money?
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james
I got the tape boss. What now?
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JAMES runs behind counter and gets tape
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FUHRER
James, get the VHS tapes.
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FUHRER
Service!Mr Kam, stop frying them rats and get your dirty yellow can out here.
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MR. KAM comes out from around counter and smiles nervously at Fuhrer.
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FUHRER
Service!Mr Kam, stop frying them rats and get your dirtyyellow can out here.
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FUHRER
Service!‘Mr Kam, stop frying them rats and get your dirty yellow can out here.’
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FUHRER
Service!
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JAMES and FUHRER walk in front doors of diner, flanked by several thugs. Some are carrying baseball bats and look menacing. At the front of the store, an asian clerk and his wife are frightened.
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JAMES and FUHRER walk in front doors
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INT. int. Diner day
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