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AndrewMetzger edited an action in "10th page" on 05/02/2009. AndrewMetzger made 24 other changes.
AndrewMetzger edited an action in "10th page" on 05/02/2009 [view]
Bill looks over at Hameen, and with one swift movement, aims and fires his gun, shooting Hameen in the leg. Blood spurts out and Hameen hunches down and grabs the wound, falling to the ground.
AndrewMetzger added an action in "10th page" on 05/02/2009 [view]
Bill looks over at Hameen, and with one swift movement, aims and fires his gun, shooting Hameen in the leg.
AndrewMetzger added dialogue in "10th page" on 05/02/2009 [view]
BILL
Clever boy.
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James is intercepted by the CLICK of a gun. He turns around. BILL is standing behind him, his gun pointed, his face bleeding, the blood coming from a large sliced wound on his cheek.
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James
They were trying to kill me! How was I -
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Hameen
I don't know, and I don't care my friend, but all I know is that my taxi was fine until you crawled in the backseat with the cast of the Godfather on your ass.
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James
I'm uh-what? But mister, how would I -
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Hameen
I don't know
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James
I'm uh-what? Sure, how would I -
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Hameen
- am gonna pay for the repairs to my car.
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James (cont'd)
I-uh-well-I
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Hameen bends down, picks up bumper.
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James
I'm-uh-I'm sorry Mister, I uh-
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HAMEEN
Oh no it's fine. I'll just have to figure out a way to react when I get fired.
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James looks down at his watch.
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INT. EXT. DAY - Alleyway
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INT. INT. DAY - Hameen's Car
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INT. EXT. DAY - H
AndrewMetzger edited an action in "10th page" on 05/02/2009 [view]
Hameen gets out to inspect the car. James slowly opens the car door. As he does, it hits the wall next to the car, causing the shattered window to break and fall off. Hameen looks at the back of the car. There are bullet holes all over the trunk, the window is gone, and his back tire is going flat.
AndrewMetzger inserted an action in "10th page" on 05/02/2009 [view]
He gets out to inspect it. James slowly opens the car door. As he does, it hits the wall next to the car, causing the shattered window to break and fall off. Hameen looks at the back of the car. There are bullet holes all over the trunk, the window is gone, and his back tire is going flat.
AndrewMetzger edited dialogue in "10th page" on 05/02/2009 [view]
HAMEEN
No.
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HAMEEN
Well it could be worse.
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Hameen
That'll teach them to fuck up my car.
AndrewMetzger edited an action in "10th page" on 05/02/2009 [view]
The bumper, which is also shot up, falls off.
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